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 Posted: Wed Jan 30, 2008 4:45 am
Sometimes life goes on exactly as planned.
But that’s not always .
Sometimes life goes on even though
we wished that we were dead.
But that’s not very often luckily.
Sometimes I’m alone,
but I know you’re always there for me.
Sometimes I’m lost and away
in a place I’ve known for years.
That’s when you’re not there.
One of my first poems, hope you like it heart heart
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Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 11:29 pm
Nice but don't cut your sentences
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Posted: Mon Dec 29, 2008 11:28 pm
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It's Good .
I'll Give 4/5 .
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