I've posted the prologue of a book I've written on a website and I will soon post the rest. please read it and REVIEW it so I can change it and such as I need to. it's not completely finished, I actually want to rewrite it, but I still like what I have so far, and I want to get some feedback and exposure. I accept anonymous reviews. thank you

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