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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:05 pm
The Chronicles of BlackwindBy: Shiguya Retomasi Category: Pokemon Genre: Romance/hurt/comfort Status: Incomplete Rating: M for language, violence, innuendo, and themes Disclaimer: I don't own Pokemon Summary: Fate is not always kind. Sometimes she stacks the cards against us, making life nearly unlivable. Yet, even in the worst times, love can bloom. For one unlucky Umbreon, the journey to find his true calling has just begun.
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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:07 pm
Well... there were three more completed sections to this story, but after picking up a beta... we decided that the story could be a lot different. So, a large section of what I have done needs to be rewritten, meaning that it's going to take some time for this to continue. I'll post progress reports when I can.
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Posted: Mon Jun 16, 2008 6:09 pm
The fires burned low, casting an eerie glow through the clearing; the flickering light illuminating a scene of chaos. A lone Flareon was fighting for his life against a pair of Mightyena; his bright red fur streaked with mud and clotted blood. His attackers were equally injured; both of them bearing fresh burns and bites, yet the two black dogs were faring much better than the Flareon. They were used to the pain, being the elite hunters of their pack, and you don’t get there without a more than a few scars.
The three were locked in a deadly ballet of attack and counterattack; each determined to win. The Flareon, growing desperate for escape coughed out a thick cloud of smoke; blanketing the area in a choking haze. He then ran toward the largest of the fires, his breathing becoming labored from the exertion.
He was a few feet away from the burning brush when a large shadow ball struck him dead in the back, fracturing his shoulder blades, and sending him tumbling to the blackened ground with a sickening crunch. The Flareon skidded across the ground, dirt and ash grinding into his wounds.
He whimpered pitifully as the pain coursed through his body, leaving him immobile. He closed his eyes and waited for the cold embrace of death to take hold, hoping only that it would be quick. He could hear heavy footsteps approaching where he had fallen; they weren’t bothering with stealth this time, as their prey wasn’t going anywhere.
The Flareon shuddered when he felt the hot breath of his attackers along his neck; he feared what they might do to him before killing him much more than dying. Rumors of Pokèmon, both male and female being raped horribly before being torn apart were rampant in the forest, and his attackers looked the type to do it.
“You were hard to find,” the first Mightyena growled darkly, ignoring the heat. “But we did. Reaper will be very pleased…”
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Posted: Sat Aug 09, 2008 10:37 pm
*claps hands, rubbing them together briefly* All right, I finally broke into new territory (that being past the first two stoies that were simply revised, and into the first 'new' chapter piece). Things are going to get far darker from here, so it's safe to say that if you're not one for tragic romance, you should (if you're even reading it, as I can't tell) be warned ahead of time. Beyond that, I'm going to keep pushing hard at this, and hopefully within the month I'll have more updates completed and beta'd.
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