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Mmm, poetry.
  It goes down so smooth.
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Achiba

PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 9:29 am


I haven't written much recently.

But I used to get these sudden lines in my head that I'd jot down and forget about. I've been meaning to do something with them, but I can't think what. I managed to do something with one, but I didn't have a good idea for the rest. So I'd like comments on them and maybe suggestions for what I can do with them? =)

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I'd love to play this emotion out in blues
but my only instrument is the clarinet and
I always thought it sounded a bit too yellow.

I can't be with you because
I see me in you and
I really just want him in me.

My love for you is pure-
ly a matter of convenience.

my heart writes songs that can only be sung in minor keys.
that's the only way it's ever learned how.

My mind's vibrato spoke to your cat;
she coughed up a yarn ball, played with a furball
and shredded my tax forms as my trash can sang
sweet melodies to the mailbox.

I spit bullets at the moon on cloudless nights.
[lead tastes sweeter in the dark]
He was shot down on Monday,
washed his pistol in tears and by Friday
it sparkled - he bathed the walls in red.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 10:47 am


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>Wow, those are really good.<
>So you want ideas of how to put them into little drawings liek the very first one?<


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Achiba

PostPosted: Wed Jul 23, 2008 8:51 am


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>Wow, those are really good.<
>So you want ideas of how to put them into little drawings liek the very first one?<


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Thanks. =)

I don't know. Drawings or photo projects or anything really. I've been stuck. No inspiration for anything in a while and I feel I need to do something so I thought I'd ask for help. =)
PostPosted: Wed Sep 03, 2008 8:30 pm


Sounds from the distant world
Just barely reach my ears
All the screaming, bloody crowds that flash across the news
Become no more than words

You are unbelieveibly mulit-talented.
nomore than facts
My heart has sold it's tears
For the audacity of fear
Lost in the sound
it's own rythmic heartbeat

Saving_a_promise


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Dapper Fatcat

PostPosted: Thu Oct 02, 2008 2:38 pm




i really kind of liek the blue and yellow one.

they're all so perfect.

they flow.

x3

keep it up! ;D
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