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DeletedChar11111111111 Captain
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 Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 3:06 pm
CONTEST OVER
~Chibi-chib~ First Love
It's that feeling you get in your tummy,
and it feels quite like dancing butterflies.
Next accompanied by sweaty palms and
that ever so awkwark stuttering of words.
It then becomes a comfort zone for both,
where you can trust each other and cry.
Leading then to those first arguments but
then there are two ways out, right?
One is to leave your only first love behind.
The second to stay and sort everything out.
I'm glad you stayed with me through it all. MegamanX0018 Distance
As each day passes,
I wish that I could see you.
As we talk to each other over miles of land between us,
I wish that we could meet someday soon.
As I open up to you,
I hope you can understand.
As night arises and the temperature drops,
I wish I could keep you warm in my arms and give you my heat.
As I try to sleep,
I lie awake thinking about you, hoping to have one dream about you.
As I wake up to another day without you beside me,
I feel barren and alone.
All this love I have is only for you and no other,
When we meet, I will give it all to you.
Yes, I still am a virgin, now by choice, it is only yours to take,
When I give it to you, I am giving you a part of me that no one else can have, it will be a special moment.
I hope I can pleasure you to your hearts content,
I fear that I won't be able to.
As I waited and will still wait for the day that we can meet,
You found someone else.
As long as you are happy,
I should be happy for you, right?
If you are happy,
Why do I feel like there is nothing left for me?
All I can do is wish you the best with him, put on a fake smile and back away slowly,
Even though that person could have been me...
The love I had for you is still here,
Until you come to me one day to receive it.
The times we shared over these lines, and you,
will never be forgotten by me.
There will never be any other like you.
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 4:17 pm
Okay I'm going to do it this time. Someone just has to agree to PM me and remind me okay?
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:34 pm
I will enter...
It doesn’t mean much
It doesn’t mean anything at all
The life I’ve left behind me
Is a cold room
I’ve crossed the last line
From where I can’t return
Where every step I took in faith
Betrayed me
And led me from my home
And sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give
You take me in
No questions asked
You strip away the ugliness
That surrounds me
Are you an angel
Am I already that gone
I only hope
That I won’t disappoint you
When I’m down here
On my knees
And sweet
Sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give
Sweet
Sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give
And I don’t understand
By the touch of your hand
I would be the one to fall
I miss the little things
I miss everything (about you)
It doesn’t mean much
It doesn’t mean anything at all
The life I left behind me
Is a cold room
And sweet
Sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give It doesn’t mean much
It doesn’t mean anything at all
The life I’ve left behind me
Is a cold room
I’ve crossed the last line
From where I can’t return
Where every step I took in faith
Betrayed me
And led me from my home
And sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give
You take me in
No questions asked
You strip away the ugliness
That surrounds me
Are you an angel
Am I already that gone
I only hope
That I won’t disappoint you
When I’m down here
On my knees
And sweet
Sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give
Sweet
Sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give
And I don’t understand
By the touch of your hand
I would be the one to fall
I miss the little things
I miss everything (about you)
It doesn’t mean much
It doesn’t mean anything at all
The life I left behind me
Is a cold room
And sweet
Sweet
Sweet surrender
Is all that I have to give
LoL just joking thats Sarah McLachlan. For anyone wondering... and its in the best drama movie ever made called "Homeroom" if your looking for a good cry, thats the movie...
Most powerful lyrics (for me at least) Ive heard all week, and its been a hella emotional week razz
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 8:35 pm
Yes Yes I know the poem has to be from you... But Im a brat who felt like posting random stuff and it is a very pure song in my eyes.
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DeletedChar11111111111 Captain
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 10:22 pm
x.silver deserts.x Yes Yes I know the poem has to be from you... But Im a brat who felt like posting random stuff and it is a very pure song in my eyes. I'm cool with posting cool related poetry in here it just doesn't count if its not your work
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Posted: Mon Feb 04, 2008 10:23 pm
~Chibi-chib~ Okay I'm going to do it this time. Someone just has to agree to PM me and remind me okay? sure I'll send you one in about a week or something if you want
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DeletedChar11111111111 Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 05, 2008 1:36 pm
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Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 2:36 pm
I can't believe I'm saying this but I'll TRY to make a poem. sweatdrop I guarantee nothing amazing but at least it will be something.
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DeletedChar11111111111 Captain
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 8:39 pm
Purple_Roxy I can't believe I'm saying this but I'll TRY to make a poem. sweatdrop I guarantee nothing amazing but at least it will be something. yay! go for it!
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Posted: Wed Feb 13, 2008 11:16 am
First Love
It's that feeling you get in your tummy,
and it feels quite like dancing butterflies.
Next accompanied by sweaty palms and
that ever so awkwark stuttering of words.
It then becomes a comfort zone for both,
where you can trust each other and cry.
Leading then to those first arguments but
then there are two ways out, right?
One is to leave your only first love behind.
The second to stay and sort everything out.
I'm glad you stayed with me through it all.
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DeletedChar11111111111 Captain
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 2:48 pm
~Chibi-chib~ First Love
It's that feeling you get in your tummy,
and it feels quite like dancing butterflies.
Next accompanied by sweaty palms and
that ever so awkwark stuttering of words.
It then becomes a comfort zone for both,
where you can trust each other and cry.
Leading then to those first arguments but
then there are two ways out, right?
One is to leave your only first love behind.
The second to stay and sort everything out.
I'm glad you stayed with me through it all. awsome smile our first and there for best submission blaugh
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Posted: Tue Feb 19, 2008 4:12 pm
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Posted: Wed Feb 20, 2008 8:03 pm
Yes, I love free verse poetry. I'll get one by the 29th...hell I'll probably have it in by tomorrow (if I remember to do it). It probably won't be that good, but I can promise that I didn't steal it from anywhere!
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Posted: Thu Feb 21, 2008 2:39 pm
That's the important part Jarc, that it's from the heart and not plagerized. blaugh
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 1:16 pm
Distance
As each day passes,
I wish that I could see you.
As we talk to each other over miles of land between us,
I wish that we could meet someday soon.
As I open up to you,
I hope you can understand.
As night arises and the temperature drops,
I wish I could keep you warm in my arms and give you my heat.
As I try to sleep,
I lie awake thinking about you, hoping to have one dream about you.
As I wake up to another day without you beside me,
I feel barren and alone.
All this love I have is only for you and no other,
When we meet, I will give it all to you.
Yes, I still am a virgin, now by choice, it is only yours to take,
When I give it to you, I am giving you a part of me that no one else can have, it will be a special moment.
I hope I can pleasure you to your hearts content,
I fear that I won't be able to.
As I waited and will still wait for the day that we can meet,
You found someone else.
As long as you are happy,
I should be happy for you, right?
If you are happy,
Why do I feel like there is nothing left for me?
All I can do is wish you the best with him, put on a fake smile and back away slowly,
Even though that person could have been me...
The love I had for you is still here,
Until you come to me one day to receive it.
The times we shared over these lines, and you,
will never be forgotten by me.
There will never be any other like you. I don't know if this is part of anything at all, but as far as I know, this is original, and this did come from me, and figuratively, my heart.Edited this like 3 times. gonk
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