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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 6:06 pm
Gaia Name: Deathkyo
Character name: Hytarin Smith
Status: Student
Age: 16 (elven years)
Gender: Male
Race: High Elven
Appearance: Long natural blue-black hair that covers the left side of his face no matter what he does to stop it. Wears a dark hooded tunic (color changes as days go on). dark leather pants that are held up by a belt not noticeable from his tunic. Soft black leather shoes. Also he has black gloves that cover a scar on his left hand. Height: 6”2
Strengths: He is stealthy, quick running, and he is very agile. Since he is Elven he is nimble. Capable at wielding multiple weapons(holding them is another thing).
Weaknesses: A lot more fragile than a human (not as tough). Afraid of rising up into the air. Very weak.
Weapons: Pair of Long swords. Each handle has his family crest embroided onto it.
Personality: He likes to be alone mainly to study and learn about everything. Hytarin does his best to not get attached to people because he is afraid of losing them and what he does have he would do anything for. He loves to figure out puzzles. Will run away from any situation that seems that he is making a freind or any attachment at all.
Bio: Hytarin is an only child. He was brought up in a small house with his dad, his mother had died at birth, therefore Hytarin never had anytime to meet his mother. His father had given him up for adoption to be a slave or just for other people to take his parenting place. Hytarin meet many humans that had parented him throughout his life. They all died since he aged much slower than them, because of this Hytarin had learned to not attach to people of any race. He was very afraid of close ones death, and would do anything to preserve that even give up his own life. Many trades were taught to Hytarin for he had been a slave aswell as a son to many humans. Not long ago about when he was 14 (140) he had been taken in by a 20 year old human named Jared. Jared was a single,rich,and lonely for he had nothing to do with the rest of his life. When Hytarin came into his life he took him in as a son to him. Yet it took Hytarin a long time to get attatched to Jared. Jared had realised upon his 40th birthday that he had no heir, no one for his money, last name, or life to cary on to. That day he took down two long swords with the family crest embroided into each handle and handed them to Hytarin with the words. "Take these and let them protect you, you shall never be slain while weilding these old family weapons." When Hytarin took them from the man his arms fell to his side and they both realised that Hytarin didn't know how to use these weapons or even have the strenth to weild them. Jared remembered seeing a poster in town that had advertised a weapons school called House Of Bricks. Hytarin was sent there by Jared to learn how to protect himself along with his future family so that his family would not cease to exist.
Extra: High Elves age very slowly: 1 year for every 10 human years.(sorry for the misunderstanding.)
This is not my final copy ive had a case of writers block for some time now and I would like to start the roleplay. More will be added overtime. I will edit it later sorry for the poor quality now I will try to get into the rp.
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Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 6:40 pm
Even being nice with the aging scale, wouldn't he be like 5 years old, given the way High Elves grow up?
How did he get the money to come? How did he get his weapons? Why would he want to go to a weapons school, of all things...?
Color-changing clothing?
"He was very capable of taking care of himself however people had always wanted to help him by giving him a home. This is why he could not stay in one place." <-- those two contradict each other, since if he could get a home easily why couldn't he settle down for a bit?
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Posted: Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:48 pm
I just wanted to point out something with your aging scale. "Extra: High Elves age very slowly: 10 years in equivalent to one human year."
This statement doesn't make a whole lot of sense, you contradicted yourself here. I think you mean that it is the other way around. If so then your character would be a one and a half year old in elf years. Does the character look like a one year old because of the elf years or does he look like a sixteen year old?
Or is it possible that he is 16 in elven years? This would make him quite old in human standards and too old to be a student.
If you could clear this part up a little as well as the things that Andarel pointed out it would be a big help. Thanks.
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Posted: Wed Jul 16, 2008 10:42 am
Lord Andarel Even being nice with the aging scale, wouldn't he be like 5 years old, given the way High Elves grow up? How did he get the money to come? How did he get his weapons? Why would he want to go to a weapons school, of all things...? Color-changing clothing? "He was very capable of taking care of himself however people had always wanted to help him by giving him a home. This is why he could not stay in one place." <-- those two contradict each other, since if he could get a home easily why couldn't he settle down for a bit? sorry for the misunderstanding I must have missed the aging part I had quickly added that on in the end I will change that. There is no color-changing clothing cause that would be just weird/awsome but no. Hytarin changes into those colors so he doesn't wear the same thing everyday.
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