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 Posted: Mon Mar 03, 2008 7:40 pm
Theres so many things in this world We don't need
death,hate,sadness,life,love,Loss
Rather I live or die I want to know I've made my mark
death
makes the strongest weak
Hate
knows me way to well
Sadness
powers this oh so cold world
Life
keeping me from being free
Love
A time bomb for bad news
Loss
Every thing I had
Theres just to much in this world
Maybe we should all just fade away.
errr...yea too emo =
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Posted: Mon Mar 10, 2008 6:49 pm
It's an interesting take....makes me think what I would write about death, hate, sadness, life, love, and loss. However I don't know about the song part. xp It's good as is, minus a few grammar mistakes...but hey we all have those....
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