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PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:03 pm


This is a story that i wrote years ago with a friend. We had written it together over the internet and then when we had finished we wrote more. for about three years we wrote a bunch of stories all in a series kinda way and since then we have kinda forgot about them. i found them the other day in cleaning and i have decided i would rewrite them. they were, at the time fanfictions and so now i have changed the names and some of the plot and i will be posting them here. they were short but, knowing me, they will be quite long when i am finished. so here is the first story, Once it was called Fallen Angel, now i am calling it Angels Awakening.
PostPosted: Sun Apr 20, 2008 10:17 pm


Chapter 1: Fall From Grace.

Spring had arrived. The ground was blanketed in green, the soft smell of grass after a rain shower flowed on the air. Flowers bloomed everywhere leaving the sweet smells of blossoms and bees buzzing busily provided the beautiful afternoon with an orchestra of sweet spring sounds and the birds sang with shear delight in choruses of spring chants to praise the creation of a wonderful world. Everything was happily poetic in its own respect and yet not everyone was content. The turn of the season did not fix the pain that a whole year can bring and Hope had lost all hope in a change for the better.
With a nervous sigh and a heavy heart she stood in her place and raised the book before her, into her line of sight. She cleared her throat, took a deep, shaking breath and looked around her. Her class mate snickered at the sight of her and her eyes filled with tears. She looked straight heard at the black board and at the stark white walls of the class room. The clock had hardly moved an inch since she had last looked at it longingly.
“Do not be afraid for I am with you,” she said softly as she read the text before her, “he who believes in me will...” the school bell rang suddenly and the class shuffled around her. The teach spoke but she did not hear a word of it through the noise of the class leaving.
“Move it weirdo, we want to leave,” the people around her said as she was pushed and bumped out of their ways.
At last the moment had passed and she could fall into her reveries once more, away and sheltered by silence. She fell back into her seat. Closed the book before her and placed her head down on her arms. Her teacher watched her with some concern.

***


“Would you get ready, already,” a boy cried impatiently as he watched his sister sitting on the steps of the church with her guitar in her hand and papers pinned down by rocks, “just because you have a spare and can waist your afternoon doesn’t mean you can take up my time.
“I’m almost done,” the blond girl said, looking up for her music, “just let me finish this one page. I almost have the song learned for Sunday. It’s going to be a wonderful mass.”
“I don’t care,” the boy said as he hushed his voice, “you know I don’t believe in that crap and I wouldn’t catch me dead in church if I was old enough to make my own decisions, not to mention I would be out of this private school in a second. The nuns drive me crazy and I will never believe in some guy I can’t see.” he said angrily, “now get up and drive me home so I can get out of this terrible uniform.”
“Well for your information, I do believe, and I take this very seriously. So you can be patient and then I will drive you home. Or if you are so impatient walk.” Ella said as she rolled her eyes and continued to play her guitar.
“Fine I will!” the boy yelled and stomped off in the direction of home.

***


“That really was a great jam session guys!” cried an adrenalin-pumped young man.
“I would say it was Gavin,” Agreed one of his older brothers, “I can’t believe we wrote three songs in that short amount of time. Can you Malcolm?”
“No, but the creative energy was just flowing like crazy today,” Malcolm said as he walked pasted his brothers and pulled a soda out of a small refrigerator in the old shop. It had been closed for a long time but the spaces that had once been a street full of store and were now rented out to bands as practice space. The brother pooled their little incomes together to rent the space to practice in.
“If we get them really great we’ll start demoing them next week,” Malcolm added as he fell into a warn out leather couch.
“Just as soon as Riley gets new strings for his guitar,” Gavin said as he fell into the couch next to his brother, “I could keep going but no, Riley had to break a string and now we have to stop.”
“I’m sorry I don’t have millions of strings stashed away in the event I break one. You don’t have drum skins in the event I put my foot through it now do you!” Riley said angrily.
“Now, guys lets not fight,” Malcolm, the middle brother, said, “when we make it big you wont have to worry about strings or drum skins you have replacement guitars and drums and people to fix things for you.”
“That’s easy for you to say, you play piano,” Gavin laughed.
“Not even piano, he play’s keyboards. They never need strings or sticks or even tuning,” Riley said.
“Oh man, you’re right Riley,” Gavin said as he jumped up, “but I can play keys too so I say next time make Malcolm play guitar and buy your strings, you play drums and I’ll play keys and we’ll see how he likes it.”
“Oh no,” Malcolm said as he slammed his can down on the table, “I’ll stick to playing keys and we’ll call it a night, alright?”
“You just give up because you know you can’t win!” Gavin said with a laugh.
“I didn’t start this. I was trying to settle it in the first place,” Malcolm sighed.
“Yeah, whatever,” Riley laughed as he pulled his car key’s out of his pocket, “lets go home. We’ve been here long enough and now we are getting on each others nerves. It’s time to put the band aside and just be for a while”
“Never man!” Gavin said as he jumped up, “live the band, breath the band, music is life!”
“And we’re brothers so we can’t really break up the band...” Malcolm laughed.
“Ok, whatever, I have homework to get to and so I am finished for the day. If either of you want a ride home, I’m going that way, if not have fun hanging out in the jam space!” Riley said and walked out the door.
“Hey wait!” Gavin yelled, “I’m to lazy to walk home!”
“Me too!” Malcolm called after them and slammed the door to the jam space behind him.

***


Hope gathered her things into her book bag and walked out of the class room. Her teacher followed her with her eyes and out into the busy hallway.
“Hey looser,” a tall beautiful blond girl called as she passed her with a group of cheerleader friends, “that mural portrait of me you did looks way to like me, I think you have a crush on me but I just came to tell you that I am so totally straight and that even if I wasn’t you totally wouldn’t have like the smallest chance, ok!” she laughed and her friends laughed too and continued down the hall.
“Isn’t that the purpose of a portrait?” Hope asked herself as she continued to walk alone, “and I didn’t even want to do it. Just one more thing to make me look even weirder.”
“Hope are you alright?” the teacher asked as she walked out of the hallway and out of the school beside her student.
“Yes,” Hope sighed.
“I heard what Misty said to you, and it was rude. You are the best artist in the school. That mural is going to be the highlight of the graduating class and you capture people perfectly. I am very proud of you,” the teacher said with a kind smile.
“Thank you,” Hope whispered as she stared at the ground.
“What is wrong Hope?”
“Do you think I’m odd?” Hope asked as she choked back tears.
“Absolutely not. You are a little introverted but very talented. Your understanding of literature and art is amazing. You are my prize student and I know you’ll be able to do anything with your life.”
“Thanks,” Hope said as she stopped at the side walk and looked down the street and the group of cheerleaders that were walking in a large group together.
“Do you need a ride home?” her teacher asked.
“No, thank you. I’ll walk,” Hope said.
“Alright,” her teacher said with a sigh, “just be careful.”
“I will,” Hope said and walked off alone.
She watched as the large group of girls ahead of her walked on and stopped at the entrance to a shopping mall that was on Hope’s way home. She knew that they would taunt her again and so she turned down a side street that took her down by a river and would go fairly far out of her way but she would eventually make it home. She walked slowly at first and then she picked up her pace as she noticed that the cheer leaders were out of sight. She stopped when she came to the bridge that crossed the river and looked over the edge into the water. It was like a sheet of glass, calm and clear and reflective. A single drop fell from the bridge and broke the surface of the water, as Hope began to cry, but she did not cry long. Something strange was happening. She looked down, deep into the water and saw a strange swirling. Reds, greens, blues, all passed before her eyes in violent swirls and flashes. The water was rushing faster and faster by the second and there was a squealing coming from somewhere behind the waters surface and then suddenly darkness and silence.

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PostPosted: Tue Apr 29, 2008 8:42 pm


Chapter 2: A Whole New World.

Hope opened her eyes slowly. The darkness around her was blurred but there was a brightness on the horizon that seemed to warm her skin and bring her back from the land of sleep. She stood up finally from where she lay. The ground has been soft and subtle but it was not her bed. It was just land, rich, soft and warm. The land has a red tinge to it but that was all that she could see. She looked around herself with delight and yet a sense that something was very different. This was not the place she had come from, the busy city scape that she was used to, but a new, bare plain that seemed to be lifeless and yet it breathed in a way that she knew there was to be life.
“What a beautiful sky,” she thought as she walked on. “But why does everything seem so strange and yet so very new?” she asked herself as she went on.
The scene before her was a barren one. There were no trees, no rocks, nothing at all but land and sky. The sky didn’t even seem real as she looked at it. It was very different there was something missing. There was light in the sky but no clouds, or sun or anything that made it the sky she knew, but she could tell that it was the sky because it was separated from the land.
With a sudden chill she looked on at the surroundings. There was a strange red hue to everything all around her. The earth was red and the sky was red, but not like fire. There was a sinisterness in the look of everything around her and she didn’t know how she got there. If only she would find a plant or a rock, anything to take away from the redness that was everywhere.
Hope walked on slowly clutching her book bag and wishing she knew where she was. She did not know how she got there or how she was to leave. It was so different from anything she had ever seen and yet there was something about this place. There wasn’t anything in it but herself. Not a sound could be heard, no birds, or cars, the silence was defining. Hope wanted to scream at the top of her lungs, just to break the silence, but for some reason she knew no one would hear her.
Her mind began to play tricks on her. She thought she saw things out of the corner of her eye and when she turned there was nothing but endless land. She spun in a circle till she had seen all around her but nothing. She ran, as fast as her legs could carry her, but she didn’t seem to move. Nothing changed, everything was the same, all over. She was stuck, out of breath and frightened in a place she did not know. Panic set in and she fell to her knees and sobbed.
When she finally caught her breath she looked up to see the sky was swirling in front of her. The white and red swirl seemed to narrow in the middle. Hope could see a very dark figure step out of the swirling sky and begin to walk toward her. The sky continued to swirl behind the being. A little uneasy, she stood up as the thing came closer. It was a person, but it didn’t look normal. As it came closer Hope noticed it was dressed all in black, from head to toe. As he approached her, Hope could hear a faint humming that followed him as a wind swept around them. The wind and the swirling sky became very violent as the being stopped just before her.
“Who...are you...?” Hope stuttered fearfully.
Without a word, the being reached out gently and placed on finger over her mouth. She inhaled a fearful breath as the being walked in a circle around her. The sky started to swirl even more violently all around her head, as the red and white turned into a fiery orange and yellow. The being grabbed Hope’s hand and threw her bag to the ground. She watched in horror as the contents of her bag spilled out and the wind caught the sheets of her sketch book. A cyclone appeared in the distance and raced toward the two figures. As the wind grew the pages of her book were flung more violently around. They tore from the rings that bound them together and the sheets flew all around her. Suddenly the being reached out in the racing winds and plucked from the air a sheet of the paper and handed it back to Hope. She looked at it, horror struck because on the page was the image of the being before her. It was a portrait she had just finished and had entitled The Fallen One. She stepped back in horror as she looked at the figure before her. It was her creation, the creature she had imagined to be the root of all evil, it was her hell angel. He stood before her and stared menacingly.
Hope gasped as he moved suddenly and grabbed her around the waist. Her eyes filled with tears as the cyclone of wind and the firey sky fell upon her and the evil being.
“you made me,” he whispered into her ear and felt a burning sensation as the fallen one kissed her on the cheek. In her despair, a bright blue tear fell from her eye. The beast jumped back in fear and pain as he noticed Hope had begun to glow. A radiant white light erupted from all around her in a shocking brilliance that pushed the wind and the sky away from her and left her standing on calm, solid soil.
“And so it is true,” the beast growled, “you are one of them,” it hissed.
“I don’t know what you are talking about,” Hope whispered fearfully.
The beast’s eyes burned red as he pounced at her and grabbed her around the neck. Hope let out a piercing scream but could not free herself from the burning grip of the monster.
“I, the lord, will wipe out your race and rule!” he said to her as his grip became tighter.
“Hey! Leave her alone!” the two heard a woman’s voice in the distance.
The evil being disappeared as Hope fell to her knees gasping for air.
“Are you ok?” a young blonde woman asked as she ran to Hope and helped her up.
A soothing feeling passed over Hope’s body as this woman touched her. It was a cool sensation that was a welcome relief to the burning and airless situation she was in. It calmed her down and her breath returned to her. The woman’s eyes sparkled with concern but kindness radiated in her face. Hope could not help but smile as the girl helped her to her feet and looked, with her big blue eyes, at the mess that was around them.
“Are you going to be ok?” the blonde asked again.
“Yes, I think so. Thank you for coming to my rescue,” Hope said
“Don’t worry about it. Something inside me told me I had to,” The girl said, “besides it seems we are alone here and we’ll have to stick together if that thing comes back.”
“But who are you and how did you get here?” Hope asked.
“Oh my name is Ella,” the girl said and shook Hope’s hand, “and I guess I got here the same way you did. How did you get here?”
“I don’t know,” Hope answered.
“Neither do I,” Ella said as she looked around, “and I don’t suppose there is any way out of here now. We’d better stick together and try and figure something out.”
“Alright,” Hope said timidly and followed as Ella gathered the sheet of the destroyed sketch book and handed then back to Hope.
“Who was that guy?” Ella asked as she looked up into the taller girls face.
“I’m not quite sure,” Hope said as she looked through the remains of her sketch book.
“But that’s the guy!” Ella exclaimed as she saw the picture.
“Yes, I suppose it is,” Hope said as she stood staring at the drawing.
“Did you draw that?” Ella asked as she shivered.
“Yes,” Hope answered.
“Then you created your own attacker,” Ella said.
“I...I guess I did...but I didn’t mean to,” Hope said as she pushed the destroyed sketch book back into her disemboweled book bag and touched her cheek where he had kissed her. She winced and removed her hand as the burning sensation returned.
“Are you ok?” Ella cried as she saw the mark grow red on Hope’s face.
“I’m fine,” Hope said as she sucked on her burnt fingers to sooth them, “I can take care of myself.”
“Oh ok, fine,” Ella scoffed, “but I don’t think you looked like you were taking care of yourself a minute ago when he was trying to kill you. What was he saying to you?” she asked.
“I don’t totally recall. I was so scared and it all happened so fast but what I do remember was he said that he was going to ‘wipe out my race and rule’. Do you understand any of that?” Hope asked as she looked at Ella.
“Well,” Ella said as she looked strangely at Hope, “this is all very familiar in a way, but I don’t want to jump to any conclusions. Let me ask you one thing, and please don’t be offended.”
“Ok,” Hope said as she stared at Ella.
“Are you a religious person at all, whoever you are?” Ella asked.
“Oh I am sorry, my name is Hope, and I suppose I am religious although I don’t really know what it is to be religious,” Hope said with a timid smile, “I believe in God if that is what you mean.”
“Good,” Ella said.
“But what does that have to do with anything,” Hope asked.
“Well, judging by where we are and what just happened, out faith is all we have to protect us from that thing,” Ella said, “I mean he seemed pretty taken by you and he may come back to try and finish you off. I think I will come with you where ever it is you are going. There is strength in numbers you know and well I have a guitar and a book bag we could use as a weapon if we need too, although I would be devastated to destroy my guitar.”
“Alright, if you insist,” Hope said with a little giggle and a smile, “I guess we could both use the company anyway.”
The two girls looked at each other and laughed. This was a strange thing for Hope to open up to a stranger, but for some reason it felt perfectly normally, like she had known this kind hearted girl all her life. They both felt safe and they noticed that the sky had stopped swirling and returned to its original state.
Little did they know that they were being watched by the fallen one himself. His deep blue-green eyes watched and studied them carefully. As he watched them, he thought about his encounter. It aroused something deep within him. A hatred grew from deep down in him and bubbled up. It was about to begin, once again all would be snatched away from him if he didn’t act quickly. He placed his hand over his heart and closed his eyes, formulating a plan. “Their kind is pure,” he thought aloud, “if they become united with the others I do not stand a chance, but if I can corrupt these two now and before they know what they are, I may be able to use them to my advantage. Beings with those powers may prove useful to us,” the fallen angel smiled deviously and ordered one of his servants to bring him a scroll, on which were written dark and evil prophesies.
PostPosted: Mon Dec 01, 2008 1:05 pm


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