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hospitalflowers

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PostPosted: Sun Apr 13, 2008 7:37 am


Okay, so this is another project thing for school I had to do. It's kinda lame because there could only be two stanzas, three lines each, and every end word had to rhyme with every line in the stanza. >.<

They argue and they fight,
They fight with all their might,
But even worse yet--they think it's quite alright!

These voices in my head
Know exactly what I dread.
And just when I think they're done--they have something more to be said!
PostPosted: Wed Apr 23, 2008 2:39 pm


Don't you just hate poetry assignments? They seem to kill all creative in you. This one seems okay, though a little average. Maybe come up with words that people wouldn't use everyday to make it that more unique. But as it is, it's get's the job done so it's okay.

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PostPosted: Fri May 23, 2008 6:30 pm


Very good. I can never seem to manage rhyming poetry.

The only thing I can think of to make it better is to make it a little longer, but for the assignment I guess you can't.
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