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 Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 4:54 am
I wonder if you guys can guess what this one is about.
And just to let everyone know I'll occasionally write poems and post them here, and later I plan to make them all into songs.
Another Day:
Bring me up
Bring me down
Bring me anywhere but here
Bring me anywhere but here now
I see myself running through the alleyways
Looking for salvation
Wondering what I will find nearby
Some food, some help or a man to mug me
But everyday I run through the same road
With only everything to slow me down
And no where to run to
Bring me up
Bring me down
Bring me anywhere but here
Bring me anywhere but here now
Make me fly
Make me die
Put me in a new place now
Bring me up
Bring me down
Bring me anywhere but here
Bring me anywhere but here now
Now that you're gone
I seem to go down different alleys everyday
Constantly blessed and constantly molested
Is the freedom I was meant to have
Chaos all around
Words from a leader who can't lead
And I only me to support me
Bring me up
Bring me down
Bring me anywhere but here
Bring me anywhere but here now
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 7:44 am
=x
That would actually make a fairly good song...
Aaaand... I probably have no idea what this is about, but... I dunno, sounds kinda sad and lost, maybe a bit desperate... though not too sure about the last one ^.^;
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Posted: Sat Jun 07, 2008 6:28 pm
Lobo-chan =x That would actually make a fairly good song... Aaaand... I probably have no idea what this is about, but... I dunno, sounds kinda sad and lost, maybe a bit desperate... though not too sure about the last one ^.^; Actually you'd be surprised when I tell you what it's really about. On Deviantart two people (Including Shana a.k.a. Blahandahalf) thought it was about a break up and/or boredom. And you added that it sounded sad, lost and desperate. You're close but also very far off. Want to guess what it's about?
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Posted: Sun Jun 08, 2008 8:12 pm
Uhhh... a dog? *suddenly forced to remember Ribsy... Noooooooo! gonk
Uhhh, well... I dunno... if I guessed anything it would be... wrong! And then I'd get my nose whacked with a newspaper or something, aiya!
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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 9:08 pm
Lobo-chan Uhhh... a dog? *suddenly forced to remember Ribsy... Noooooooo! gonk Uhhh, well... I dunno... if I guessed anything it would be... wrong! And then I'd get my nose whacked with a newspaper or something, aiya! I won't whack you today. *Hugs* I was remembering High School and I wrote that song about being on and off of anti-depressants. xd
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Posted: Mon Jun 09, 2008 10:08 pm
Huh... now that you say that, I can see it... More in the chorus-y bit or whatever, but still... Yee ^.^ (<- that's a random noise of happiness in case you were wondering)
And yay, now newspaper whackings for the Lobo! *victory dance*
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