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Lucy Cigarette

PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:20 pm


Chapter 1: enter Uzumaki Kushina

You could say I’ve been through a lot in my life: my husband died, my son has a demon in side him and my country is, well no more. I haven’t had the best life, but it wasn't always so bad.

This is the story of Uzumaki Kushina aka Naruto's mom, a strong kunoichi with a boyish attitude and an amazing story.

"Class we a have a new student joining us today." announced Tohara-sensei
“I would like to introduce uzumaki kushina!"
"Ohaio! Kushina-san." Said the class in unison.
"Ohaio...minasan." I said without interest. I sat down next to some boy he had this uberly bright yellow hair.
"Hi I’m Namekaze Minato, and I’m the next hokage." he said proudly
"Well I’m the uzukage but.....my village was destroyed." I said madish/rudeish tone
"That’s too bad."
"wait sensei is about to say something important." we turned our head to the board then sensei asked the class "today we're going to learn about chakra control, can someone tell what chakra is?"
A few people raised their hand. Sensei called on this pink haired girl.
"Yes Izumi-chan."
"Chakra is the elemental type energy that a ninja uses in jutsu and is the source of the ninja’s power. ninjas use both their chakra and spiritual energy (which is only improved through training and experience) to complete a jutsu.When both body and spirit energies are blended together (also known as the process of molding chakra) and the proper hand seal(s) are formed, a technique can be executed. To perform a Ninjutsu or Genjutsu technique, it is crucial to mix your chakra correctly."
"Well Miss Haruno seems you have the brain of a chunnin."
"Thank you sensei."
"Anyway................."

"Oi! Kushina-chan comes eat lunch with us."
"Okay!" I ran over to minato-kun and his friends
"Hi I’m Inuzuka Ookami."
"And I’m matarshi kaisou."
"Nice to meet you." I then sat down on the bench with them and started eating. "So Ookami-kun when do you get your dog, your in the Inuzuka clan right?"
"Yea, but I don’t get my dog till next year." he talked with a little sadness in his voice.
"Hmm cool."
"So kushina-san where are you from." kaisou-kun had just asked the question I feared most.
"Well... I’m from the whirlpool country."
"Naa naa!" minato-kun intrupted “isn’t your last name uzumaki?"
"Yes minato-kun it is my last name and it means whirlpool see my great grandfather was the first uzukage."
"O cool!” all three boys responded with interest.
"Wait, wasn’t the whirlpool county destroyed by wars."
"Yea that’s why I left."
"Oooooooooooooo."
"Alright everybody come back in side, lunch is over!" shouted sensei.
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:26 pm


The uzumaki crest ch2: team 14
"Alright I hope you had a good lunch but you know that tomorrow is the big test so we are doing a review." sensei told us "so everyone line up and we're going to do our review." Everyone got out of their seats and went to the front of the room. "Alright so I would like everyone to transform."
"Hai!" everyone formed the just hand seal "Henge!" 'Pyon~’ the room was almost completely full of smoke. When it cleared everybody transformed in to sensei but me. I was I random ninja.
"Good." 'Pyon~' more smoke filled the room and when it cleared everybody was back to normal. "Alright now I’d like you to do the cloning justu."
"Hai." "Bunshin no Justsu." 'Pyon~' only I few of the clones were successful, but most were completely useless mine was ok still need to do a bit of work though.
"Well it seems you need some work on that one so lets reveiw the process."
"Hai sensei!"
“Ok so first build up your chakra, then.................

"Ohaio Gozimas!"
"Ohaio sensei!"
"I hope you're all ready for the test." he then passed out the written tests. "Ok after everyone is done we'll do the performance test." "you may begin your test." once I finished my written test sensei told me to go to the class room next door .so I left the class room quietly and went to the class room next door.
"Um....hi." I said as I opened the door to the classroom.
"Hello, im Sekio Kotoru." "I’m the sensei for the next academy level."
"O im uzumaki kushina"
"Nice to meet you kushina-san."
"Nice to meet you too sensei."
"So can you show me your transformation justu?"
"Um sure" "henge no justu." 'Pyon~' I transformed into kotoru sensei.
"Very good kushina-san"
"Thank you." ^.^
"Hmm well if we add this to your test score lets see, you.........
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Lucy Cigarette


Lucy Cigarette

PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:52 pm


the uzumaki crest 3 >.< the ninjas thoughts
uzumaki kushina's journal
konoha Entry 6:
so today i passed the test to get to the next class and my last year in the academy, finaly i'll ba a ninja! also i find konoha quite nice, the moutian side is quite the spectical i like to watch the workers carve the hokage's face. sometimes i even go up and chat with the workers. as for the people i've met minato is as outragous as ever( of corse) and his hair still bright as the sun. and theres this women i met while coming home from training her name is tsunade and want her for a sensei but, she says dosent intend to be a sensei. the two of them are really the best.


namekaze minato's ninja log
entry 12:
i can't belive im still writting. but anyway im not to happy with sensei cuz she allways tells Ookami that hes a useless ninja. uhg! i can't stand it! and i quote " Ookami-kun if you don't train your dog you'll end up a useless ninja." i mean god he gets plently of that crap from his parents. but i kno he'll be a splendid ninja, i can tell. anyway im doing some extra training today with Ookami and kushina-chan, so bye(oh my god i just talked to my ninja log)


Inuzuka Ookami's log:
entry 10:
so today minato-kun showed off to the girls agian at kunai practice. He really is good, i'd say maybe the best in class. Kushina-chan just keeps getting better, its hard since i don't seem to be improving much.But i am getting my dog soon and i'm really excited for that at least. my dad says that if my grades don't get better once i get my dog i can't be a ninja anymore.my younger sister is practically better than me too, but i hope that once i graduate i'll get better....
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PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:54 pm


the uzumaki crest 4
"Thank you for coming to the orientation, all of you represent the best ninja in you class" sensei said "but, you cant run in packs like wild animals so we're splitting you into three man teams." the class mumbled over who they wanted on their team and such. "Calm down everyone!" the room went silent, "now here are the teams."
"Team 4 Haruno Izumi......Hyuuga Hae and Shibi Aburame!"
"Team 9 Sandaime Nawaki....Uchiha Miaru and Matarashi Kaisuo!"
"And lastly team 6 Uzumaki Kushina........Namikaze Minato and Inuzuka Ookami!" "You will meet your sensei today during lunch." minato, ookami and I talked on about being ninjas. And also about being on the same team! When I was done talking to them I went over to see miaru-san. She’s a friend of mine I made during a class project. While I was talking to her izumi-san came up to me.
"So I bet noticed that I’m on Hae-kun's team." she said proudly
"Yea well I don’t give a damn!”Miaru said
"Aww is someone jealous?"
"How could someone be jealous of you." she pushed her to the floor, luckily sensei had left so we didn’t have to worry about him taking away the ninja bands or anything.
"Well I am perfect in every way." Izumi got out a kunai
"Orra j-joto mate(hey wait a minute)!" I said stepping between them


The three of us arrived at the meeting spot way early cuz Ookami-kun wanted to show us his dog! "Gah! Wow she bites hard." Minato said. Ookami-kun tapped the dog’s head
"Gomen minato, but she is a wolf." Ookami-kun said
"Ano what was her name again?" I asked while petting her head
"Her name is Inutsume."
"O ya."
"Yo!" a freaky looking white haired man said he had these weird tattoos going down his face. And an ugly wart on his nose.
"Uhhh hi." I said
"Hey!" minato said
"H-hello."
"I’m your sensei, Jiraiya." he said
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Lucy Cigarette


Lucy Cigarette

PostPosted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 1:57 pm


The uzumaki crest 5
Taking another look at our sensei, I noticed that if he didn’t have that mole, he might be good looking. (Eh? what you don’t agree jiraiya-kun rocks? So meh to you hatas. Sorry, back to the fanfic) but, he’s my sensei, so I shouldn’t say stuff like that; he might have a girlfriend, for all I know.
"You’re kinda late, sensei." said Minato. I could tell from his face that he was just as eager as me to see his reaction.
"Well, deal with it, we can’t change that, can we?" he said with a bright smile. He might not be as bad as I thought. “Now why don’t you guys introduce yourselves, huh?"
"Okay!" I said swiftly, "I’m Uzumaki Kunshina, and my strengths are genjutsu and weaponry."
"My name is Namikaze Minato, I’m best in ninjutsu and I’m hella fast!"
"I’m, uh, Inuzuka Ookami, and, uh, I’m best with taijutsu and tracking."
"That’s nice. well as I said I’m jiraiya and my strengths are in EVERYTHING."
Then it hit me: Jiraiya? Tsunade-san told me about him! He’s a perv. I remember, she told me that he peeps at girls a lot and wants to write pervy books. Never mind what I said before, he’s no good.
“Now, I want all of you at the 7th training ground tomorrow at nine am for your test. I want to see these skills in action, alright?"
"Hai!" the three of us said in unison, yearning for a real chance to show our skills as ninja.

THE NEXT DAY

*Yawn…*
"Ookami-kun, what kinda attitude is that? We're about to a get a chance to show off. Show some spark, geez..." I said, lightly punching his arm.
"Sorry kushina-chan, I’m really tired cuz I didn’t sleep that well last night."
"Okay, you guys. Here’s what you’re gonna do. I've got these two bells here and you have to get from me. There are no rules, just get the bells from me, you got it?"
“I said BELLS. BELLS, dammit!” he continued.
“Uuuuuummm… No one said anything, Sensei.” Minato said, looking around nervously.
“God, you really are a pervert,” I added quietly.
"There’s 2 bells and three ninja. How’s that gonna work?" Ookami said confusedly.
"Well, That’s up to you. You’ve got to figure out how all three of you can get one, if there’s only two." sensei told us smirkingly. He knew he knew he was challenging us, but we were ready for this. We're ninja, full fledged shinobi!
"Start!" he called out calmly, as we jumped in to the surrounding greenery. I was on the branch of an oak. I saw Ookami below me, behind a large rock, but Minato was not in sight. I couldn’t see him, but I knew he wasn’t in the open. He’s smart enough not to do that. Then, suddenly, Inutsume transformed into Ookami and ran for sensei, holding a kunai. She stopped a safe distance away from him, and threw the kunai.
Looking down, I saw Ookami lift his right hand to his face, held up his middle and pointer finger and whispered “Katsu." Just then, the kunai hit the ground in front of sensei, and exploded. Sensei jumped backwards, away from the blast. From the tree behind him sprang Minato, jumping at sensei with such speed I barely saw him. But sensei turned to see him, and threw up arm up blocking a Minato's punch. I hadn't even noticed he was even going to punch him. Then, the image that appeared to be Minato began moving downward. He was changing his target from sensei's face to his stomach.
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