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 Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 11:30 am
ok i would like some feedback on these i'll put the best ones on here...... some poems are very important to me and only my good friends have read but i'll put them on too...........thx
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Posted: Mon May 26, 2008 11:43 am
A Poem
people read the story
that tells more then what is read
they may not think it means anything
other than the word's bear defanition
but heres the words
to tell them what it really means
every story
is mor than the words that make it
the soul of the writer, the artist
is on that paper
like a code, a riddle if you will
only seen by people who look
who look for the deeper meaning
they know is there
you can read every dictionary
and still not find the meaning
of all the words...........
to a poem
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 6:23 pm
Until Then
I will fight
for you, for life
I will fight
until fight gives up
I will survive
for you, for life
I will survive
until sacrafice dies
I will speak
for you, for life
I will speak
until speach has no words
I will die
for you, for life
I will die
until death can not reap
for you and life
I will fight, survive, speak, and die...
all for you
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Posted: Wed May 28, 2008 6:29 pm
Silent
I sit and ponder
why you dont care
why you dont notice
dont realize
dont see
the things I've known
for so very long
didn't you hear
or was I too quiet
did you hear, when I said...
I love you
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