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Eviant
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PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 4:08 pm


Crawling across this foreign land
With all it's divits and hills
Moving forward, constantly forward,
Never ending
The sound of some large being
Reverberates inside my body
Seeing the pink substance ahead
And sensing danger approaching
I race for my goal
A shadow looms ominously ahead
Growing darker, darker, until there is
Nothing  
PostPosted: Mon May 05, 2008 7:27 pm


It sounds as if this person is already gone. Like they're in the judging place after death and it is now being decided. That he/she is racing to reach heaven or whatever is the good place after death but they are being judged to end up in hell or whatever is on the bad end if scale. Depending on beliefs of course.

Haruka Mori


Eviant
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PostPosted: Wed May 07, 2008 12:21 am


Lol, I like that.....I really do XD. I never thought about it that way razz
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