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A Place [[Poem]]

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Simplyhardcore

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Posted: Mon Jul 07, 2008 12:42 am

This is a poem I made when I was in a deep depression... It may sound a bit "emo" but I've gotten some good feedback on it, so I'm guessing it must be good in some way... anyway, hope you enjoy it ^^

A Place

I think I want to die
I can't get this out of my head
When I look in the mirror I see that I'm dead
I wish I was able to see past this life
To end all the pain the grief and the strife
I wish I could go to a better place
To heaven where angels will kiss my face
A place where I can feel at home
A place where I am not alone
A place where I am appreciated
Instead of a place where I am hated
A place where I don't hurt inside
A place where I don't have to cry
But in this world...
That place is a lie