|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 Posted: Fri Mar 07, 2008 3:01 pm
Do not send ask azureink to approve your profile, he is not in charge of the approval process.Thread for the creation and review of New Character Profiles. This thread is for New Profiles to be reviewed by the administration before their addition to the profile threads. Profile SkeletonUsername: (Your Gaianame goes here) Name: (Your Character name goes here) Age: (How old is your character. Be realistic!) Gender: (This one's obvious.) Race: (Either Kitsune or Human. Neither gives any advantages or disadvantages.) Rank: (Your character's rank. This always starts at genin.) Village:(Optional. Where did your character live before Gaioh, if applicable) Clan: (Optional. Your character's bloodline. No Bloodlines from the series, please! see the Clan Information thread for a listing of Gaioh clans.) NOTE: ONLY THE CLANS OF GAIOH ARE ACCEPTABLE!!!Weapons: (optional, what unique weapons might your character use?) NOTE: NO MAGICAL WEAPONS WITHOUT PERMISSION!!!Bio: (Post your character's back story here. try to stray from the whole orphaned by a relative or killed their parents thing, we have too much of that already.) Personality:(Optional, how does your character act around other people?) Appearance: (post a description of your character here. If you have an appropriate image, it goes here. please try to keep the picture small. we don't like huge, page dominating pictures of you all over our thread.) Things not allowed in Profile creationThe following will not be accepted, profile will be rejected-Demons or curse seals [except as applied by a member of the guild sometime during the storyline] -Clans/bloodline traits from the series or not recognized in Gaioh [for more details see the list of clans linked above] Also multiple clans/bloodlines are not permitted. -Weapons with any kind of abilities not generated by a jutsu. -Outrageous claims of power [such as killing a high ranked ninja before entering the academy] -Overpowered/Perfect jutsu [Techniques that can't be evaded and/or have no weaknesses or drawbacks] -Any jutsu what so ever. You will make your jutsu up as you go, so you will not post what you know in the beginning profile. DO NOT POST ANY JUTSU IN YOUR PROFILE IF YOU ARE A BEGINNING GENIN!!!New rulesAll new ninja to Gaioh are ******** HUMAN! H-U-M-A-N! I don't want any of this ******** vampire, demon, angel, werewolf, alien, or what the ******** ever! YOU ARE A GOD DAMN HUMAN! Deal with it. -This rule brought to you by Chaos Beaver. Kitsune is also acceptable. -This rule brought to you by azureink. When you have filled out this form, please post it here and await approval from the Administration or a member permitted to approve profiles. If we have a problem with something in your profile, fix it before we approve you. Don't complain that we disapproved your overpowered Sephiroth clone profile. Please note, the only dialogue that goes on in this thread should be directly related to the approval of profiles. NO OOC! Also note that the content of this post is subject to change without warning as deemed necessary.
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 8:51 am
Username: AlthorEnchantor
Name: Morigana Westly (Family Name uses the characters for "Forest" and "Play", given name is Western)
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Rank: Academy Student
Village: Village Hidden in the Forest of Mists
Clan: Morganna. A minor clan, they have no clan/bloodline power beyond a tendency to study Genjutsu and Mist techniques.
Weapons: A pair of retractable katars mounted on the back of his wrists. These keep his hands free to perform hand seals. He also owns a heavy wooden staff, though he rarely uses it. Westly also carries a set of tools and lockpicks and such, which, while pointy, are not recommended for use as weapons.
Bio: There's not much to say about Westly's life story that isn't better said on the topic of his personality. His life was, for the most part, happy and uneventful, save for the one incident that led him to be transferred to Gaioh to complete his academy lessons. Westly inadvertantly caused one of his professors, a far more powerful ninja, to become severely injured. While such incidents are not entirely unheard of, Westly's bears particular mention due to the uniqueness of the incident. There were no combat or jutsus involved; Westly simply got into an extended philosophical debate with his professor on the nature of reality, and the elder ninja suffered a minor brain hemorrhage from merely trying to contemplate the full ramifications of Westly's point of view. Needless to say, Westly was declared the victor. And then exiled.
Personality: Westly seems a bit flighty at times, prone to daydreaming about his own existence and perceptions. Many tend to underestimate him because of this. Those sorts are very quickly disabused of such notions. For one, this unusual mindset makes him uniquely suited to Genjutsu techniques. Westly isn't strong so much as he is intelligent, and more than a little devious. His fighting style is acrobatic and elusive, revolving more around avoiding attacks than launching them. Fond of traps and seals, he'll often attempt to lure his opponents into terrain that works in his favor, either naturally or because he's already booby-trapped it in advance. If he believes himself outclassed, he's not above fleeing or calling for help. By and large, however, Westly avoids battles. While comptetion is certainly fun now and then, the inherent danger of a real fight outweighs the challenge.
Appearance: Dresses almost exclusively in blues and greens, with hair and eyes to match. Favors outfits with many pockets for their utility. Looks a bit young for his age, but within believable limits. Often smiling, which, depending on context, makes him look either more child-like and cute, or just plain creepy.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:46 pm
AlthorEnchantor Username: AlthorEnchantor Name: Morigana Westly (Family Name uses the characters for "Forest" and "Play", given name is Western) Age: 21 Gender: Male Race: Human Rank: Academy Student Village: Village Hidden in the Forest of Mists Clan: Morganna. A minor clan, they have no clan/bloodline power beyond a tendency to study Genjutsu and Mist techniques. Weapons: A pair of retractable katars mounted on the back of his wrists. These keep his hands free to perform hand seals. He also owns a heavy wooden staff, though he rarely uses it. Westly also carries a set of tools and lockpicks and such, which, while pointy, are not recommended for use as weapons. Bio: There's not much to say about Westly's life story that isn't better said on the topic of his personality. His life was, for the most part, happy and uneventful, save for the one incident that led him to be transferred to Gaioh to complete his academy lessons. Westly inadvertantly caused one of his professors, a far more powerful ninja, to become severely injured. While such incidents are not entirely unheard of, Westly's bears particular mention due to the uniqueness of the incident. There were no combat or jutsus involved; Westly simply got into an extended philosophical debate with his professor on the nature of reality, and the elder ninja suffered a minor brain hemorrhage from merely trying to contemplate the full ramifications of Westly's point of view. Needless to say, Westly was declared the victor. And then exiled. Personality: Westly seems a bit flighty at times, prone to daydreaming about his own existence and perceptions. Many tend to underestimate him because of this. Those sorts are very quickly disabused of such notions. For one, this unusual mindset makes him uniquely suited to Genjutsu techniques. Westly isn't strong so much as he is intelligent, and more than a little devious. His fighting style is acrobatic and elusive, revolving more around avoiding attacks than launching them. Fond of traps and seals, he'll often attempt to lure his opponents into terrain that works in his favor, either naturally or because he's already booby-trapped it in advance. If he believes himself outclassed, he's not above fleeing or calling for help. By and large, however, Westly avoids battles. While comptetion is certainly fun now and then, the inherent danger of a real fight outweighs the challenge. Appearance: Dresses almost exclusively in blues and greens, with hair and eyes to match. Favors outfits with many pockets for their utility. Looks a bit young for his age, but within believable limits. Often smiling, which, depending on context, makes him look either more child-like and cute, or just plain creepy. I don't have any problem with this except calling the Morganna a clan. I suggest calling it a family.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 9:18 am
Quote: I don't have any problem with this except calling the Morganna a clan. I suggest calling it a family. Done. Anything else, or may I dive into the Academy thread?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Thu Mar 13, 2008 1:49 pm
AlthorEnchantor Quote: I don't have any problem with this except calling the Morganna a clan. I suggest calling it a family. Done. Anything else, or may I dive into the Academy thread? Not that I can see... As for the Academy... it seems to be vacant at the moment. We don't seem to have any teachers since the last reorganization. EDIT - Academy has been thrown out for the moment... everyone starts out as Genin.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Mar 16, 2008 2:39 pm
Username: Shinji Silken Shinobi Name: Vel O. Circi (pronouned Sear-see) Age: 17 Gender: male Race: Experimented Human Rank: Genin Village: A small village higher in the gaioh territory's mountains. Clan: N/A Weapons: Aron has been physically altered, and has the additional use of a tail and claws(hands and feet). Most notable is the pair of large raptor claws on his feet, nearly six inches long. Bio: Aron was abducted by Chaos during the earlier days of his human experimenting. Chaos had come across some fossilized raptor, and discovered a process to restore it's DNA. After that point, a compleicated process fuzed the DNA of the two beings, raptor and Human, creating a frightening hybrid. The experiment yielded fewer results than expected. Strength was not superior. Speed was average, above average. Endurance was normal... To this day, Chaos denies having created such a disapointing subject. Personality: Aron is generally bitter and quick to snap. Chaos had done him an injustice, but he lacks the strength to do anything about it. He is very frustrated, and very anxious to fight. He will not back down after he let's out a roar. He wears a muzzle to prevent himself from biting people, as he has in the past done so. Appearance: ((This one's temporary until I can get my Drawn/colored/altered one scanned.)) 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 2:03 pm
Shinji. Nice try, but if you want to be non human, you need to have exactly the same abilities as a human.
For example, A Kitsune or Nekomimi Character would have abnormal ears and a tail, but the tail would be pretty much useless, and their hearing would be about the same as a human's (Chakra can be used to augment hearing to a degree).
Claws, at least of the size you described, would be unrealistic.
A person could grow their nails out and file them to clawlike points, but not really long without compromising the strength of the nail (six inch nails would break when struck hard enough).
Tone down the size of the claws, and keep in mind I won't allow them to have any special properties (like carving through rock or metal without using a jutsu).
Have you cleared that bio with Chaos?
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 3:04 pm
I figured that would happen, but I guess it was worth trying to have slip by >.< Would it be acceptable if the claws grew in at a later time? It would equate to training with a new weapon in my opinion. My target point for the potential growth would be a few weeks past his first Chunnin exam attempt, and would then take about a month to reach their proper size. If not, oh well...
And thankyou for reminding me to ask him. It slipped my mind during the posting because of a dinner call and tasty food...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Mar 17, 2008 6:30 pm
I can't give you a go for this Shinji... While Chaos has abducted a number few ninja there are three key flaws in this. One, Chaos deals with plants not animals. He would of never even bothered with Raptor DNA. Two, almost all of Chaos's experiments don't live very long. Often dieing from the experiment. Last, any that do survive are usually killed to prevent them from being found out.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Mar 18, 2008 5:20 pm
gaia name pyroka
name pyroka kirazaki
village the village hidden in the ash
clan akuma
techniques lightning strike: a technique where the user creates a small ball of chakra (normally lightning chakra) that can be withdrawn into the user's body or ejected from the user's body.
lightning chains: allows the user to create temporary exstension's from the hands and feet allowing the user to keep his hands free. this jutsu only lasts for a short time without the hand sign being continued.
fire ball jutsu
age 14
rank genin
weapons shurikens,kunai, and the lightning cutter, a kirazaki family heirloom, it originally belonged to pyrokas great,great grandfather
personality while normally very calm pyroka can sometimes go a litte crazy.
bio as a boy pyroka lived in the village but when the Ichijin destroyed the village he fled to the village in the ash. growing up in the village hidden in the ash pyroka became a pick pocket to get the money he needed to survive.
but when the village hidden in the ash was being destroyed he fled once again to a cave he had found one day. pyroka lived in the cave for 5 years before hearing about the restoration about gaioh he soon made his way to the village
apperance [picture coming soon]
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:55 pm
Well, they aren's ALWAYS plants, there was the bird man... unless he was a plant-bird! =o But I guess I'll have to be a bit more creative and start from the ground up on a history...
The original history may be viable with some adaptations to the naruto-universe...
Vel was one of three heads to a young group of shinobi named the Tsoo (copyright City of heroes). Of the entire group, he was ranked three, and the member count was... three. It was decided that they had to find a way to make a name for themselves, and vel being the strongest at the time, was nominated to do so. They were going to attack a jounin squad from a nearby village and take the mission scroll fromt hem and complete it themselves. They failed, and each person was beaten and badly injured. Vel found himself upon the doorstep of a surgey fanatic who had performed many bizarre procedures, and decided to take it to the next level with this almost dead teenager.
After a day's worth of surgery, the doctor finished, but the ninja was in terrible condition. He had lost too much blood, so he was dumped in the middle of the woods. A gaioh patrol stumbled upon a black bodybag, and unzipped it. They only saw his face and noticed he was still breathing slowly. Only when they got him to the hospital did they realize what he actually looked like. They treated him all the same, but the quickly discharged him after he had recovered. They ASSUMED it was one of Chaos's pet's and dragged him into the woods and released him.
After several interrogation sessions over the course of the next few weeks while Vel tried to regain entry, did the administration decide to allow the strange looking person to attend shinobi classes during night sessions.
Edit: The copyright is only on the name of the group I used.
The young group of shinobi is be equatable to the "ninja" who appeared in an episode of naruto in which some non-jutsu using normal people claimed to be ninja and infiltrated the village dressed as Gai and Lee.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Wed Mar 19, 2008 6:00 pm
The bird was Curse mark experiment. He was stuck in a stage two release of the curse mark.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Sun Mar 23, 2008 7:57 pm
(( just need some things reviewed for a genin ))
Gaia Username: Pheso
Name: Icarus Akuma
Age: 15
Birthday: March 14th
Gender: Male
Rank: Genin / working on Donin
Clan: Akuma ( Main )
Chakra Element: Water
Village: Gaioh
Fighting Style:
-While Icarus has, probably, one of the loosest and most adaptable styles in gaioh, he pretends to be much weaker than he actually is. He favors fun over victory in any fight and will waste his energy running around doing complicated stunts if it means that he will have fun fighting his opponent.
Jutsu:
Genjutsu:
None
Ninjutsu:
-Akuma Bloodline: can substitute any element chakra but the one strong against his main element ( earth ) into his jutsu. This would allow him to either completely substitute and element, example: fire chakra for the water sword jutsu, for a jutsu, or combine two elements, example: fire and water chakra to create a boiling water clone, for one jutsu.
-Water Clone ( ram, boar, horse): User creates clones of himself using water.
-Water Sword ( ram, ox ): the creates a sword made of water. It turns solid when being used to attack. Icarus' sword takes the shape of an elegant scimitar.
--Liquid Whip ( ram, ox ): starts creating a water sword, but finishes creating the form by stretching out and solidifying the water into an elastic, yet usable, whip.
-Frozen Shot: Forms a ball of water in his hand and freezes it. This is usually pitched directly at the enemy, but it has other uses.
Ninjutsu ( medical ):
-Medical Bind ( none ): a minor healing jutsu. Can only heal small to moderate cuts, scratches, and gashes on the surface of the skin. If Icarus could find scrolls or a mentor in the healing arts, this jutsu could become much stronger.
Taijutsu:
-Leaf Whirlwind: Drops down low to the ground and preforms a spinning trip kick. With enough chakra application, the kick will drag the wind with it and create a barrier that will counter the enemy's physical attacks and blow them in a random direction.
-Stances: Icarus has certain stances he enters during battle that help with certain aspects of his fighting.
--Tiger Fist: Standing straight up, Icarus places his feet in a right angle and puts his right arm out in front of him with his hand flat and facing towards him. He puts his left arm behind him at about waist level with his hand balled into a fist. This stance is best suited for evasion and countering.
--Ox Wall: Stands in a horse straddle stance and brings his arms down to a locked position at his sides. This stance is best suited for defense because his balance increases to five times what is would be standing normally.
--Dragon Point: More of a style of fighting than anything, he jumps around in about a foot in diameter imaginary circle with both of his fists raised in front of his face. Much like a boxing stance, this allows for quick reactions for attacking and defending from physical attacks.
Appearance:
14
15
Personality:
Icarus is a kind soul who tries to help people whenever he can. He is almost always seen with a smile and shrugs off most insults or hurtful actions towards him as mere fun. Despite his physical training and the nature of his family, Icarus doesn't really like fighting for anything but a fun spar. He has recently began to accept his role as a shinobi, and knows that the path he has taken will lead him to hurt people in the future.
History:
Icarus was born into a family that prided themselves on their fighting skills. Almost the immediate moment that Icarus could walk, he was given his first light armor and a small plastic weapon to train with. Though the training was hard and rigorous, it was worth it as every year Icarus grew stronger and lighter on his feet. One day, when he was 14, Icarus was ambushed by a gang of thieves. They couldn't have made a worse mistake that day. Icarus dispatched the entire group as if they were nothing, While Icarus' family was proud, Icarus wasn't.
Not only was he sad that it was such an easy fight, but he was sad for the people he had almost killed. He felt so bad that he actually paid a visit to them the next day in the hospital. What he saw there was amazing. While he HAD put the hoodlums into critical condition, the medical experts seemed perfectly fine with the matter. They preformed like a well ordered machine, working like he had never seen in order to heal the thieves. Icarus was inspired by this and later begged his parents to enroll in the academy to become a medical ninja.
They disagreed and said the medical aspect would be a damper on his abilities. That's when Icarus noticed his grandfather's armor on the wall. He suggested that, if they let him go, he will do as much training as always, but he will do it in the heavy armor so that it will account for almost double the training. His parents didn't believe him but, sure enough, the next day Icarus was doing the family training regime, not only early, but with the heavy armor on as well. They let this continue for a year and, on his fifteenth birthday, they handed him his acceptance letter into the academy.
After taking many odd classes and meeting many odd individuals, Icarus believed that he had the basis of controlling his chakra down. After an attack on the school, staged by Akuhei of Chains, he went out and practiced his tennis. While at first he meant to train alone, he soon met a genin around his age who questioned him about the sport. Soon the two were playing a set against each other and, to his dismay, Icarus lost. This had been Icarus' first defeat in anything in quite a while, though oddly enough he was smiling about it in the end. Both boy's simply stated "good game" and walked away from the court with smiles.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:25 pm
Username: Death Mistress Ryutsumi
Name: Shikaze Ryutsumi
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Rank: Genin
Village: Leaf
Clan: Seisatsu
Weapons: Twin chakram, a whip made of conductive metal, and er paintings.
Bio: Born to a small branch of the seisatsu in leaf called the Shikaze, she left for Gaioh so she could be with the main clan.
Personality: Will do almost whatever necessary to come out on top.
Appearance: I'll have someone draw it, it'll be a while
Just revised it for Genin purposes, want it re-approved
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Posted: Tue Mar 25, 2008 3:05 pm
Pyroka, Pheso, And Rytsumi are all approved.
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
Reply
