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One of my old songs: Turn Out the Light need some feedback.

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harasabigodd

PostPosted: Tue Apr 08, 2008 6:42 pm


Ive stood by you

Day in and day out

You've made me happy too

So tell me whats wrong

Why do you do what you do?

Life is short

Too short to be with someone like you



You'll walk alone again

Empty dull and on your own again

Without me

Baby

turn out the light

I wont be home tonight



If you dont want me to go

Then stop it all

Just before you fall

I dont want us to fail

I want to be here

But I cant stand all the things you do

I'll live without you



You'll walk alone again

Empty, dull and on your own again.

Without me

Baby

turn out the light

I wont be home tonight



Maybe I'll come back one day

But in case I dont

Listen for me on the radio

Singing this song for you

Baby I love you

We'll walk as one again

Alive and right again

Your here with me

Baby

Turn on the light

I'll be home tonight
PostPosted: Wed Apr 08, 2009 12:16 am


Wow, that song is sooooo good! I love the lyrics - they were obviously well thought about and they're very heartfelt. Keep writing songs like that and you could be very successful.

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