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 Posted: Fri Feb 08, 2008 8:02 pm
People talk about war
As if it's merely a game.
They say it's played not by children-
But Foolish men and women.
Every day you hear of it,
This war and how terrible it is.
But you'll never know what they've faced,
Just because you sit there reading this.
This is a poem in honor
Of the soldiers, Mothers, and fathers
Who will willingly lost their lives,
In order to keep YOU safe.
And you will never know them,
The same with you to them.
And still, they fight on,
And they'll fight until the day they die.
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 4:26 pm
I Am SO Oatmeal People talk about war
As if it's merely a game.
They say it's played not by children-
But Foolish men and women.
You'll never know what they've faced,
As you sit there reading this.
This is a poem in honor
Of the soldiers, Mothers, and fathers
Who will willingly lost their lives,
In order to keep YOU safe.
You will never know them,
But, still, they keep us alive.
this is good, very good. I love it alot, it sounds so good to me!
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 5:05 pm
Thanks, I don't really like the last two lines though, any idea on what I could change them to?
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Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 5:32 pm
I Am SO Oatmeal Thanks, I don't really like the last two lines though, any idea on what I could change them to? umm... I don't know what you could put there. Hmmm... yeah, I don't know. Sorry. sweatdrop
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