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Artemis Scylus

PostPosted: Mon Jul 21, 2008 7:38 pm


Okay, I have an idea for a story and I have the ending all planned out but I really have know way of getting to the end! This usually happens and when I try to get there, the story just falls apart and no ones wants to read the end because they plot sucked so bad! I really would appreciate a suggestion to maybe help me get towards the ending if you all wouldn't mind.

The ending was the main character looking over all that had happened in the past months and everything she had created and finding out that she hated herself for losing herself along the way for her conquest of power. She is about to leave her adviser in charge when the rebellion attacks and the new empire she created is left with no ruler.

If you all would please help me out and maybe leave a suggestion or two, it would be much appreciated. Thanks people! whee
PostPosted: Tue Nov 25, 2008 4:40 am


I think you're leaving your story a bit too open-ended by leaving the empire open to attack - who's going to save everyone now? You could create a sequel with a new character living in a taken-over world that your previous main character left behind? And perhaps bring back that main character as an adviser, herself being too weak to regain her kingdom and needing someone else?

Hinto--Indivar

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