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 Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:13 am
And she woke up from a dream
That was beautiful and stary and so wild
It was all still clear in her eyes
And through her mind was foggy
And blank she wondered why
Her life couldn't be as lovely it was time...
There was this king he had no castle or throne
But his horse is great and white
He rode alone and liked it that way
But when he met her he swore
He would never leave her side...
They rode across the land
Two lovers hand in hand
And no danger could come near
And when something made her cry
She'd look at him teary eyed
And he would make her feel better
Oh so much better, so much better than before
And now this forest was their home
It was the night time
And the right time
In the dark
She placed her hand upon his chest
And all the rest just flowed
Makin' love down under an ancient far away land...
It was so grand just holdin' someones hand
And safety came naturally
It was so clear that she would never
Ever have to fear
Oh tell me a story of magic and spiralling ships
And stars in the night
Just whisper in my ears
Make it soft but make it clear
I want to hear every breath you say
He placed his hand upon her breast
But she woke up from the land
Tears falling in her hands
As she looked up askin' why
She laid back in her bed
Thoughts raising in her head
Why can't my life be beautiful she said
And she closed her eyes again
Just prayin' he'd return
But only darness fell upon her...
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:24 am
crying
awww! damn you sethy lol
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:29 am
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Posted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 6:11 am
crying So, she is all alone... crying The sorrow is too much... talk2hand Just gimmie a minute.
crying It is a wonderful sad story...
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Posted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 5:54 am
meh. i hate being so honest. the topic is great and so is the idea. but the rimes are a lil off in a few places. try to tidy it up a lil bit more and ill be one wicked poem rolleyes
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