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 Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 11:06 am
"Child's Innocent Disregard"
Drowning thier small lungs
Torching and tormenting
The queen has no children
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Posted: Sat Aug 20, 2005 4:42 pm
Man, haiku is so limited in terms or words but yet it has just enough word for the reader to get aa whole page full of detail.
The last line just sent a picture of the woman in power, not killing her biological children, but children in general. I liked that. 4laugh
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Posted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 12:19 pm
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Posted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 2:13 pm
I love haiku's... this one is awsome.... I love the imagry
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 3:50 pm
The things parenthood will drive a mother to... I really liked it! The imagery was very good, and even though it was so short, it was straight to the point. Good job!
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Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:40 pm
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 6:41 am
Thank you all for the comments they really are highly appreicated!!
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