Believe it or not I actually spent MORE than two minutes on this one! Amazing, yeah? I spent TEN minutes on it. Lol. Critique and edit?

The scent of cotton candy
Always fill the air.
The gasps of horror and shock
Tells you that someone is scared.
And unlike in reality,
These carnies can’t escape,
Because they’re locked inside my head,
And that is where they will remain.

The giggles of families
Join in with the clowns.
The nauseated adults
Rush off the ride in frowns,
But, unlike in reality,
These guests of mine can’t leave,
Because they’re locked inside my head,
And this is where they will always be.

Because locked all alone
In my head is not fun.
So be ready because. . .

My collection is not done.