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faithieee
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PostPosted: Wed Jan 16, 2008 11:10 pm


Como?

Como decirle al corazon que hoy te vas?
Como explicarle al corazon que jamas volveras?
Sabia yo que un dia me ibas a dejar,
Pero es el corazon que no lo quiere aceptar.
Sabe mi mente que asi la vida siempre sera,
Pero lo que mas me duele es que nunca volveras.
Aunque te habia dicho mi triste adios,
Estaban en un remolino mis sentimientos.
Ojala que tenia la fuerza para poderte parar,
Pero no la tuve, ahora como al corazon se lo voy a esconder?
En saber que era culpa mia fue lo que mas dolio,
Y en verte ir, dejaste este pobre corazon vacio.
PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 4:01 am


faithieee_said_Ithink...

Like? Like saying to him to the heart that today you go away? Like explaining to him to the heart that jamas volveras? Wise person I who a day you were going to leave to me, But is the heart that does not want it to accept. My mind knows that asi the always sera life, But what but hurts to me is that never volveras. Although habia said my sad good bye to you, Was in an eddy my feelings. Ojala that tapeworm the force for poderte to stop, But I did not have it, now as to the heart I am going away it to hide? In knowledge that was fault mia was what but dolio, and in verte to go, you left to east poor man heart vacio.
or

As?

As to tell the corazon that today you go? As to explain him to the corazon that jamas to return? Wise I that a gave you were going to leave myself, But is the corazon that it does not want
to accept. My mind knows that asi the life always basket, But what but hurts is me that never to return. Although you habia said my sad one adios, they Were in a swirl my feelings. Ojala
that tapeworm the force to be able to stop, But it did not I have, now as to the corazon I am going to hide themselves it? In knowing that was blames mia was what but dolio, AND in seeing
you to go, you left this poor one corazon I empty.

Leaving your heart empty? Owch!.
Weird but good poetry. I like it...I think.

And for the record, I am not multilingul and am forced to use freetranslation sites. I say this because I'm pretty sure they are wrong.

Echo_the_Noob
Crew

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Torva Phasmatis
Crew

PostPosted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 2:39 pm


OMFG FAITHIEEE THATS FRICKIN AWESOMENESS!!!!!
I WISH I COULD DO DAT!!!

echo u dork why the hell would faithieee put a tapeworm and eddy into a sad poem???

heres wat it says:

How to tell the heart that today you leave?
How to explain to the heart that you'll never return?
I knew that one day you would desert me,
But it is the heart that refuses to accept it.
My mind knows that life will always be like this,
But what hurts me the most is that you'll never come back.
Although I have told you my sad goodbye,
My feelings were mixed, as if a twister.
If only I'd had the strength to stop you,
But I did not, and now how do I hide this from the heart?
To know that the fault was mine is what hurt the most,
And in watching you go, you left this poor heart empty.
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 12:06 am


WTF ECHO TAPEWORM????????
LMFAO!
THANKIES FOR THE TRANSLATION CHICA LOL I 4GOT!

faithieee
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blazingflow_dragonflame

PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 3:29 am


Echo_the_Noob
faithieee_said_Ithink...

Like? Like saying to him to the heart that today you go away? Like explaining to him to the heart that jamas volveras? Wise person I who a day you were going to leave to me, But is the heart that does not want it to accept. My mind knows that asi the always sera life, But what but hurts to me is that never volveras. Although habia said my sad good bye to you, Was in an eddy my feelings. Ojala that tapeworm the force for poderte to stop, But I did not have it, now as to the heart I am going away it to hide? In knowledge that was fault mia was what but dolio, and in verte to go, you left to east poor man heart vacio.
or

As?

As to tell the corazon that today you go? As to explain him to the corazon that jamas to return? Wise I that a gave you were going to leave myself, But is the corazon that it does not want
to accept. My mind knows that asi the life always basket, But what but hurts is me that never to return. Although you habia said my sad one adios, they Were in a swirl my feelings. Ojala
that tapeworm the force to be able to stop, But it did not I have, now as to the corazon I am going to hide themselves it? In knowing that was blames mia was what but dolio, AND in seeing
you to go, you left this poor one corazon I empty.

Leaving your heart empty? Owch!.
Weird but good poetry. I like it...I think.

And for the record, I am not multilingul and am forced to use freetranslation sites. I say this because I'm pretty sure they are wrong.


DUDE DO US ALL A FAVOR AND NEVER TRANSLATE ANYTHING AGAIN
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 4:18 am


whats this guild for

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faithieee
Captain

PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 9:26 pm


how can u not know what this guild is for? its a place where we can vent our thoughts and feelings through poetry, stories, quips, quotes, diggs, art and fun in general!
PostPosted: Fri Jan 18, 2008 11:46 pm


TalEnto_Del_BaRrio
OMFG FAITHIEEE THATS FRICKIN AWESOMENESS!!!!!
I WISH I COULD DO DAT!!!

echo u dork why the hell would faithieee put a tapeworm and eddy into a sad poem???

heres wat it says:

How to tell the heart that today you leave?
How to explain to the heart that you'll never return?
I knew that one day you would desert me,
But it is the heart that refuses to accept it.
My mind knows that life will always be like this,
But what hurts me the most is that you'll never come back.
Although I have told you my sad goodbye,
My feelings were mixed, as if a twister.
If only I'd had the strength to stop you,
But I did not, and now how do I hide this from the heart?
To know that the fault was mine is what hurt the most,
And in watching you go, you left this poor heart empty.


Thank you. As I said I have to use freetranslation sites and I said they were wrong. I just couldn't do any better. Thank you, once again.

blazingflow_dragonflame: Done, I won't ever post translation again unless I am fluent in both languages. So, never.

And Faith, It sounds better when translated by someone knows what they are doing. smile It is a beauty.

Echo_the_Noob
Crew


faithieee
Captain

PostPosted: Sat Jan 19, 2008 3:30 am


lol thanks echo and u would never have had to attempt the translation if id posted it in the first place!
still the tpeworm thing gave me a kick lol cheers!
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