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 Posted: Tue Jul 01, 2008 1:45 am
Schizophrenic character. italics are thoughts/speech. They are in Hunter's mind.
Mikal shoved Hunter out of the way as he took over. Hunter's body Howled again, going from light to dark, which reverberated off the alley and was unmistakeable. The form of Hunter was up in an instant with the broadsword out. Who was that and where the hell did it come from?! Mikal stuffed the maps hap hazardly in Hunter's pocket and chased after the motorcycle. Maikal's eyes glowed as he ran as fast his paws could. Snarling, saliva dripping from his fangs, broadsword raised he prepared to swing at the cyclist.
Hunter was not fully paying close attention, he was focused on what Mikal was saying, almost in an hypnotic trance. The shove sent his rolling, his head smacking the ground with a skull cracking thud. Sparks ignited in his eyes as the shooting pain now overtook him. He yelped on impact. Hunter sat up and placed a paw on the now raising lump on his head. The pressure sent more shockwaves of pain through his body. His breath now came in gasps as he squeezed his eyes shut. Damn you, Mikal. Hunter climbed to his paws and swayed dangerously. The sparks now turning into stars and the room starting to spin. M-M-MIKAL! Hunter screamed Where in hell are you? Hunter shouted, stumbling around in the vast emptiness of his own mind. The room that he stood in, what simulated an never ending space, a void. Mikal was nowhere to be seem. Hunter dropped to his knees and panted hard, for air that refused to fill his lungs. The room still spinning. Hunter forced himself to imagine a waste basket in which he hurled. When he finished, he forced it to disappear. Hunter felt better but the pain from his skull was still ever present. Hunter concentrated and the pain in his skull lessened until it was gone. Hunter gasped again. He was glad that he was in the recesses of his own mind and not out in the real world because he could not perform such mental magic. After regaining his composure, he made his way for where Mikal had dashed off to. He wanted to see what made Mikal bolt off and nearly kill him.
When Hunter found Mikal he was running after something with broadsword raised high. Hunter remembered hearing a loud crack of thunder before something leapt in front of him. That must have been when Mikal took over. Hunter was not sure wether or not to let Mikal control what happened next. He was ordered not to kill the innocent, but who was to say that Mikal was not in a bloodlustful rage. All he would have to do is wait.
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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:50 am
why is the writing in two different colors? also ,paws? Are these people humans, large dogs, or half n' half?
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Posted: Sat Jul 05, 2008 8:52 pm
Hunter is schizophrenic, Mikal is Hunter's other personality. two colours, two different characters. I forgot to meantion that I have been doing anthro stories for about 4 months.
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Posted: Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:38 pm
Okay, here's where you got sort of confused about my questions. Is he human (normal body, all male components redface ) or is he doggy (one four legs but can carry a broad swoard?!?!) or is he a half n' half( kind of furry but with opposable thumbs ) or does he just go half and half when he's Mikal. If it's none of these please explain. I'm trying to visualize the character and am having a hard time.
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Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:30 am
Hunter is anthromorphic. A dog with Human components.
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