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Carana0
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:38 pm


K. I've started a new story. I hope it turns out alright. It's from the point of view of a teenage boy. If there are any Christians reading this, just know that when I talk about the cross necklace, I don't mean that I don't like Christianity or anything. It plays a big role later on in the story, but I had to start it off like this.
PostPosted: Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:39 pm


Chapter 1

It was dark out, but for the lurid glare of the fires. Smoke and ash clogged the air, but no living being would be near enough to smell it. Wooden buildings crumbled and the flames leapt higher with each passing second. The carcass of a dead man hung limply out of a broken doorstep. A trail of blood trickled from his head onto the dead earth. His eyes stared unseeingly at me as the delectable smell of his fresh blood tickled my nose. I walked forward, claws digging deep into the dead earth. I was upon him with the intention of devouring his remains…
I shook myself awake and looked around me. Mr. Morez was still lecturing in the front of the room. Some were listening intently, but many others were not even slightly interested in whatever he was saying. Nobody was paying attention to me, so I took a few moments to quiet my frantically beating heart.
I felt a pair of eyes on me. I turned my head and looked into Katelyn’s icy blue eyes. Her gaze traveled swiftly over my ruffled brown hair, earth brown eyes, freckled skin, and muscular frame hidden under a baggy blue shirt and jeans. Her lips twitched as her eyes passed over the beaded sweat over my brow. Her golden hair was pulled back into a tight pony-tail behind her, exposing a perfect face pinched with concern. She knew something was up.
Once school was dismissed, Kate approached me after school. She still had that worried look about her. “What’s wrong? During class you looked like you were going into cardiac arrest or something.”
I headed along the sidewalk toward home. The autumn leaves rustled in the brisk breeze all around us. “It was just a bad dream. Don’t worry about it.”
“Are you sure? You looked really scared. And it’s not like you to fall asleep during class.” She knew me all too well. It would be hard to convince her to back off.
“My dad snores.” The excuse seemed to bloom before my very eyes. “He’s been under a lot of stress at work lately. When he gets stressed he snores, and I mean snores. I bet you could hear it from a block away. He’s been taking some drowsy medicine, but I don’t really think it’s helping.” I was a good liar, and this was one of my better lies. Believable, yet satisfactory.
Kate’s eyes flashed in defiance, but in the end she accepted the lie. “Well, just tell me how I can help.”
The truth was, I was having nightmares. They were all like the one I’d had in class. In the dream I was bloodthirsty and eclipsed in destruction. The worst of all was that I enjoyed it all, until I realized what I was doing. Then I’d wake up like someone had sent an electric shock through me, afraid of falling asleep again. But I wouldn’t let Kate know that.
“See you later.” Kate waved to me as I turned onto the doorstep of my house. It was in pitiful condition, with crackling leaves scatted everywhere and the house looking a dilapidated gray. But it was somewhere to stay, all the same.
“See ya.” I called back as she turned away and headed to her house. I opened the door, the rusty hinges moaning in frustration. I almost ran into my dad, who was right at the door, looking straight at me.
“Umm, hey. What’s up?”
“You didn’t wear your cross today.” Well, that was strange. He never asked anything like, “How was school?” or “What did you learn?” Instead he insisted that I wear that stupid silver necklace with a Christian cross as its emblem. Why did he want me to wear it anyways? Sure, it had been a gift from Mom, but she was dead and she had been for five years. He should just get over it and move on. That’s what I did.
“Go upstairs and put it on.” It was a command, and I hated commands. But I didn’t really have a choice otherwise, so I tromped up the stairs, opened my bedroom door, dropped my backpack on the floor and located the necklace. What was so special about this piece of metal anyways? And why did I have to wear it? I sighed, jerked the chain over my head, and started back downstairs.
On the way down I started to slow down. My tensed muscled seemed to relax. My mind seemed to go from a million miles an hour to a dead stop. My vision became slightly clouded, as if my eyes were covered by a thin glaze. But my raging emotions quieted, and I was content.
“Always keep that on,” my dad said as soon as he saw me at the bottom of the stairway. “Never let it out of you sight. In fact, never lose contact with it.” He looked at me sternly, but I was passive and unresisting.
“Sure. Whatever you say.” A smile crossed his face, but it wasn’t a prominent smile. It was more of a smirk, as if he knew something that I didn’t. But I let it go.
That night I slept with the cross necklace around my neck. My dreams weren’t haunted with devastation, like they had been for the past few days. Instead I was standing alone looking at a cage. In the cage was a red aura, pacing back and forth like a lion waiting to pounce.
I felt eyes on me again. It was still dark out, but shadows hid nothing. My dad was standing at the doorway, looking at the bulge under the covers that was me. I didn’t move, faintly curious at what he would do. His eyes seemed to be looking at me, but something beyond me at the same time. He was thinking of something, or someone, that had to do with me.
“Dylan, you might want to consider getting ready.” I squirmed under the covers and moaned, pretending to just awaken. I glanced at my desk. The digital clock read 6:02. I really didn’t want to get up, but I did as I was bidden. Maybe a shower would wake me up more.
Under the warm, steamy water of the shower I began to wake. The cross lay on the sink counter, a few feet away. A fog lifted from my mind and my vision more acute. My skin tingled with an odd sense of power, as if the warm water cascading around me was filled with some sort of energy. But with it came a flurry of questions.
Why did I have to get up so early? It was it weekend. It was my day to sleep in. I don’t know what my dad was thinking, but 6:02 was definitely not sleeping in. Where were we going? Where were we going to do? I know I wasn’t planning on doing anything in particular but sleeping, eating, and watching TV. Somehow, that didn’t really seem one of his concerns.
“Hurry up Dylan.” Another command. Why didn’t he just tell me how much time I had? I wasn’t stupid. I could manage my own time. I didn’t even know where we were going or what we were doing. I clenched my teeth and shut the water off, unwilling to follow orders. My skin still tingled, but I ignored it. I was too annoyed to pay attention to awkward feelings.
A few minutes later, I was eating Chex Mix cereal in jeans and a white T-shirt. The cross necklace was in my pocket. My dad was looking at me in a funny way, as if he was examining me. What was he looking for? Was I any different that I was before? Why did he care? I clenched my fist under the table, but this seemed to give me away somehow.
“Put on your crucifix.”
“My what?” I had heard that word before, and I knew it wasn’t used lightly. Plus, it was another command.
“Your cross. Put on your cross.”
“Why?” I could feel the rebellion welling up inside of me. I wanted him to argue. I wanted him to shout back a sly remark. I wanted him to just so I could counter it.
“Just put it on.”
“Not until you tell me why.”
“I’ll explain it later. Just do it!”
“No! Tell me!”
He took a deep breath. I was getting to him. I could tell.
“You’re acting like a child. I’ll tell you when you act a little more mature.”
“I’m sixteen years old. I think I’m mature enough to understand why I have to wear a stupid necklace.”
“Well, obviously you’re not. Put it on.”
“I already told to, I’m not going to until you tell me why.”
This really seemed to tick him off. But that’s when something weird happened. He raised his hands like a conductor and pointed them at me. A spasm of pain shot through me and then I lost control of my muscles. He moved his hand and I moved my own in an identical fashion. Now I was creeper out. Fear seemed to capture my heart and my mind. He stuck his hand in his pocket and I stuck my hand in mine. I fought the motion with all I had, and another spasm of pain swept through me. I grabbed the cross and brought it out just as he brought out a clenched fist. Then he too an invisible chain between his hands and put it over his head, just as I gripped the chain of the necklace and placed it over my own. A few seconds later, all thoughts of rebellion dissipated and I yielded to his bidding. I was like a puppet, and he was controlling my strings. But he let go. For a moment I had the feeling that I was falling, but I caught myself and breath came flooding back to me. I was in control again, but I was scared stiff.
“Always do as I say, understand?” There was a hint of amusement in his voice. I nodded my ashen face. My eyes were wide with fear, but my eyes once again couldn’t focus totally. I felt like the light had been dimmed, and I felt tranquil.
“Good. Now come on. We have work to do.”
I didn’t question what kind of work. What did it matter? I was going to learn sooner or later. As long as I learned it eventually, I would be good. So I followed him into the pick-up truck we kept in our driveway. He got in the driver’s seat and me in the passenger’s seat. I had a liscence, but I didn’t know where we were going. Without a word of complaint or defiance, I allowed him to drive me away.
Inside, I felt that daunting red aura stir, dull, and quiet.

Carana0
Vice Captain


Carana0
Vice Captain

PostPosted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:43 pm


Chapter 2

We arrived.
I didn’t really know where we had arrived at, but it was clear that we had arrived. I didn’t really know what we were going to do here, but we were here and we were going to do it. My heart quickened its already frantic pace. I had spent three hours in a pickup truck sitting next to my father, who had only just before taken control over my body. Could you really blame me for freaking out?
We were at the entrance of an underwater bridge. Cars zoomed by us to our left without a single glance. Their headlights would then disappear into a black void lighted only by cold, electric lights. Any one of them could look over and see a boy with his father on the side of the road. They would never think that the boy’s very life could be in danger because of the man who sat next to him in the pickup truck. I felt desperately alone, but I didn’t know what I could do. My mind was sluggish, paralyzed by fear.
“Get out of the car.” The command barely registered to that stirring red aura. I complied without hesitation. I stepped onto the rough asphalt of the sidebar and closed the car door. I didn’t even consider running away. My mind couldn’t comprehend anything but trepidation.
My dad appeared next to me and my skin prickled. He grabbed my arm and pulled me along behind him. I followed him into the dark tunnel without struggle, into what I thought would be my doom.
I wish I had been right.
We walked along the side of the tunnel, the halogen lighting dimly showing us the way. Cars came and went sporadically, and with each came and went a faint hope of rescue. My heart seemed to beat both indolently and faster than the speed of light at the same time. We came upon a steel door with no handle in the two-feet-thick concrete walls. A door? Where did a door come from? For a moment the red aura struggled against the bars of its cage. For a moment I caught a glimpse of definition in the shifting lurid relativity. But the moment passed and it fell silent.
My dad pushed gently on the door and it slid freely away on oiled hinges. Inside was pitch black. He dragged me inside and I heard voices.
“So this is the boy?”
“Yeah.” It was my dad talking this time. I was sure of it.
“I don’t get it. He looks like a wimp.”
“I agree. I can’t believe that this boy is stronger than all of us put together.”
“Are you sure you have the right boy?”
“Yes. I’m sure.” His voice sent shivers through my body, but it was a slow, gradual reaction. “You should have seen him earlier, when he wasn’t under the spell. He refused to do anything I told him and absolutely reeked of demon.”
“I don’t get it. He’s only a halfa. Why is he-“
“Don’t say that around him.” Everything fell silent, the voices surprised by my dad’s sudden command. “He doesn’t know yet.”
“He doesn’t?”
“Well he’s going to have to learn sooner or later.”
“I don’t believe you yet. Prove to me that this is the one.”
My dad’s voice was like a menacing growl. “Prove it? You want me to take the spell off?”
“Yeah. Just put him in the cell. He can’t get out, and we can tranquilize him from the outside if he gets to dangerous.”
“If all else fails, we can just shoot him.”
I didn’t like the sound of that.
I could feel the pressure on my arm increase as my dad thought it over. I really didn’t like what he said next.
“Fine.” Then I fell forward, propelled by a gruff shove. I tripped and fell onto the floor. I could hear a heavy door swing closed behind me, but it didn’t matter. I couldn’t really see anyways. What were the chances of escaping if I was blind?
“He looks pretty sedate to me.”
“Be patient. I haven’t taken the spell off yet.” My dad snapped, and the cross around my neck shattered.
At first I didn’t know what had happened. Then I wasn’t sure if what happened had really happened. But I didn’t care. I was getting out of here, and who cared if the necklace I had been forced to wear was shattered? I didn’t like it anyways.
Things started to become brighter, and I could see around me. Actually, I could see better than I usually could, besides the fact that everything was tinted red. My skin began to prickle uncontrollably as I gazed upon the people who had me trapped here.
There were four men, including my dad. One was a short man with a doubtful look in his beady black eyes. Another was tall and gaunt, with a twinkle of surprise crossing his face. The hunched over like an older man and had his back turned to me, so I couldn’t see his face. But the most disarming man was my dad. A hint of remorse, coupled with an odd mixture of curiosity and regret scarred his face. What could possibly be going through his head?
The tall one spoke. “Well, he can see us.”
“There’s nothing special about that.” The short one’s voice was squeaky, like a mouse. I wanted to jump at that man and silence that voice, but a wall prevented me from doing so.
“Besides the fact that he’s looking through three feet of reinforced concrete.”
“So? I can see him too.”
“Yes, but how clearly? Is he fuzzy or obscured? And what about him? How well can he see us?”
I spoke up, anger making my words ring strong in the confining cell. “Don’t you think it’s about time you stopped quarreling about my vision and tell me what’s going on?”
“The short one jumped back as if I had pointed a gun at him. “He can hear us too!”
“Well duh. You guys are practically yelling.” Could this man get any more annoying?
“Alright, Arc, we believe you.” How did this tall guy know my dad’s name? My dad never disclosed his name, to anyone. Not even my teachers called him by his actual name.
“Aren’t you going to tell him what’s going on? It’s awfully lonesome to be left in the dark, even if you’re a demon.” It was that other guy, the one wasn’t looking at me. His voice sounded like a moldy, wet sponge and sent tremors through my body, although I wouldn’t admit it. He turned to reveal a gnarled face with many crossroads of scars, an assortment of burns, and an eye patch. The other two men shut up immediately. This guy obviously has some power in his old age. But what he said seemed to push my dad even deeper into thought.
“Why don’t you tell him, Wyvren. Enlighten him, why don’t you.” I already hated the short guy, but for once he had spoken some sort of sense. I was aching to know what was going on, and it was about time that somebody cleared things up. My dad sure didn’t seem like he was about to explain it soon, so this guy would have to do.
Wyvern opened the door to the chamber I had been locked in and stepped inside. Instinctively, I stepped back. This guy seemed to omit some sort of power, despite his age. Maybe it was his appearance. I noticed that the tall man and the short man behind the wall stepped back as well. Only my dad stood his ground, to preoccupied with whatever was on his mind to notice anything of any importance. Figures.
“Sit down.” Why did it have to always be a command?
“Why ?”
“I have a lot to tell you, and it may take a while to convey everything.” Wow. Wasn’t expecting that kind of answer. But now that I had taken a side I had to keep my dignity.
“I’ll stand, thanks.”
“Suit yourself.” Wyvern sat down onto a chair that hadn’t been there a second before. Wait a sec. A chair? I eyed the chair, wondering if it was just an illusion and this guy was some sort of street magician. He seemed to notice.
“You wonder about the chair?” I guess I gave my surprise away with my face because Wyvern smiled. It was a gross picture. His wrinkled face became more wrinkled, and his scares either pulled taught or became a crinkled map across his face. One burn looked particularly stretched out. I could see the veins underneath it popping into view. “You see, we can have anything we want just by wanting it. We wield power, more power than you could have possibly imagined. And you have it too.”
I sat down, a chair appearing underneath me. Wyvern’s doing, I guessed. “So, you can have anything you want?”
“Anything.”
“And I can too?”
“Yes. You just need to practice.”
“Then, why don’t you become kings or rulers or something?”
The smile slipped from his face like a stone, replaced by a look of disgust. “We are held in check, by filthy minions. They do as they’re told and they have been told to stop us from taking over, when it is our right to rule. When one has a gift, one should use it and enjoy it, right?”
“Right.”
“So one with power should use their power and enjoy it all the same, just as they would a gift.”
“I guess so. But who are these ‘filthy minions’?” I was utterly confused.
“They call themselves the Celestials, but they are no more than pawns blindly following their leader.”
“And who is this leader?” Were we really getting somewhere, or was this guy just telling a fairy tale to me?
“He is the worst of them all. He keeps his people in the dark, not allowing them to see him or share in his wealth. They call him the King.”
“And who are we?”
“We, being you and your father and the rest of us, are called the Hidden. We know all, do all, and rule all, except for those Celestials.” He spat their name out as if it tasted bad.
“Why don’t you just stop them? If you can do anything, why can’t you stop the Celestials?”
“Because the Celestials are supported by the King, who is powerful. He subdues us and then destroys us. He thinks we are evil, and so we must be… exterminated…” Wyvern seemed to be choosing his words wisely, and I could tell he wasn’t telling me everything. It was in his eyes, a certain gleam or twitch that gave away every feeling. But he wasn’t quite like an open book. It was more like looking through a kaleidoscope, where with each turn a new color was revealed and a new pattern born. Only I was watching the show while somebody else was turning it.
“Why am I just now learning all this? What do you want from me and what do I get out if it?”
Wyvern smiled wryly, the twinkle in his eye changing to a more amused look. A chill crept down my spine. “You haven’t been told because there wasn’t a need to tell you yet. But there is now. The Celesitals are gathering, so we must gather as well. As for what’s in it for you… if you comply you won’t be killed… by Arc.”
“What?!” I fell backwards in the chair. My own dad, kill me? Was this man out of his mind? Sure, we didn’t really have any fond memories together, but did Wyvern really think he could force my dad to kill his own son?
Bitter laughter echoed off the walls in the room and inside my head. The chair disappeared, replaced by shackles that appeared around my ankles, wrists, and neck. From the corner of my eye I could see a plume of smoke. Wyvern was on the other side of the wall again. The wall of cement had no door now. The short guy and tall guy were laughing along with Wyvern, but Arc remained silent. His eyes were clouded, the mix of emotions so great that I couldn’t tell exactly what he was feeling. I watched them all leave, Arc trailing after them. He didn’t say a word to me. He didn’t look at me. He didn’t wave good-bye.
He just left.
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