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 Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 3:37 pm
Hay everyone~!
Isn't it great that we have have our own tutorial and critique forum?! =D Sooper cool~! Hehe, anyway~!:
In here I'll be posting some of my most recent works and ask around with what's wrong with it, basically. Hehe.
I mean, I'm not here to put these things and be all show-offy and get nice comments and stuff, but I need to know what people would prefer or find wrong it with. I'm on this ...like... huge quest on getting so good, I can become professional...
Before I turn 17.
And I'm trying to draw stuff like this everyday, and I need you guys to back me up.
Be harsh and cruel, but truthful most importantly. I don't mind at all. I can take it~ =D
So then the next post I'll post all the stuff I want reviewed ;D
Thanks everyone~! =D
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Posted: Sat Feb 09, 2008 3:44 pm
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Posted: Sun Feb 10, 2008 12:44 pm
Let's see...the cging looks good to me.......lol
I don't really notice anything wrong with Kratos Aurion one.. xd
Although in the gaian commission, the girl looks a bit muscular. maybe make her breasts a bit larger and positioned lower. or just make her more feminine and petite looking. what else? maybe work on the hands a bit like the fingers i guess. oh yea the angel wings! try not to make them pointy; just like the fingers they're slightly roundish.......
I would say more about the commissioned one, but i think i already put too much information. sweatdrop
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Posted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 6:49 pm
I see what you mean by the breasts being too high. I hadn't even notices upon first glance.
They're a little too high up, kind of by the shoulders. Should be lower than the armpits.
And the foot that is raised. I don't really know how to fix it, but it looks unrealistic. Kind of like her foot is broken. Maybe show more of the calf or turn the slipper more head-on instead of the side-view it's at right now.
I really like the bouquet though. That is what it is, correct? The underside of a bouquet? I really hope that's what it is, because it would be totally adorable if it is.
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 3:25 pm
those are amazing your really good at shading, something im still workin at . Good job domokun heart
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Posted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 1:43 pm
I like them. Nice propotions and great shading. <3
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 8:34 am
*Note: You don't have to follow these .___.;; Hehe.
I think it's just me, but I think the neck on the Gaia Commission should be sinched it just a tiny bit. Not a whole lot, but just a bit. But, I think that's me.
I agree with the others with the breasts. But, I won't go further with that. But, for shading at the breasts, you should try some stuff out for that.
The foot could be fixed by having the angle go a bit further up and back, heh [not good at explaning angles. x3], and the calf could be shown and the foot pointed a little bit.
On the Kratos one, that's amazing. :3 And so is the commission.
And, they are great drawings! I love your style! So pretty and sexy ;D Hehe.
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