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Would you read a novel length Regulus fic?
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ode[2]sokka

PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 6:32 pm


Alright, I''m not there yet but here is what I need to happen. Somehow I need Sirius to be pulling a prank on Bellatrix and have it ruin Regulus''s elventh birthday party that the family is currently hosting. He pretends not to care to spite his mother, and poor ickle Regulus is heart broken. It''s a very important scene as it sets the characterization for most of the story. I am, however, at a loss as to what Sirius can do. Any suggestions?

If you want to read what I have so far, which isn''t much as I eventually want this to be novel length, click the link below:

http://www.geocities.com/regulusofslytherin/story1.html
PostPosted: Sun Aug 21, 2005 10:47 pm


I don't think I would. sweatdrop

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 22, 2005 2:24 pm


Aw. *hugs La Mort de Madame* It's okay. Well, if you come up with any ideas feel free to share.
PostPosted: Tue Aug 23, 2005 5:14 am


RegulusofSlytherin
Aw. *hugs La Mort de Madame* It's okay. Well, if you come up with any ideas feel free to share.
^^ *ish huggled* Sorry I'm no help.. ^^;;

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 12:04 am


Hmmm...I don't know.
I was born lacking any imagination!
I'm sorry. ; _ ;

P.S. - I feel like I'm stalking La Mort!
Which I'm not!
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 1:09 am


Kaka-she
Hmmm...I don't know.
I was born lacking any imagination!
I'm sorry. ; _ ;

P.S. - I feel like I'm stalking La Mort!
Which I'm not!
ninja
But she's everywhere! DX
rolleyes

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 9:06 am


A prank...
neutral < blank stare means she''s thinking

Well, it could be something as elaborate as luring him into an abandoned house, only to be chased out by a hungry werewolf (although something tells me that idea''s been taken already), or.. I dunno.

I''m having a bit of a writer''s block myself over here ^^; You''re probably really frustrated right now, and I''m sorry.. I''ll try to think of something.

Um. What sort of character do you want Sirius to be? Is he going to be like he was towards Snape (a really cruel b*****d), or is he a bit mellower (like.. the twins >_>)? It all depends on that, if this scene really sets the stage for how he''s going to be for the rest of the story.
It would also probably play a role in Regulus'' ascension (descension?) to evil/The Dark Side..
Also, what are Sirius and Bella''s relationship towards each other? Does he absolutely hate her, or is it just like sibling rivalry..?
The prank would cause Bella to say something scathing about Regulus'' place in the family, maybe..

Oh.. sorry all those things are kind of random.. I always get a little scatter-brained when I''m brainstorming sweatdrop
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 2:22 pm


Quote:
Um. What sort of character do you want Sirius to be? Is he going to be like he was towards Snape (a really cruel b*****d), or is he a bit mellower (like.. the twins >_>)? It all depends on that, if this scene really sets the stage for how he''s going to be for the rest of the story.
It would also probably play a role in Regulus'' ascension (descension?) to evil/The Dark Side..
Also, what are Sirius and Bella''s relationship towards each other? Does he absolutely hate her, or is it just like sibling rivalry..?
The prank would cause Bella to say something scathing about Regulus'' place in the family, maybe..


I think I may have an idea, and it gets Andromeda in trouble too. Since, however, those questions are valid and I hadn't thought about them over much, I think I'll answer them mostly for my own sake.

Sirius's Character- It alternates, just like it does in the books. He can be alternatly cruel and kind to his poor little brother. Sometimes he treats him like he loves him more than anything else in the world, and then two words later will treat him like the scum between his toes. I think that makes it worse than the way he treats Snape. At least Snape knew that Sirius always hated him. Regulus is so confused (I can relate. My mom is the same way).

Playing a role in Regulus- Indirectly. It's kind of setting the stage for the things that will eventually push him over (though that's still many chapters away).

Bella/Sirius Relationship- the truely loathe each other throughout the fic. Whenever they can they WILL hurt each other. Bella, however, is three years older than Sirius and that gives her a big upperhand.

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PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 8:05 pm


RegulusofSlytherin
Quote:
Um. What sort of character do you want Sirius to be? Is he going to be like he was towards Snape (a really cruel b*****d), or is he a bit mellower (like.. the twins >_>)? It all depends on that, if this scene really sets the stage for how he''s going to be for the rest of the story.
It would also probably play a role in Regulus'' ascension (descension?) to evil/The Dark Side..
Also, what are Sirius and Bella''s relationship towards each other? Does he absolutely hate her, or is it just like sibling rivalry..?
The prank would cause Bella to say something scathing about Regulus'' place in the family, maybe..


I think I may have an idea, and it gets Andromeda in trouble too. Since, however, those questions are valid and I hadn't thought about them over much, I think I'll answer them mostly for my own sake.

Sirius's Character- It alternates, just like it does in the books. He can be alternatly cruel and kind to his poor little brother. Sometimes he treats him like he loves him more than anything else in the world, and then two words later will treat him like the scum between his toes. I think that makes it worse than the way he treats Snape. At least Snape knew that Sirius always hated him. Regulus is so confused (I can relate. My mom is the same way).

Playing a role in Regulus- Indirectly. It's kind of setting the stage for the things that will eventually push him over (though that's still many chapters away).

Bella/Sirius Relationship- the truely loathe each other throughout the fic. Whenever they can they WILL hurt each other. Bella, however, is three years older than Sirius and that gives her a big upperhand.
Okay. I still haven't thought of anything really good, so I'm glad you have ^^; I'll be checking for updates!
PostPosted: Sat Aug 27, 2005 8:34 pm


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Kaka-she
Hmmm...I don't know.
I was born lacking any imagination!
I'm sorry. ; _ ;

P.S. - I feel like I'm stalking La Mort!
Which I'm not!
ninja
But she's everywhere! DX
rolleyes
surprised heart

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 3:16 am


Kaka-she
La Mort de Madame
Kaka-she
Hmmm...I don't know.
I was born lacking any imagination!
I'm sorry. ; _ ;

P.S. - I feel like I'm stalking La Mort!
Which I'm not!
ninja
But she's everywhere! DX
rolleyes
surprised heart
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