Writing Contest --considering closing and trying later....

[Delsus09]

My entry info:

Person speaking: Tamama

Gaia name: Delsus09
P.S pretend the smileys are pictures
MY ENTRY:



...Today sergeant Keroro again, failed his evil scheme. as usual, i went and got to eat snacks!! here's a picture of what one of the cookies i ate looked like:
domokun

i keep on having this strange feeling looking at it, but it was yummy!!
i then noticed that Kururu, Dororo, and Giroro had all their stuff blown up!!
Kururu's computer exploded and made a weird screaching sound, Dororo's crops died, and Giroro couldn't figure out whether his gun shot lasers or fragged stuff! it was hilarious!!
TAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMA!!

Next, i wanted to try and get that evil woman off Keroro..yes..YES...he's all mine!! TAMATAMATAMATAMA!!

First, i tried to bake some cookies, but then a cat ATE THEM!! AHHHH! THE AGONY!! Then i tried to make a rice cake, but it popped and blew me up!! it kinda went like this:

mrgreen arrow eek arrow burning_eyes arrow xp

(eating a cookie, so grammer doesn't count at this 1 part) An den i mead a
(gulp) a starfruit with whip cream!! yummy!!i took a quick sample right when i tried to bring it to keroro in a neatly done box, 566 suddenly came up, took it, and left!! why is this happening to meeeeeeee?? i feel like i'm going further away from Keroro every second...NO!! I CANT LOSE TO THAT WOMAN!!
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er...oopsy...

well, today was an average day, OOH! LOOK!! A COOKIE!!

TAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMATAMA!!





(Lol, i hope you liked it. it was REALLY hard cuz of the tamama impact part. LOL, [also, i wanted to seperate the paragraphs sentences, lol, thanks])  

[andrewaq]

__I Sgt. Keroro was testing my skills camping at a great state park. It was was to easy. I decided to go hiking. i chose a five and a half mile stretch of the Appalachian Trail AT for short. Well i got on some old logging road instead by accident. i was hopelessly lost but with determination i kept going.
__ About halfway down i saw a bear. it was up in a tree it jumped down thirty feet landing on its paws. then it charged i blasted it with my kero ball it exploded with the loudest and screechiest sound ever.leaving behind green globs of bear guts. i was so startlingly hungry i sampled it.it was delicious just like rice!
__ i kept hiking and the trail vanished i was scared out of my wits. i found a stream followed it until i came to a road. i came out and 7 beagles started barking at me 1 was nice and followed me then started leading. Then 2 big dogs jumped out of nowhere and growled so i turned around. I saw a man who said i was in Cleavland so i went on and another dog tried to eat me they must like frogs. i finally got to the highway and started hiking to get back to camp. i hiked 3 miles up the highway finally finding Tamama who had transportation and gave me a ride. but that was the worst hike ever!!!!!! crying  

[Tyku Kimorasu]

My character: Giroro


_"Foolish Natsumi-dono, making me do her chores while she's gone... She will regret this..." Keroro said, slowly running the vacuum across the carpet floor of the living room, picking up spilled rice grains. "Heh, heh, heh... Those children are like puppies compared to me... I will whipe out their whole house if I wanted!" He raised the vacuum in the air and tossed it across the room. "They can't control me!"
_"Kukukuku... I press!" a voice said as Kururu slowly levitated to the ceiling. "Gah! Let me own this instant! Let me down, let me down!!" Keroro demanded as he scrambled about the ceiling. "Kukukuku... I've done my calculation leader, and so has the rest of the platoon..." the voice said again. "Eh? Ku-Kururu, is that you?! Help me down! Help me down!" Nobody answered. "Wait... what calculation, Sergeant Major Kururu?" Keroro asked. "Kukuku... We've all decided that you're holding us back. You're the reason why the invasion has gone nowhere. We're getting rid of you."
_Just then, I came into the scene. Seeing Keroro on the ceiling like, I figured I should leave before I got caught up in any of the mess. "Giroro! Help me dooooown!!" Keroro shouted to me. "Keroro, you idiot! Why are you up there?!" I shouted back at him, rather annoyed. "Be-be-because!! Help! Kururu! Let me down!!" My eyes fixed on Kururu after he said that. "Kururu! Let him down right now!" "Kukukuku... Make me."
_ I leaped ran to the yellow frog and held my gun onto his head. "Erm...Giroro..." Keroro said. I looked up at him. "What?" "He's gone..." He was right. When I looked at what I was doing I, um... "Giroro, get off of me! " Natsumi demanded with fury in her voice. I hurried off of her, nlushing, and scared out of my mind of what would happen to me. "K-keroro!" Natsumi shouted. "Natsumi-dono! I knew you would save me!" Keroro said. "Hmph. After what you did to my vacuum cleaner?! Never! “ and she stomped away. Then, Keroro walked in, speaking into a walkie-talkie. “Mission complete,” he said, then hung up. “I really should me the leader instead of you, Keroro. Kukukuku…” Kururu murmured, arms folded. "Kururu! You mean you're up to something?!" I questioned. He looked at me and said, "Keroro isn't our leader anymore. You're gonna have to deal with that from now on. He's constantly distracted from model making and manga reading. We haven’t done anything towards the invasion that was a success."
_ "What?! You mean you're abandoning him because of that?! I can't believe you!" I shouted and ran out the door. These people were insane! They would leave their leader like that! As much as I agreed with that… That just wasn’t the job of a soldier..! Just then, the ground began to rumble. That didn’t sound too good… I fell down the stairs I was climbing and landed on my head. “Ow,ow, ow, ow…” I said to myself, rolling across the floor. Tamama and Dororo ran out and up the stairs… No idea where they came from! “Where do you think you’re going?” I asked him, but he had already jumped out the window… Wait… They jumped out the window?! I scurried up to find them on a giant robot! “Kukukuku… Come on aboard, Giroro.” “Kururu! Stop it! You’re destroying everything in sight!” I told him. “I know.” He replied. “I press.” A bomb launched across the neighborhood and landed in the park. “Ku-Kururu! What are you doing?! Stop this foolishness now!” I leaped out of the window and face planted onto the ground. “Ow… Geez, Kururu… What makes you so evil…?” “Kukukuku… I press.” A bubble shield formed around, stopping me from escaping. “Dororo, do something…!” He shook his head and turned away. “Tsk…” I don’t know why I was so against this, even though I would originally be happy for this invasion… Just abandoning Keroro like that seemed so wrong… So I was mad!
_Kururu’s robot stomped on my face and continued walking and trampling over every human and house in its path. “Tsk! Kururu…! And even Dororo… Is Tamama in there, too? “ I sat down on the ground and drew pictures in the dirt. “Giroro?” I turned and saw Natsumi standing in the doorway of the backyard. “Natsumi? Natsumi!!” I ran and jumped in her arms. (aww… a dream come true…!: “Natsumi!” Natsumi threw me down and folded her arms. “Hey, what’s going on?! There’s a huge whole on the side of the house! And that stupid frog is on the ceiling!!” “Eh heh heh… Well… Kururu kinda…” I couldn’t speak, for I had just HUGGED Natsumi… and my head collided into her chest… Nay~! Then Fuyuki ran out. “Natsumi!! There’s a whole in the wall! Something must have exploded!” he panicked. “Eh, heh, heh… Well, ya see, Kururu kinda went crazy, and um… causing the hole and the Keroro and stuff… “ Then, running by was an old man with a giant lollipop shouting “FREE SAMPLES!!! COME GET YOUR FREE SAMPLES!!!” Then, suddenly running out, came Keroro, who was shouting, “My samplesssssss!” In front of his feet, was a disaster waiting to happen. In what seemed like slowmotion… Keroro stepped on… A BANANA PEEL!! “Bwahahah!” I heard. Then, Kururu fell onto my head! “Kururu, you idiot….” I growled. “Kukukuku…. Uh oh…” he laughed. “You’re gonna get the pounding of your life time…!” And so, that’s what I did. Oh, and how did Keroro get off the ceiling? Well, Moa-chan came along and helped… So yeah… and Kururu seemed to be hovering over me…. Spying… anyway, I guess that’s it…





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