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PostPosted: Sun Jan 20, 2008 5:27 pm


Betrayed

[V1]
Whispers of deceit that I have filed,
While wondering ears linger on my sound,
You betrayed my image, You betrayed my trust,
And now your face follows me where I wonder.

[C]
The betrayal runs deep in our veins,
I smile the pain away,
I’ve moved pass our silly games,
Never to return again.


[V2]
People who know not even your name,
Reciet our story day by day,
Friends who shield,
What needs to be,
You betrayed me with an image of me.

[C]
The betrayal runs deep in our veins,
I smile the pain away,
I’ve moved pass our silly games,
Never to return again.


[V3]
Amber eyes stare me down,
Aching to say what needs to be said,
Biting your tongue, you unknowingly bit mine,
I’m betrayed by your image,
Your lips, your face, the way you walk from the fear.

(B-Bridge)
Betrayed, I turn from you,
Betrayed, I won’t look at you,
Betrayed, you laugh,
Revenge is our game.


[C]
The betrayal runs deep in our veins,
I smile the pain away,
I’ve moved pass our silly games,
Never to return again.


[V4]
The site of you is a deep swallow of pride,
I miss your voice, your face,
But I can’t bare to see it anymore,
I shield you out and betray your image,
Like you did mine.

[C]
The betrayal runs deep in our veins,
I smile the pain away,
I’ve moved pass our silly games,
Never to return again.


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Poem converted to Song, and if it seems like it's wishy washy that's because it is. I wrote it about my ex, and that situation is just wishy washy.
PostPosted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 3:13 pm


it was very good. I enjoyed it alot, there's nothing for you to improve on, in my opinion. biggrin

MysticBlackWolf14

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