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 Posted: Fri Apr 04, 2008 7:30 pm
There is no such thing as a bad idea.
any thoughts of yours will do.
My characeter: the beloved Gabriel Jared.
Everyone wants me to write him his own story, therefore I need more ideas for him.
Gabriel Jared was born of a wealthy family with excellent aristocratic history.
He loves pastel, Reading, Horseback ridding, socializing, writting, and drawing,etc. His list goes on. He is oddly extremely gifted working with electronics. Even is said to be the Lord of Hackers.
He is a hyper crazy genious that is sent to a nut house. Rest assured his family provides for him. The hospital is not exactly what you would say cold. It is more like a beautiful resort, only the best of the best (extremely wealthy) may stay here.
In the hospital Gabriel Jared is described as a complete nutcase!
He is heavily guarded 24/7 and must be kept away from all electronics and any type of computer. Not a strikingly gorgeous guy like brad pitt, but is the object of affection wherever he goes. He is a charmer, a really good talker, a people person, a wonderful socializer. He keeps himself well kept and hates dirt. He has multiple personalities.
It never crosses his mind that he is crazy, he never tries to deny it. He tried to assasinate his grandmother believing she was the antichrist.
He ends up escaping and hides away in the hospital for 4-1/2 months,hiding away like a hamster lost in a house. The warden is obsessed with catching him. In the end he flies away on a celebritys private jet because he hacked into the system and set it up for himself. The warden swears he will get him if its the last thing he ever does!
The ending of my recent book (its published if you ever want to buy and read it)
Looking at the post card, doctor Raoulskeey flinched. He crumpled it not caring to finish reading the P.s.
"That son of a b....
The jet was extraordinary! The franky Sinatra come fly with me played to the young mans liking. There the clouds were outside, beautiful. Just simply beautiful. He looked at his his rolex watch reading the time, tapping his rings along the arm rest. Not a wrinkle in sight on his new pink pinstripe suit, with help from the warden's credit card he had borrowed.
He was being watched very closely by an older woman stewardess. She smirked tugging on her uniform to bring out a little more cleavage.
"more wine sir?" the stewardess asked bending over hoping he would admire her better from that angle.
"Indudabley." he answered not paying attention to her, but to the young pilot in training.
And what a pilot to be he was, just his type indeed. Gabriel Jared smiled thinking to himself rubbing his hands together, then straightening his pink silk tie.
This was going to be an excellent long trip.
Meanwhile the young actor was confused and pissed off.
"where the hell is my jet?"
His mistake made him pay. Once his voice gave himself away, the cameras fled to him. There was no escape. He sighed accepting defeat.
"s**t."
In the sunset sky the private jet went, flying to its destination.
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Now I have had request for Gabriel Jared's own personal story. This book was not completely Gabrieal Jared's. LOL. the ending was at that.
I accept all ideas. Like I say there is no such thing as a bad idea.
thanks.
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Posted: Sun Apr 06, 2008 10:51 am
What's the name of the book? It definitely sounds interesting.
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Posted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 6:05 pm
I'm wondering personally about the multiple personalities thing. From what you're describing, the character's had a pretty good life so far, but basically every documented case of multiple personalities stemmed from some sort of severe childhood trauma I'm sure some couldn't be figured out so far, but those that have derived from such problems). Soemthing so serious that the mind felt it had to create other personas to let out the subconscious emotions. Unlike schizophrenia (hearing voices, et cetera), it's not really passed down genetically or anything.
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Posted: Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:08 am
Besides the whole, being crazy and whatnot, he kind of sounds a little too perfect to me. But I dunno. P:
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Posted: Thu Jun 05, 2008 2:57 pm
The idea seems sound but I personaly enjoy using a very tragick event in eather his past or an event to come that makes the story stick in your mind. That is what has worked the best for me.
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