Hey all!
First of all: Sorry about the look, I left Gaia for a while, and kind of let my friends raid my account. So bear with me while I work on getting gold back to get a cute avi.
Secondly, I am in the middle of writing a story. There are two main characters; Sean, and Alex. Alex is a girl, it's short for Alexandra. And I wrote their first kiss scene, and I would like some feedback on it, if you could help, that would be amazing.
Before you read it though, let me give you a quick summary.
Alex has lived in California since she was born, Sean moved into the house across the street from Washington. His step brother Derrick really likes Alex, and Jessi, Alex's best friend, really likes Derrick. Alex likes Sean, and Sean likes Alex. And, in this scene, they were at a barbecue Alex's mom was having, and she was showing them around their house, and they stayed behind in her room for a little bit. So, here's the kiss. Please let me know if it's good or not.
We leaned in closer, and closer to each other before we were kissing. I grabbed his hand, and he wrapped his around my waist. His lips moved perfectly with mine. He tasted so sweet, and so amazing. My heart was going faster, and faster as every second ticked by. My free hand reached his neck, his hair tickled my hand.
I pulled away when I ran out of breath, keeping my forehead on his, and one hand on his neck.
“Sorry.” He mumbled.
“Don’t be.” I said, kissing him again.
