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 Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 11:31 am
Hello all. As my first generous action in this guild I offer 1k to 12 buddies to help for their quests. I'm generous like that when I can be, but it will cost you something to get it since everybody will want to be part of the 12.
The trick is that you have to type me some story about Groan the Lion and Spike the Porcupine. I know it's weird but the best stories will win 1k! I will base my judgement on the quality of the english, the originality or the story and the morale it gives to the reader!
Thank you to all who will participate!
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 2:37 pm
Ok, this is the coolest idea ever!!! lol I love it. Hmmm... what to write.
The forest was quiet on this dark cool evening. Spike the Porcupine lay in his den with his family. As it began to rain and the thunder crashed, Spike comforted his two children "Don't worry, we are safe here in the ground." The both nodded and began to fall to sleep.
In the distance, Groan the Lion let out a huge roar. The rain continued and began to fill the area with water that kept getting deeper and deeper. He climbed a tree, avoiding the ever rising flood.
Spike woke to a squeak from his wife, he opened his eyes to see their den filling with water. "Oh no," he said as he scrambled to get his family out of their den. "We must find somewhere sa..." just as he said that, a rush of water slammed into him and washed both he and his family away with the current. Spike managed to grab onto a tree as he cried for assistance, "Help! Help!"
Groan heard Spike's faint cries in the distance. He strained his eyes to see where it was coming from, and he finally located them clinging to a tree for dear life. Normally enemies, Groan the Lion pondered whether he should save them or not. Another cry came from Spike, and Groan leaped into the water, guided by his conscience, traveling downstream until he came to the tree Spike and his family held onto. He climbed up the trunk and jumped onto the branch that kept Spike's family from death.
Startled by this great enemy of the Porcupine, Spike shied from the lion, almost losing his grip. The lion reached out his paw, "Take it! I can save you!" Spike looked unsure, but took Groan's paw and he and his family were pulled to safety.
The rain continued all night, until the sun finally shown in the distance as the flood waters receded. Groan looked at Spike, and Spike looked at Groan, and they both knew that they would be enemies no more.
The End
Lol, ok, so I didn't look back over it for spelling or anything but I hope you enjoyed it =p
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:38 pm
That was actually pretty good. Since there are no other participants you have the first place in the contest so far. I think I will wait a bit to see if there are any other contestants. razz
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 3:42 pm
story writing is my bad side ;__;..anyways, bump and good luck!
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 5:36 pm
Awww come on... you will probably win even if your story is bad since there are no contestants so what will you lose to try?
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 7:27 pm
chubakaa That was actually pretty good. Since there are no other participants you have the first place in the contest so far. I think I will wait a bit to see if there are any other contestants. razz
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Posted: Wed Feb 27, 2008 9:04 pm
=/ ill try..dont make fun of my grammar ;__;
Im going to create my own world now...
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There was this lion named groan. He was called as groan due to his empty stomach growl as such that it signifies to their fellow lions and lioness as hunger with no prey to be eaten. He's already considered as the most coward lion in the face of the earth that even the preys themselves laughing at him being a 'herbivore' lion.
He is sad, distressed along human-made road where he find the floor more comfortable to sleep on eventhough he knows he's in terrible danger when a human made machine can trample him to death. By the time he fell to his slumber on the cold floor, he made an encounter to another animal.
Porcupine named spike was about to look for another home spot since he was being pick on as a coward. Always covered itself into a ball when he frightened gave him the name Spiked being stuck to be coward at all times. As they met each others eyes, they both knew they are on the same boat.
Porcupine contribute the Lion some bugs as he heard the lion's stomach growling endlessly. The lion wasnt the type to each such low level food, but he did accept it anyway and then gave the porcupine as soft roar as thanks. The porcupine sat beside the lion. Spike, for the first time he didnt flinched in fear to another animal, suddenly grew a sqeaky smile when he gazed at Lion's magestic mane. Felt very comfortable on the lion's warmth, the porcupine tried to translate his story into lion's language about his own story. Immediate change of stress to wonderful fantasy, they randomly talk about their life. As a result of loud laughter, the porcupine group arrived shortly.
The curious porcupine group saw Spiked with a lion. They were scared that they immediately turned themselves into a ball. The Lion and the Porcupine felt the happiness into their veins and laugh at the scared porcupine balls. Lion gladly played the scared porcupines as toy balls then aimed at the target tree. The Lion indeed felt the pain of the spikes, but he doesnt mind the feeling since he notice the sadness beneath Spike's protective cover; being caged of its own overprotective fur. After the incident, the lion vow the porcupine to protect him no matter what destiny made them dismay.
After few months of their unbreakable friendship, Groan the Lion was no longer pick by other lions since Spike the porcupine became his bodyguard by giving spikes on the bully lions and in turn Groan finally learned how to catch a prey without hearing the noise of his stomach. Spike accompanied him in every food hunting. the same in return of lion accompany of porcupine's food hunting as well. In hibernation months, groan waited and guarded Spike's sleeping ground. after few more months of season change. Spike porcupine and Groan the lion finally have a family. totally hand in hand in every needs of their own problems, they are having the most comfortable life ever achieve in the animal world.
the end.
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 1:12 pm
That was great! I love the way you write, it's nothing like I've read before. 9/10 since the perfect mark doesn't exist!
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Posted: Thu Feb 28, 2008 1:20 pm
I agree. That was awesome!! 9.9/10 xD
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:41 am
err..thanks ^^;;; I find mine too cheesy though..
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 10:29 am
WOW AWESOME STORIES I GIVE THEM BOTH 100/10 ^_^
hmmm,,, not that good of a writer when some one gives me a topic to write about lol
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Posted: Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:25 pm
Then write about what you want! I just want participants!
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 12:02 am
Once upon a time, there was a lion named "Groan" and he had a friend named "Spike" who was a porcupine.
They always did everything together, ate together bathed together, and even slept together (not like that you sicko).
But one day Groan rolled on top of Spike and got a lot of pins in his back.
Spike feeling really bad left Groan forever.
Groan, feeling sad went to his other friends house "Spike II" who also was a porcupine.
Spike II magically turned into a dragon and ate Groan!
THE END!!
lol I was too lazy to finish off the story.
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Posted: Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:01 pm
HAHAHAHAHA too funny how lazy stories are also very entertaining!
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:57 pm
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