Boys' Dormitory (Academy)

[kisuke hyoujin]

The boys' dorm at the academy. Has a common room on the first floor where anyone is welcome, and three floors of rooms, where only the residents are allowed. On each floor there is a shared bathroom for the entire hall. These bathrooms are surprisngly luxurious for dormitory bathrooms, as they include a steam room and indoor, Japanese-themed hotsprings.  

[vampiremariana]

"Okay... This is it... I doubt now that people can see my breasts... Oh well..." Aki... Now Jeishi... zipped on her jacket and walked to the hall where her room was located.

Looking around, she saw another boy entering a room. She walked towards the end of the hall until she saw her own room. Three doors to the left was the other boy's room. Then, to the right were the hall's bathroom.

"I wonder how in the world I am gonna avoid being discovered." She walked to the room and looked at the untouched bed. It was color dark green and seemed... war-like. "War-like? No, duh?"

She putted her suit case on the bed, basicly tossing it on the bed. She sat on the bed and after some minutes of simply meditating, she stood up and closed the door.

"Good bye, Noiru Aki. Hello, Noiru Jeishi."


((now, is mah rp good? xD))  

[kisuke hyoujin]

vampiremariana

"Okay... This is it... I doubt now that people can see my breasts... Oh well..." Aki... Now Jeishi... zipped on her jacket and walked to the hall where her room was located.

Looking around, she saw another boy entering a room. She walked towards the end of the hall until she saw her own room. Three doors to the left was the other boy's room. Then, to the right were the hall's bathroom.

"I wonder how in the world I am gonna avoid being discovered." She walked to the room and looked at the untouched bed. It was color dark green and seemed... war-like. "War-like? No, duh?"

She putted her suit case on the bed, basicly tossing it on the bed. She sat on the bed and after some minutes of simply meditating, she stood up and closed the door.

"Good bye, Noiru Aki. Hello, Noiru Jeishi."


((now, is mah rp good? xD))

((not really.... putted? but there's other stuff too. Like, what up with

all the

weird spacing

you used? On top of that your pretty inspecific. a prime example is that your up on the third floor but you never mention that anywhere. One last thing: avoid controlling other's roleplay. You said that the other boy's room is three to the left of yours, which controls his RPC in some small way. Keep it simple...only describe the actions of your RPC, without controlling the others.))  

[kisuke hyoujin]

An older man, the dorm head, appeared in the doorway, as Noiru went to close the door. He looked slightly confused, looking at her, then in a barking voice relayed her orders.
"Noiru Jeishi is to report to the Virtual Reality Testing Center A.S.A.P. for his preliminary exam!"  

[Zed365]

201...202....203...204! here it is! *opens door*  

[kisuke125]

When he opened the door, the dormhead was standing on the other side. "Virtual reality testing center! Double-time soldier!"  

[Saurn]

Sneaking past the dormhead he lays the suitcase on his bed. sees noriu walk away

unpacks picture of family lost in the colony drop and puts it beside his bed
finishes unpacking and walks around the academey  

[kisuke hyoujin]

Some random girls cross his path and look back giggling. The dormhead uses this chance to jump out and bark at him "Get to the virtual reality testing center for your preliminary examination!" He walks away grumbling something about "Trying to sneak past me...."  

[Saurn]

ugh (thought i was better than that) walks to VR room  

[Zed365]

*Toshiro walks back into the dormitory, cookies in tow.*

Oh! i just remembered! in all this confusion, i for got to unpack!

*Toshiro walks back into his room. the door closes quickly, nipping his ankle a bit. and secluding him to any other important/fun things until summoned*