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 Posted: Fri Jun 27, 2008 9:24 pm
A small collection of little stories I write from time to time. Suggestions are nice.
Rain.
I rest my head on the damp window still, peering outside suspiciously. Darkness and melancholy clouds is all I see. I gaze into the wonderous deep grey clouds, its tears fall through the sky and splash onto the ground below. Then the cloud creeps away, leaving behind a sky of enchanting colours.
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Posted: Thu Jul 17, 2008 8:32 am
i like it. c:
it may be short, but it's very descriptive and you got out all that imagery in four sentences.
nice work, Amy~! ^^
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-Exploded Jellibean- Crew
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