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 Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 10:08 am
I learned this is another guild. It's fun. Here's how it works
Someone posts a piece of literature, written by them personaly. Then they leave anyother topic for the next person to write about.
I'll start:
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Powerless
drawn from society
from people
from life
no control
You soul is pulled away
your sense of being is destroyed
just when you know everything
it all changes
power is disconnected
You thrown down
on the ground
ground life
breathless
breathing slightly
heavily
hushly trying
Just when you think its over
it turns on again
on going pain
nothing and no one to go to
hope is dismantled
lifeless
belief is beheld
Un believeable by others
not you
youve been through it all
having it taken away
your driven to pain
that memmory
forever
You were powerless
knowing what it is
how it feels
no one else knows
your the beholder
Believe
Next Topic- Broken Heart
** the next person who posts will have to write about a broken heart.
Poems are the easist to work with***
Have fun
NEXT TOPIC- BROKEN HEART
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:43 pm
How do you tell someone the world is all a lie?
How can everything go wrong when everyone else is alright?
Is it my heart that's stupid for holding on when everyone lets go?
If you were to ask me how I got through it, I honestly don't know...
All I remember is waking up from a dream
it must of been a dream because that was the moment that I
lost everything...
but the world kept spinning
the days kept coming
and he was gone and
and the pain was unending
it's not fair
to lose everything
and still be expected to hold on
not when he's gone
not when he's missing
not when reality keeps
on dismissing
the pain, the shame
if love's just a game
then I'm just saying
I'm done playing.
So does this make me a bitter person for choosing the path that I chose?
Does this make me a hateful woman, for picking the thorns over the rose?
It wasn't me who decided to make my world a throbbing awareness
of all of my faults,
the hole in my heart is the one fault he put there so
it's not fair
to lose everything
and be expected to hold on
it's not fair to give everything
and find out you were wrong
not when he's gone
not when he's missing
not when the world keeps showing
everything
all the love
all the joy
every girl and boy give eachother
If love is a game I'm just saying
I'm done playing
If the world is a game I'm just saying
I'm done playing
If life is a game I'm just saying
I'm done...
WOW this was a doozy, long, unedited, and totally written on gaia to answer lovehina's broken heart challenge. Please forgive me, I'm not usually one to use this style of writing but I had a song in my head so see if you can turn this into your own song. Anywho, my challenge is...(drumroll)...
Control, pressure, stress. (You get the idea?)
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Posted: Sun Aug 10, 2008 5:06 pm
Think... Then Link
Control Pressure Stress
3 words
Nig meanings
Stop and think
Control
Power
Meaning to others
Mean, maybe
Anyone, no
Some, only beholders
Now
Think again
Pressure
Peers
Pittiful
Build up bursting
Uncontrolable
Now
Think Again
Stress
Extreme
Over worked
Some not others
By all, underestimated
Under pressure
Serves the cause
Now
Link
Control causes pressure
Un-breakable
Pressure causes stress
Un-beatable
Stress starts power, control
Overall
Decided By you
Choose your path
Think ...
Then Link
NEXT TOPIC- Eclipse
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Posted: Tue Aug 26, 2008 9:34 pm
Full Circle...
Cover.
A shadow.
What am I to you?
I have returned the favor...
Are we equal?
Never.
No.
It isn't fair...
Smaller than me...
But never my equal.
Why?
Darker, colder....
Bigger, brighter...
You.
Me.
Me. You.
The cycle repeats...
Why?
Love, bright, power.
Love, cool, will...
The never ending cover.
The constant shadowing...
Hmn... That was actually pretty old... Sorry if it bites... I still like it. ^.^
Okay, here's the nest one: Seperation anxiety.
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