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snakegodess
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 2:51 pm



character name:Mina
Age:21 (itachis shipuunden age)
appearance:black hair mid shoulder lingth,brown eyes.
Bio:mina lived in the village hidden in the leaves.she never had any family she was adopted by the huuga clan.she whent to school with itachi and they graduated at the same time.she had always had a crush on the uchiha boy, but never got up the courage to tell him.just as she was about to tell him he was gone and accused of killing his intire clan.
~present day~
"hey itachi, why are we going to konoha again."a blue fishlike man asked.
"we were sent to pick up a girl."itachi replied and keped walking.kisame diddnt say anything els during the trip to konoha.itachi sounded especaly cold today and he diddnt want to die anytime soon.
~with mina~
"hey mina!"someone called.i rolled my eyes.
"figures."i thought turning around.sakura was running right in my direction.everytime i tryed to be alone some kid would come and bug me.i sighed.
"hey sakura,what do you want?"i asked in a bord tone.
"i was wondering if you wanted to hang out today."she said.i thought for a moment.
"sorry sakura i was about to go to the hokages office for my new mission,mayby some other time."i told her.
"oh,ok then."she said.she waved as she ran off twards sasukes house.i rolled my eyes again and headed twards the hokages.
"enter."came lady hokages voice.i walked in and stood infront of her desk.
"you wanted to see me?"i asked,she nodded.
"yes i did,the mission i am about to give you is an A ranked mission.you and three others will be escorting prinsess Ami back to the rain country."she explaind.
"Hai."i said.i walked out of her office.and down the street to the front gates. immeiately i knew somthing was off.the people i was supost to meet here were asleep.i pulled out my kuni and got into a fighting stance.two figures began to emerge from the thick fog infront of the village.one was a tall blue guy who looked part fish.the other made me gasp inwardly.
"i..itach?"i questioned.the two men stopped and looked at me.i stood my guard.
"dont come any closer if you do i'm ordered to kill you."i said.the blue guy began to laugh.
"did you hear that itachi, she means to kill us."he said.my eyes narrowed.
"kisame,dont underestimate this woman."itachi said.
"Mina come with us and we wont have to harm you."itachi suggested.i sighed and nodded in defeat.not only was i outnumbered but i loved itachi and just to be with him,near him again made me happy.itachi and the blue guy smerked.
"smart choice."the blue guy said.
"put a sock in it."i said following itachi out of the village.we soon made it to the rain contry.
"well i guess my mission is usless now."i told myself.i looked over to itachi then at kisame.they hadnt said anything since we left the village.the silence was bugging me.
"itachi...."i started.his eyes shifted to look at me.
"how have you been?"i asked.at first he diddnt answer me.
"i've been fine."he said.kisame just wached as we talked.i couldnt get him to say much but at least it was somthing.we soon came to a clearing in a forest.
"hey itachi...we have been being followed since the last country."kisame pointed out.itachi stopped.
"i know."he said.some kuni flew at the three of us and itachi deflected them.
"go hide somware i'll come for you later."itachi told me.i nodded and ran deep into the forest.i heared screaming and the clanking of wepons as i sat in a tree hidden in the branches.a few hours whent by and itachi finally came into my range of sight.i jumped down to greet him.
"ita..."i stopped as i relised itachi was bleeding..badly and had a few wepons stuck in him.itachi walked up to me as i stood there paralised from the sight i saw.itachi reached out and slid his hand down the side of my face.then he violently shoved me against a tree and kissed me.the kiss was soon broken.he leaned next to my ear.
"Mina...i love you...i always have."he said leaning on me.i soon relised somthing and it horrified me.i set itachi next to a tree as i cryed.
itachi was dead.
THE END
 
PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 8:22 pm


Itachi can't die crying

thisaccountispoorlikeabit
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snakegodess
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PostPosted: Thu Feb 07, 2008 9:26 pm


i made myself cry writing this xp but i had to make it short that was the only way that came to mind.did you like it though?
PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 3:26 am


YOU MURDERER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xp Yah, it was great! I loved it. But.......YOU MURDERER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! xp Well.......yah. That`s it. But....once again...I am talking to a genious here...

everydaytimelord
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snakegodess
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PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 12:31 pm


sorry that i killed him but i had to make the story short.if he lived i'de have to make it longer sweatdrop and ummmm thanks redface
PostPosted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 10:35 pm


Yes, it was very good! 4laugh

thisaccountispoorlikeabit
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snakegodess
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PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 10:37 am


yays thanx
PostPosted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 6:30 pm


it was awsome~!! but then itachi-san died~!!! crying

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