My Sweet Darling

[Naga Tragic]

Hi. I wrote a poem a while back about Ecl. Any opinions on it?

My sweet darling

Will you call for me once more

When listening to your soothing voice

I already begin to fade

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My sweet darling

Will you sing to me once more

Sing your songs of the void

That lure me every time

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My sweet darling

Will hold me once more

Cradle me in numbing arms

When this world is just too tough

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My sweet darling

Will you welcome me once more

Shelter me in a time of need

When I am too weak to stand

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My sweet darling

Will you answer me once more

Answer my call and dearest request

So please just say yes

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And to my sweet Ecl, I will give

 

[Naga Tragic]

snowflakes_on_eyelashes

Good? More like Great!!!

aw, thanks. 4laugh