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 Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 4:33 pm
 Tell me what you think n_n ------>
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Posted: Tue Mar 04, 2008 8:26 pm
nice; i like the color blue ^^
but i think you should work more on the shoulders... they seem a bit bigger than necessary [particularly her right shoulder] they kinda bothered me.
but otherwise. nice!
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 4:44 am
Hmm her neck is a little long...but not enough to really make it look that off. It's really pretty ^w^.
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 9:36 am
Her left eye is a little lower than her right... I love the pose, though, it's cute- and the color is lovely! smile
Oh, a tip for proportions in drawing (my father was a professional artist, so I learned a lot from him), try turning your pic upside down, or viewing it in a mirror. This is soooooooo helpful, it makes it instantly apparent whether there are any incorrect proportions or not. I have to do it with a lot of drawings or they turn out all wonky. xd
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 10:00 am
Ooooo cute! I really like the style--nice shading! I really like stylized artwork, and you have a nice flow and pose. Yeah, you might try the upside-down trick it really works. I have had many a drawing that I thought was really well aligned just to turn it upside down and find out it was really crooked, lol! xp
I am impressed with your work--thanks for posting--and I gotta admire your asking for critiques--that's really hard... 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 5:17 pm
looks great snorpy ^^ I might make hte bottom half a bit larger, since the hips should be about the same width as the shoulders, but nice~
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Posted: Wed Mar 05, 2008 7:17 pm
Thanks guys.
I'll totally keep that in mind while I'm drawing now :]
Especially the shoulders - I think that's a weak spot of mine >.<
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Posted: Sun Mar 09, 2008 3:17 am
I like your hands ... you did a really good job on the hands ...hands are HARD!!! i cant do hands sad sad sad LOL
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Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 4:19 pm
 n_n
I'm rather proud of the hands myself.
I had to work aaaages on them, though. >w<
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