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contamar-the-deamon-blade

PostPosted: Thu Feb 14, 2008 6:26 pm


sorry I haven't posted in a while, I had to give up on my other storyline, had nowhere to go sweatdrop Sorry that this is so short, I got out the start of it, and ran out of time XP
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no cursing
no violence
no drugs

Where angels are few and demons are many,
Beware the ones who live highly,
For evil corrupts and seeks them out.
Seek the men who live lowly.
Though they may seem unsightly and low,
True evil here runs slow.



Marissa sighed and closed her book of wisdoms. She found that she never got what she needed from it unless she opened it to a random page. It hadn’t worked this time. The guards that usually stood in front of Carn’s mansion were gone. She wrapped her hand around the deadly Kris knife hidden in her peasant disguise. If The imperials Had found out that Carn was giving secrets to the rebels, both of them were in trouble. She slowly pushed the door to the mage’s mansion open. She was immediately beset upon by two large German Sheppards.
PostPosted: Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:47 pm


Sounds like it could be interesting. I have one problem, Kris knife: t is repetitive. A Kris is a type of dagger.

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contamar-the-deamon-blade

PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:17 pm


sorry, 'bout that sweatdrop but some people dont know what a Kris is.
PostPosted: Tue Feb 26, 2008 4:47 pm


That's cool, I'm into weaponry and I tend to forget that other people don't know what I do.

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contamar-the-deamon-blade

PostPosted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 9:20 pm


I hear you there XD
PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 7:47 pm


I like it a lot. If I could give a suggestion, at the end, don't say "German Sheppards." You could say in its stead two large dogs, but sometimes if you are too specific at the first sighting of them, people can't take it very serious. That is really cool sounding though!!

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 12:33 pm


It's German Shepherd. However, what Miki said was true so my correct is essentially pointless.
PostPosted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 5:28 pm


*looks back at post* Oh, you're right. lol, like "sheep herd" Shepherd. Ah.

*flees*

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