|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri Feb 29, 2008 8:11 pm
I wrote this one recently actually. I showed it to my English Teacher and she really liked it. I really like it too cause I think its one of my best.
Depression hits again.
Im sitting here alone.
Just dreaming about the angels.
And their glorious sound.
How I wish to be like one.
Beautiful, flawless, carefree,
How I dream of flying like one!
Tears hit again.
As Im sitting alone.
Dreaming about the clouds,
And their endless boundaries.
How I wish I can lay on one.
Relaxed, happy, dreaming,
How I dream of floating on one!
Loneliness hits again.
Lying here alone.
Dreaming about a rose,
And its velvety petals.
How I wish to be like one.
Perfect, beautiful, radiant,
How I dream of being like one!
Coldness hits again.
As I lie crying.
Dreaming about the breeze,
And its musical whispers.
How I wish to be like it,
Cool, loving, Stunning.
How I dream it will take me away!
I am dreaming, dreaming, dreaming, forever.
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 5:45 pm
I love how you tie your emotions to other things like angels and roses and such...very creative and touching...I also like the slight repetition in some of the lines....
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
