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 Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 5:37 pm
Brandy (without the hat)  She wears this  but instead of the skull on it she has this  with this (The hood down) on over it  BlackLeaf 
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:44 pm
Name:Brandy Margin
Birthday biggrin ecember 20th
Age:18
Height: 5'4"
Build:skinny
Ethnicity:caucasin(I can't spell)
Eye Color biggrin eep Green/Blue
Hair Color:blond
Hair Style:long in the front and short in the back
Jewelry:necklace with random keychains on it.
Piercings:none
Status:none
Orientation:Heterosexual
Type:Tall/or short handsome emo boys
Personality:Nice when has to be,but Rude,Sarcastic,and mean at heart and openly says all thoughts,Can't keep a secret.
History:Lives with her rich family,Dad and little sister,had a good life,and was Spoiled when she was little so does not listen to anyone,and and found Searan by her father cause she was troubling herself with work she also has a all black kitten she named BlackLeaf,who she carrys everywhere.
Position:customer
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 12:45 pm
▪ Progress & Desired Artist
Doesn't care they all draw good.
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 6:29 pm
All right, edits for Brandy are as followed:
Greenfire is a really unrealistic name. It's a fantasy name. Go for a modern day name like Michaels, Black, ect.
There are currently no job openings at Searan's, so her history will have to be changed. You can only get her as a Customer, which means she has to be from a wealthy family as well.
Following a kitten to Searan's is also illogical. <3 She can have a kitten, but the part in her History that states she folowed a stray kitten to Searan's will need to be changed.
Also ~ If she's to be a customer, just keep in mind that she can't be rude to the Hosts, or she'll be kicked out of Searan's.
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Posted: Thu Jul 03, 2008 7:38 pm
Okay, your history still mentions her having a job at Searan's, so that will need to be fixed.
<3 Also, need to see her clothes, refs and stuff. -FORGOT THIS PART LUL-
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Posted: Fri Jul 04, 2008 9:08 pm
Okay, she still needs some edits. Her outfit isn't appropriate for a customer. I'd appreciate it if you used real life references, or write out a description of what she wears. When figuring out what she would wear, think: "What would Brandy wear when she's going out on a date?" She would dress nicely, most likely in a dress. :3
Also:
"Ordering Rule #11▪ Ages must be 17+ for strays, 18+ for everyone else. Anyone under 21 cannot be at the bar or drink alcohol."
She needs to be at least 18. :3
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 11:03 am
The dress still isn't appropriate. :3 How about looking through Profiles and other quests, in fact, to get some ideas and a better feel for what Brandy should wear when going to Searan's Host Club?
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