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kat11kiba

PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 2:03 pm


Is my avi finally good enough to be entered in the arena?

Can I get a rate or suggestions before I enter again?
PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:16 pm


Do you have your description figured out yet? I love your avi, and I'm sure it would be in the top fifty if you didn't say anything but "This is my avi, hope you like it." But you'll definitely need a decent story if you're trying to win. :3

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 3:53 pm


Seems like white would be good to add into it, but choco's right, it looks fine that way too ^-^
Good luck with a description <33
PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 4:32 pm


Thanks ^ ^

And here is my description....



Her life is shrouded by mystery. One would normally be defined by their deeds. She is not so easily labeled. She has performed deeds of the greatest valor and yet done some that reek of malice. All anyone knows is that when she appears a great deed is to be accomplished. To what end none can predict. What her own motivation is in her actions none can guess.
As to what she looks like, well even that is shrouded in a certain amount of mystery. She is in all ways unremarkable. She could walk by you, even stop and talk to you and you would never remember her as soon as you turned away. The best description of her hair is dark. Her eyes are also a dark and seductive color. Her skin is fair, though not bright. She wears dark ordinary garments of low quality cloth.

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PostPosted: Fri Feb 15, 2008 7:50 pm


kat11kiba
Thanks ^ ^

And here is my description....



Her life is shrouded by mystery. One would normally be defined by their deeds. She is not so easily labeled. She has performed deeds of the greatest valor and yet done some that reek of malice. All anyone knows is that when she appears a great deed is to be accomplished. To what end none can predict. What her own motivation is in her actions none can guess.
As to what she looks like, well even that is shrouded in a certain amount of mystery. She is in all ways unremarkable. She could walk by you, even stop and talk to you and you would never remember her as soon as you turned away. The best description of her hair is dark. Her eyes are also a dark and seductive color. Her skin is fair, though not bright. She wears dark ordinary garments of low quality cloth.





Make me wonder about her....Im not the best at descriptions but to me thatas good <33
PostPosted: Sat Feb 16, 2008 9:15 am


Meh

I personally think you could do so much more with the incredibly awesome items you have

But thats just me ^^

And in your description

You repeat your words to often, so to me, it takes away the meaning.
And I don't think you really need to describe what you look like.

;]

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kat11kiba

PostPosted: Mon Feb 18, 2008 2:58 pm


here is my finished writing for the arena:

The war had started, but women were not one to fight.
She needed to protect herself and her land. On the hill she could see destruction and Bloodshed, She knew it was her place to step in. Master swordsman she was, The blades her father , the black smith, she used. She fought for what was right and what she believed it. The war was coming to an end. The men looked to her for support, She knew what was needed. A colonial prophecy. They would survive another day.


I'm in it now,
http://www.gaiaonline.com/avatararena/?mode=vote&postid=15177&key=56rgz6
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