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Posted: Thu Jan 17, 2008 6:53 pm

If you think your poetry is good, then this is the place fr you to be!

**We will be holding a contest two (2) times a month for the best poetrey.
**It will take place the first and last week of the month.
**Your fellow guild members will decide who wins that week.
**The poetry MUST BE YOUR OWN!!

If you have any questions, MSG me.

Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 5:47 pm

This is seriously my own poem
This is a free-form poem:

These bloodstained hands, they tell a story, all their own
My screaming heart, it yearns, for a love once lost
This blade, I place upon my back, it beckons once again,
to thirst for blood.

These all remind me of the past I have left behind,
Of the lives I have ended,
Of the families undone.

But as I walk alone on the edge of my fear,
A forest beckoning,
I look at my hands, My past has been done,
I cannot wallow in the past,
I must move on.

I walk through the threshold of this forest, it arrests my soul
And sets my body free

This pain, what is happening,
Is this God's wrath for what I have reaked, For my actions and sins commited, I run, I need water

I find a river, I crawl to its edge, I stare at the face looking back at me in the shadow of the water, this face of hate and evil,

I think of all the harm I have done, I did not want to do these horrors,
Oh, how many times I have wished I could start over, refresh my life

I weep in the river and sleep a slumber of nightmare
When I awake, I am not what I know me to be,
I am a four legged beast, with scars that shan't let me forget.....

My past

~William Steele~

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Posted: Tue Jan 22, 2008 7:10 pm

The pain is deep
No blood,
No tears,
Where it hurts is deep inside,

Silent tears stream down my face,
With each tear pain only grows deeper,
Down, down, down,
They just keep falling down,

My future cloudy,
My past so happy,
At this fork in the road,
I don’t know what direction to take,

Silent tears stream down my face,
I squeeze my eyes shut tight,
Hoping they will go away,
But it only makes more spill out,

I hope to fall asleep,
Then morning comes,
They’re still there,
Accompanied by the pain,
Silent tears stream down my face,
I reluctantly go on with life,
But not a soul ever notices,
For my tears are so silent.

~Kamari~

Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 3:06 pm

Mr Sharpton

Then I have quite a few.

Human Clay

the watch in the hand of
the human made of clay
shows that he
has not much time to stay
and will soon fade away

we are all these humans
made of clay. we will soon
be going
for we are not lasting
in this world full of rain(pain)

we need to realize
that we are not set on this
plain. we will
not last when it rains for
the flood will wash us away
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Bells Hanging

Bells in the steeple
hanging
Not a sound
containing
Seeming to be waiting
There

The Bride's Hair
shining
as the wedding bells
chiming
Declaring Love is in the
air

Low tones
Groaning
as the family is
Moaning
the Bells tolling without
Knowing
who is hiding
in the
Dirt

Many bells
Proclaiming
Times and dates Explaining
the mystery that binds
today
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It was a Love Paid for in Blood

IT was a Humble Rose…A White Rose…
Of Love…its Petals tinted with
Blood…It was a Love Paid for in
Blood…The Blood of those who
Love…That Love with Passion…

Now the Love is Broken…They are cold
and Alone…Tears of sorrow…fall
For that Love…and for the white rose
Steeped…in Blood…

It was a love…A love, paid for
in Blood…Now it is Broken…
and the tear and blood… lost
over this love… now flows… over the rose
that symbolized their love…after all…
it was a love…paid for in Blood...
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The Blue Tulip

IT was a Humble Rose…A White Rose…
Of Love…its Petals tinted with
Blood…It was a Love Paid for in
Blood…The Blood of those who
Love…That Love with Passion…

Now the Love is Broken…They are cold
and Alone…Tears of sorrow…fall
For that Love…and for the white rose
Steeped…in Blood…

It was a love…A love, paid for
in Blood…Now it is Broken…
and the tear and blood… lost
over this love… now flows… over the rose
that symbolized their love…after all…
it was a love…paid for in Blood…
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For Her Love

For her love, I would do anything…Climb the tallest mountain,
swim in the deepest sea, sail the ocean blue
from sea to shining sea…
It is wealth I seek, knowledge I have,
and wisdom I need to snare her love for me…
What I wouldn’t give, I do not know….
I would give all of Texas and the
Moon hung in the starry sky……
The Lost Scrolls of Alexandria,
the stone circle called Stonehenge,
the strength of my body the knowledge of my mind,
nothing I wouldn’t give for the love of the one I yearn for…
nothing on earth and nothing in the starry heavens above
I wouldn’t give for my love my life my mourning dove

*Note* This poem was written quite some time ago and the love that once burned has now died away, like a small flame in a heavy rainstorm.
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Alone

When I am sad, I want to be alone
To stay inside my room
With only my thoughts my tears
And sorrows, Alone until I feel better.

Why must these faces peer at me?
Prodding my feelings and asking me
“What’s Wrong”? when its so obvious.
I’m Blue and that’s that, leave me alone and let me be,
Alone, in my room with only my woe and me.

When I’m sad, I want to be Alone,
To stay inside my room,
With only my thoughts, my tears, my
sorrows, and me, Alone, until I feel better,
and when I do I will come out just happy to be together.
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That's what have and will show. I really have quite a few more.

Just moving his poetry to the correct forum.

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Posted: Sat Mar 15, 2008 7:11 am

Are we going to actually do the contest...if it is never going to be decided then I shall not put the rest of my poetry on here...

Posted: Wed Mar 26, 2008 6:44 pm

Here are a couple poems I did after reading those semi-emo poems that you guys did. I was also bored out of my mind so yeah, I know they're not the best in the world. But I kinda like them. And yes, I know I can't spell and YES I know they are short. AvaJay did two that go along with these. I call them The Firsts.

First Hunt

One paw in front of the other
Gently working around the brittle brush
One paw, one mouse
One mouse ahead, the only thing to focus on
One small heart beat
One soon to be meal
Slow and careful movements
One spontaniouse leap
One clamped jaw
One sucsessful first catch

First Outing

One tiny shaft of light
One tiny nose to greet it
Two small and inquisative eyes blinking wearily into the strange brightness
Four baby paws scrabbling anxiously to the strange new surface world
One twitchy nose envoloped in new scents
Two others emerge into the bright paroramic scene
All off to explore their new enviornment

Strange Lil Mouse
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Posted: Sun Mar 30, 2008 1:38 pm

Here are the next two (yes, they stink, please don't mock me crying ):

First Flight

Tentative talons
Perching on the nest
Chirps of protest
One firm push
One snapping of wings
One scree of elation
The rush of wind
The flash of colors--
Pure white
And brightest blue
One squeal of excitement
Reverberated for miles and miles around

First Snow

Stumbling hooves
Out of the den
One bray of surprise
The clouds graying
The wind chills carrying a single snowflake
Drifting slowly, landing on
One, single black nose
One squeal of surprise
As the flake dissolves
And many more follow

Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 6:36 am

Woo! I made another one! I was bored out of my mind as my Fench teacher droned on about test corrections!

What If.....

What if the world was square?

What if the grass was blue and the sky was green?

What if oranges were yellow?

What if cats were eaten by mice and dogs took cat naps?

What if fish could fly?

What if the world had peace throughout?

Well if the world was square, we could fall off!

If the grass was blue and the sky green, then we would have skys of green and blue spring grass!

If oranges were yellow, they would be yellows!

If cats were eaten by mice, exterminators would be rich. And if dogs took cat naps, dogshows would have a new catigory; Most adorable in sleep!

If fish could fly, they'd be flying fish!

But if the world had peace, then it would be perfect.

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