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Posted: Sun Aug 28, 2005 12:42 pm
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 8:08 am
Man, I just wish that my old computer had internet... then I can add a story here, instead of this.
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 5:16 pm
Wait.. here's one I recently made up...
MegaMan 3 part 1
Wily struck again. He had taken the newest of Dr. Light's inventions, Gamma. Rock, and his new robotic dog, Rush, try to stop the mad scientist. He had also created 8 new robots, and sent them to destroy Rock.
NeedleMan- He fires... needles! MagnetMan- He fires (auto guided) magnets GeminiMan- He duplicates, so you have 2 GeminiMen to kill! HardMan- He jumps and tries to crush you TopMan- Spinnin' around... SnakeMan- He fires little snakes that go up walls SparkMan- He throws... sparks ShadowMan- Fires dangerous blades
Rock quickly got ready for his adventure. He started with NeedleMan.
"You're the blue bomber, eh?" boomed a voice above Rock. "Well, I'm NeedleMan, and I'll be your host!" He soon landed in front of Rock, and aimed his cannon carefully. "Now, dammit! Hold still so I can kill you!" "Why would I?!" yelled Rock, and he quickly jumped to the side. "God dammit, Blue Bomber! Stay still so I can hit you at least once!" "No!" "Shut up!" "No!" "DIE!!!" And with that, he injured Rock horribly. He smiled triumphantly, turned around, and walked away. "I'm not through with you yet!" Rock said. "My god, why won't you die?" NeedleMan yelled. Rock hit him with a blow from his cannon. "Hey! You don't think that hurt?!" "No, and why would I care?" Rock responded. He hit him once more. And again. And again. And again. "Well, I've won." Rock said, and destroyed NeedleMan.
After destroying NeedleMan, he was really tired and in pain from all of the needles. When he was repaired, he soon went off to battle SnakeMan. When he found SnakeMan, he had his back turned, drinking a glass of wine. He soon saw him, and turned around. "Ahh!!! MegaMan! What a surprise!" he said. "It ends here!!!" yelled Rock. "Don't try playing nice with me!" "Whatever." SnakeMan said, and he threw the wine glass over his shoulder. "Die!" Rock yelled, and shot SnakeMan. But he merely dodged his attack. "Wha...?" "MegaMan! It's time for you to die!" He shot a snake at Rock, only for him to dodge it. "Idiot." Rock mumbled. "Ha! Don't worry, you'll suffer." SnakeMan pointed to the snake, and the snake was chasing poor Rock. "What the?!" Rock cried, and he was bitten, having poison injected into his bloodstream. "You're the idiot!" SnakeMan laughed, and shot him with more snakes. He grabbed him, and threw him onto the ground. "Give up?!" "No!!!!" Rock yelled. He suddenly remembered something. While he was searching for NeedleMan, he found an energy tank. He grabbed the stored energy tank, and said, "That's why I don't give up." SnakeMan stared at him. His eye twitched in anger. "It's my turn." Rock kicked the side of SnakeMan's head, breaking his snake shaped helmet. "Hey!" SnakeMan yelled in pain. Rock equipped Needle Cannon, the weapon he got from NeedleMan, and said, "So long, SnakeMan."
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Posted: Sun Sep 04, 2005 6:09 pm
Bass, an evil creation made by Dr. Wily, stood on top of a building. He was purple instead of goldenrod, and he had wings. He had merged with Treble, his robotic wolf. "Stupid robot masters... they will pay..." He said to himself. "Listen up!!" he yelled to his companions. Clearly, he seemed to have been made with GeminiMan's personal trait. Making duplicates of himself. "MegaMan is mine, you take care of the rest." He was referring to the robot masters.
"I want them all dead!"
"Go now and do your job!" He said to himself, "This time victory will be mine MegaMan..." "There is no way out.
Meanwhile, at Dr. Light's Lab...
"Dr., we need to go now. Bass may attack the lab soon." ProtoMan said impatiently.
"I can't leave yet, the upgrades aren't ready." Dr. Light told the impatient robot.
"Damn. I'll go with Duo and the Robot Masters and hold his clones back..." ProtoMan decided. "I'll leave MegaMan with you.. please... hurry up."
"ProtoMan!" Dr. Light called to him before he left. "Good luck..."
ProtoMan arrived at Bass's hideout. "Here they come... let's go!" he commanded to the robot masters.
A raging battle ran through the hideout. Many blasts and cuts were seen. FreezeMan was soon destroyed by the clones.
"FreezeMan!!!" SwordMan yelled. He was destroyed, too.
"There's too many of them!" ProtoMan cried out.
"Go..." Duo whispered.
"What?! You're crazy!" Protoman said.
"You have to go, make sure MegaMan makes it.." Duo said.
"No, no, no! You don't get it..." ProtoMan began to argue with Duo.
"JUST GO!!!!" yelled Duo. This is as far as you will all get!! Duo whispered in his mind, as the clones ran towards him. He charged up his fist, and hit it against the ground... Then... there was an explosion.
"Duo... no..." ProtoMan whispered. Clones suddenly appeared in front of him. "This is impossible..." A charged up attack destroyed the clones. "Wow." ProtoMan breathed.
MegaMan soon appeared with his upgrades.
"Brother!" ProtoMan cried.
"What happened to the rest?" MegaMan asked ProtoMan.
"They've been destroyed." ProtoMan knew what he ment by "the rest". The robot masters.
"And Duo?"
"......... I'm sorry... Wait. Where are you going?" MegaMan turned around.
"To destroy them all." MegaMan responded. He ran off and destroyed the horde of clones.
"It's amazing..." ProtoMan told himself. "Dr. Light did a great job!"
On top of a cliff, Roll and Dr. Light were watching the raging battle. "Dr.... It's working! Rock is beating them!" Roll said in amazement and surprise.
"Yes... I'm glad, Roll... I hope this war ends soon." Dr. Light said.
"Me, too... I don't want anything to happen to my brother..." She felt something terrifying behind her. It was something evil, something deadly. "Brother..."
"Dear god... Roll!!!!"
Bass was behind Roll, his cannon aimed at her. He charged up a shot, then fired.
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Posted: Tue Sep 06, 2005 7:38 pm
That's some pretty good stuff, Krall. If you don't mind, here's a little advice: Don't use so much punctuation in the dialogue. The best way to show emotion is to describe it in the setnences around the speech, not the speech itself.
Here's a little excerpt from my latest chapter of Rockman X: Third Force.
Ah, there's another one.
Sigma quickly extended his lit beam sabre, the blade of plasma and light cutting clean through the waist of the RAI infantryman as he sped by. Mechanical organs and steel skeletal parts showered to the ground in a pool of blood-colored operation fluid. The soldier had been so focussed upon gunning down the two maverick ball-walkers before him that he hadn't even seen the maverick leader until he was already in two pieces. Consciousness rushed from his mind and left behind it a lifeless hunk of metal and wires soaking in its own fluids.
Sigma had a hard time not smiling.
An incoming transmission announced itself within Sigma's right tranciever. He openned the channel with a thought. The voice of the same subordinate who had implimented his 'triple-wave' plan filled Sigma's ears.
"Sir, first and second wave are ready for deployment. Shall I send them to take out Fire-man?" "Negative. Which side of the base are most of the RAI attempting to enter through?" "About seventy-five percent of the enemy forces are concentrated near the east wall." "Perfect. Send first wave around from the south and second wave from the north. See if you can find two wasp-flyers that aren't in combat to come in from the east and lay down fire on them once they're trapped between first and second wave."
"Immediately, sir!" Sigma could practically smell the elation in the minion's voice.
Signas is getting smarter. Fortunately enough, his forces aren't. I'm suprised I haven't seen the wonder twins yet, though. Those two always show up at the worst possible second, and I don't see how this could get any worse. Wait...
And that was when he felt it. Not quite a something, but far too much to be a nothing. It was a prescence fading in and out of Sigma's awareness, like a sixth sense. It was similar to the feeling he got around anyone infected with the maverick virus, but on a much, much larger scale. At which point he remembered the sensation. This something wasn't infected with the maverick virus, it was the source.
Zero...
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 11:45 am
Dash!! That... was awesome! I haven't really gotten to see into Sigma's mind often.... but what about the yaoi fic? I kinda... wanna read more.
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:18 pm
Arashi Tenshi Dash!! That... was awesome! I haven't really gotten to see into Sigma's mind often.... but what about the yaoi fic? I kinda... wanna read more. The blue reploid then began gently stroking the back of Zero's head, never having realized just how soft the hunter's blonde tresses were until now. Despite how thick the hair was, X could only describe it as "angellic" as he ran several strands between his fingers. A muffled sob drew X's attention away from the hair and back towards its owner. He couldn't help but smile sympathetically as Zero's tears gently rolled down the front of X's shoulder armor, collecting at the bottom edge and eventually falling to the cold floor in large drops. X wasn't sure what to do, noting with dismay that his embracing Zero had done little to fight his tears. X needed to do something more, something that could heal all of Zero's wounds in one swift stroke. The blue soldier frantically rummaged through his memory of human emotions and reactions, searching desperately for the means to mend Zero's soul. And then he found it. X had seen many humans do it before, and even a few reploids. X specifically remembered seeing Zero perform the act to Iris when the female reploid was still alive, and it had intruiged him. Apparently, Iris's brother had made some type of military decision that had resulted in about a dozen civilian casualties, and Iris had come running to Zero for support. That one action had pulled the girl straight out of the dephs of sadness in an instant. X placed his hand beneath Zero's chin and gently lifted his head up, taking a moment to stare into the warrior's limitless blue eyes before leaning forward, tilting his head, and softly connecting Zero's lips with his own. ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ I'm still stuck there. sweatdrop
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:23 pm
That's what you posted last time.... /whining. Hmm..... well... What's Zero's reaction? I'm sure there's surprise at first at the very least. And then what?
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:24 pm
If you wish to read my better works, please go HERE. However, I do ask that you PLEASE leave a review for any chapters you read, even if they aren't that great. xd
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:26 pm
Arashi Tenshi That's what you posted last time.... /whining. Hmm..... well... What's Zero's reaction? I'm sure there's surprise at first at the very least. And then what? That's my problem. Zero is surprised at first, then there's the revelation that he likes it, that he loves X, then they make out... It's too cliche! I've written several fics that include that result, and it always ends up painfully corny. So, I'm stuck. stressed
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:28 pm
So push it off a little. Maybe at first he thinks he doesn't like it and rejects X and angsts for a while. He does still love Iris right? He probably needs to say his real last farewell to her first. THEN he can go make out with X. xd
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:31 pm
Arashi Tenshi So push it off a little. Maybe at first he thinks he doesn't like it and rejects X and angsts for a while. He does still love Iris right? He probably needs to say his real last farewell to her first. THEN he can go make out with X. xd That's really a great idea, and any other time I'd use it. Unfortunately, Zero's too weak at the moment to reject anything. I've pretty much backed myself into a corner. gonk
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:34 pm
... What if he just kinda fell asleep, X put him to bed, then quietly shut the door?
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:42 pm
Arashi Tenshi ... What if he just kinda fell asleep, X put him to bed, then quietly shut the door? I'm working on something similar to that. While I'm not using your specific ideas, the possibilities you've offered have put my gears in motion again, so thanks. 3nodding
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Posted: Wed Sep 07, 2005 7:45 pm
That''s all I can ever really hope for! I''m so happy! ^_^
Honestly... I''d be a little disapointed if anyone ever used my ideas raw without tweaking them a bit. So I really am happy. ^^
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