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 Posted: Wed Aug 24, 2005 9:49 pm
I Wonder Why?
I wonder why is an
Unanswerable question
It is endless,
It is bound to
No answer.
It can be general
or direct.
It can made a statement,
Or it can stand alone.
It is revealing,
It is mysterious,
It can be a golden mirror,
Or just one of plain wood.
It can be beautiful,
It can be hideous,
It is an
Unaswerable question.
It is endless
It is bound to
No answer.
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Posted: Thu Aug 25, 2005 12:13 pm
I really like it. It's something I'd think about writing about... It's a good read, much better than I could do.
^_^
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Psychotic Maniacal Sanity
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Posted: Fri Aug 26, 2005 5:02 pm
Wow, I really like this one. You need a period at the end of the second line in the first stanza, but I really like this one- it was interesting and had good rhythm! Keep up the good work!
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Posted: Wed Aug 31, 2005 3:58 pm
hum an existentionalist poem, i like it.
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Posted: Wed Sep 21, 2005 3:44 pm
I really like it. I look back at the stuff I've been writing in the past while and look at the stuff here and notice how bad I get over the summer. I have to get back into things... wake up a bit. I'm still pretty much in the state of no school.
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