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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:04 am


ok this story is based on the mini story but ruther into the future when athrun turns 18 rolleyes in this fic like the mini story all characters live forever and stop ageing at the age of 21 mrgreen
also i guess their will be spoilers in this for my plans on the mini story rolleyes

right this is only a two chapter story or more depends on my mood i shall try my best to keep this pg13, i've never wrote a fic like this before, throw in away i'm also writing this cause i'm bored sweatdrop

chapter 1

Athrun sits in his room trying to sleep, but, for a while now, he couldn't sleep because he couldn't stop thinking about the girl he loved, Jyusan hime ran, Jyusan has done so much for Athrun all these years which is why he loves her to much, now that sarah is locked up behind bars forever after that last evil thing she did trying to kill empore Ryuuki and sleeping with Athrun a second time,

Jyusan has been helping athrun since he was 14 to raise Hikaru and when he was 16 she also helped him to raise Ryu

Athrun is also wanting to pay Jyusan back for all the help shes given him all these years

someone knocks on athruns door, athrun sits up

athrun: come in

the door opens and rey walks in closeing the door

rey: i thought i'd come and check on you, i'm really worried about you, athrun, is there something troubleing you, if so you don't have to tell me if you don't want to

athrun: i, well nothings really bothering me, it's just well sweatdrop i was thinking about Jyusan, for what shes done for me all these years, and well i want to pay her back that's all

rey: i see, i know, about you having a crush on jyusan, athrun, if you really want to pay her back, you could take her to some where nice like to the hot springs, Jyusan loves going to the hot springs so you could take her out for the day for a thank you

athrun: i like it, thanks mom, your the best,

rey: it's no problem , i'm here to help when you need it, well i'll go and check on the kids, i'm glad they call me Auntie rey chan, but they also need a mother, i think jyusan has been the closet as a mother too them both

athrun: i know, thats why i want to thank her, that evil women sarah, messed my life up, twice, and then she tried to kill ryuuki, yeah i never want to see that evil women again stressed

rey: me either, i hate her so much for what she did to you, she even kidnapped Mayu just to get you to sleep with her mad

athrun: yeah mad

rey: well i'll head off now, i have some work to do, being empress is hard work, goodnight Athrun

athrun: night mom

rey walks off, athrun lays back down trying to sleep again.

rey walks along the hall and enters Hikaru and Ryu's room to check on them both

Hikaru has long cream hair and lavendar eyes, Ryu has messie cream hair and lavendar eyes

rey: i'm glad the kids are nothing like that evil girl, hikaru is a big clutz at time, walking into doors and falling over, and lil Ryu is smart like his father,

rey get's ready to leave and hears a thud

rey turns around and sees that Hikaru had fallen out of bed

rey: sweatdrop

Hikaru: crying i did it again crying

Rey goes over bring Hikaru into a hug

Rey: aww you'll be ok Hikaru, soon you won't fall out of bed any more, i used to do the same thing as a child

Hikaru stops crying

Hikaru: really anutie rey chan 3nodding

rey: yup,

kouyuu walks in

kouyuu: will you keep it down you stupid women scream

hikaru: ahhh the big grumpy granpa is here crying

hikaru hides under her blanket

kouyuu: don't call me grandpa, brat call me kouyuu, you call rey, by her name so call me kouyuu scream

hikaru: waaaa he's scearing me crying

Jyusan walks in

jyusan: don't shout around the kids, no wonder athrun hates you sweatdrop

hikaru: mama Jyusan, crying

kouyuu: shes not your mother brat scream

athrun pulls kouyuu back

athrun: your waking everyone up, and stop shouting at my child stare shes only four

kouyuu: dam brat, i hate you scream

athrun: well if your gonna act like a grumpy old man, i'll just have to send you to a old peoples home stare

kouyuu: how dare you say that, i'm not old i'm 24 scream

athrun: you don't act like it stare

shuuei gets a hold of kouyuu

shuuei: i'll take him out drinking, maybe it will making him sleep lol

shuuei drags Kouyuu along

kouyuu: hey, i'm not done yelling scream

ryu wakes up crying from kouyuu's shouting

jyusan goes over hugging ryu

jyusan: shhh it's ok, grumpy gramps is gone

Ryu: mama Jyusan crying he's scery crying

athrun: i don't blame them being sceared of him sweatdrop

Rey: shoot i have work, Athrun, can you cheer Hikaru up,

Athrun: sure,

Rey walks off to help ryuuki with paper work

Athrun goes over to hikaru

athrun: it's ok, little one, he's gone,

hikaru: really neutral

athrun: yeah

hikaru: i was sooo sceared, crying

athrun hugs Hikaru

to be continued
PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:11 am


chapter 2

Hikaru and Ryu are both fast a sleep, Jyusan walks up to Athrun

Jyusan: are you feeling ok athrun

Athrun: yeah, Jyusan, i'd like to say thank you for helping me all these years taking care of the kids and stuff, so if your not doing anything, would you like to go to the hot spring for the day

Jyusan: i'd love too, but what about the kids

Athrun: i'll leave them with Snow and Seiran, they don't really mind taking care of them.

Jyusan: ok then, well lets get some sleep then night, athrun

Jyusan walks off to bed, so do athrun

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 7:50 am


chapter 3

Jyusan and Athrun leave the palace taking the kids over to the kou house hold

hikaru: mama Jyusan, daddy, where are we going

athrun: you and you brother are gonna spend the day with snow and seiran

hikaru: yay 3nodding

at the kou house

seiran and snow stand at the door

athrun: so you don't mind taking care of the kids till we get back, snow

snow: i don't mind, you and jyusan need some time off, so we'll take care of Hikaru and Ryu

athrun: thank you snow biggrin

jyusan: now you both be good ok

hikaru and Ryu: ok 3nodding

athrun: bye my little ones

hikaru and ryu: bye, bye daddy,

Jyusan and Athrun walk off

kurogane runs up to snow grabing her

kurogane: where did you put my underwear women scream

snow: not in front of the kids sweatdrop they should be in your room sweatdrop

kurogane: there not scream

shuurei: oh kuro i'm washing your underwear leave snow alone

kurogane: ok honey redface

kurogane puts snow down and follows shuurei

seiran: i still don't understand why, my lady, married that guy sweatdrop

snow: yeah, makes me wonder that too sweatdrop

shoka: hey snow can you help me find some peanuts on the floor

snow: no stare

shoka: aww crying

to be continued
PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 9:00 am


chapter 4

at the hot spring jyusan and athrun change into their swim suites, and relax in the hot spring

jyusan: this is good, can't remember when it was the last time i came here, oh this is your second time at a hot spring right

athrun: yeah, 1st time i went i was 10, and i saw something very disturbing that day too

Jyusan: oh yeah you saw what eigetsu did to kourin, didn't you

athrun: yup

jyusan: you know it feels like it's only been yesterday when i held you in my arms

athrun: redface just to make sure, it was my mom that give birth to me right and not grumpy

jyusan: yeah she did, she had you and Luna only honey and Kira where born from Ryuuki and Fai, Kouyuu had the twins and L,

athrun: good eek

jyusan: um redface well i never thought id say this athrun since i knew you since you where born, but, i really like you redface

athrun's heart takes a big beat hearing those words

athrun: nah it's ok for you telling me this redface cause well i really like you too, but i don't just like you, i love you redface alot redface mom all ready knows and shes ok with me likeing you redface

jyusan: aww athrun good thing i stopped ageing, cause then i won't be able to be with you, but i love you alot too,

jyusan cuddles up to athrun

athrun redface

Jyusan: so wanna become my boyfriend then

athrun: sure, redface just means your my very first girlfriend, sarah doesn't count, cause i never liked her sweatdrop

jyusan: i understand, throw you still have two beautiful children

athrun: true, i remember when sarah gave birth to Hikaru and i ran off and hid in the trash neji got lost while looking for me

jyusan: yeah,

jyusan rests her head on athrun's chest

jyusan: you smell nice athrun

athrun: i do redface thanks heart

at the kou house

snow: i wonder if Athrun will tell Jyusan how he feels

seiran: maybe, but he's a very shy guy so who knows, sure he has kouyuu's temper but he can control it alot better then his father can

fai 1: can you help me crying

Shoka pulls fai along the ground

Shoka: aww come on your gonna come peanut hunting with me

shuurei: father eek just buy some from the shop all ready leave fai along sweatdrop

Kurogane: aww but this is entertaining seeing the stupid mage get draged along the ground like that xd

snow: does shoka ever get sick of peanuts sweatdrop

kiyoshi: mom, save me gonk

girls chase kiyoshi, kiyoshi trips over his little sister

snow: sweatdrop will you girls leave my son alone you just made him hurt him self and my daughter, sweatdrop

seiran: our daughter has a name snow xd

snow: i know, it's Izumi sweatdrop

at palace

rey: i wonder how athrun is doing

ryuuki: i'm sure he's ok

Marko walks in all tired and falls on the floor

Marko: teacher hit me for falling a sleep sad

rey goes over to her son

rey; aww kouyuu is a big meanie, well your learning right, on becoming empore

Marko: 3nodding

rey: good, that's my boy mrgreen , i wonder how fai is doing on teaching kira magic confused

in libray

neji: hey, kouyuu kins do you hate our baby daughter or something sad

kouyuu: no, i don't now leave me alone please, i have so much work to do before teaching the prince more on being a empore sweatdrop

neji: fine, i'll take Mimi out side then stare

at hot spring

Jyusan and Athrun get changed

Athrun: right then i guess we'll head back now

Jyusan: yeah,

to be continued

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 24, 2008 2:20 pm


chapter 5

at the kou house

snow: wow you two look happy

jyusan: yeah well we have news, me and athrun are dating

snow: aww, glad your together, athrun had a crush on you since he was a child, you've defently grown up into a handsom young man athrun just like my son Kiyoshi

athrun: heheh your embrassing me snow redface so were the kids good

snow: oh yeah they were really good, they sat and played with Izumi, i'll call for them, HIKARU, RYU,

Hikaru and Ryu come running but Hikaru falls over

Athrun: sweatdrop i hope she won't be a clutz all her life eek

Hikaru: i'm ok

hikaru get's up

kiyoshi: i'm going out for some sake

snow pulls kiyoshi back

snow: i don't want you drinking stare

kiyoshi: but mom gonk dad get's to drink it crying

snow: i don't care, i don't want you drinking sake and getting drunk stare

hikaru: daddy whats sake?

athrun: let's see, well it's a drink, that grown ups drink

hikaru: is it good or bad

athrun: it's bad

hikaru: ok, neutral

ryu: i'm tired cry

jyusan picks Ryu up

jyusan: well we better go then, thanks again snow for baby sitting

athrun hands snow 200 gold coins

athrun: yes thank you biggrin

athrun holds hikaru's hand making sure she doesn't fall over any more
and goes off with jyusan

snow: it's soo cute biggrin

seiran: snow here i got the protection bracelet off dr p for Mayu

snow: thank you seiran, i'll go and give her it

at the palace jyusan puts Ryu to bed

athrun sits Hikaru on his bedroom floor

athrun: now stay here till i get back ok

hikaru: ok

athrun: that's a good girl

athrun leaves the room to get dinner for hikaru

hikaru looks around

hikaru: theres no fun, in here, i'm bored cry

hikaru spots athrun's bed

hikaru: yay

hikaru claims on athrun's bed and jumps on it making a mess of athrun's bed

minutes later athrun walks in his room seeing all the sheets on his bed where now on the floor and hikaru jumping on his bed

athrun puts the food on the table raceing over to hikaru

athrun: hikaru, will you stop please, you've just messed my bed up

hikaru stops jumping

hikaru: but daddy, i was bored confused

athrun: i know but jumping on beds can be dangerous sweatdrop Misa fell off her bed once by jumping on it i don't want you getting hurt sweatdrop

hikaru: i'm sorry, that i made you worry sad

athrun lift hikaru down

athrun: just promise me you won't jump on any beds any more ok

hikaru: ok sad

athrun: go and eat your food, then biggrin

hikaru: ok biggrin

hikaru goes over to her dinner and sits down and eats, athrun starts remaking his bed

Jyusan walks in and see the mess

Jyusan: what happened in here eek

Athrun: Hikaru was jumping on my bed, i just gave her wrong for it, i don't want her getting hurt like misa did

Jyusan: yeah i remember that misa broke her arm by falling off her bed

Athrun: yeah,

Athrun finishes making his bed

but then hikaru knocks her drink over by mistake getting it all over athrun's floor

Hikaru: opps sorry daddy sad

athrun: sweatdrop

Jyusan: i'll clean it up biggrin

athrun: thanks Jyusan, i'm glad i have someone to help me raise these kids, i'm still not very good at taking care of kids sweatdrop i still have alot to learn sweatdrop

jyusan: true but you've been a good father so far athrun wink

athrun sits down on his bed

athrun: that's what scears me, is in case i'm doing something wrong and that one day i'll make a big mistake

Jyusan finishes cleaning and goes over to athrun

Jyusan: you'll be fine, i'll be by your side, now that where a couple,

Jyusan leans over and kisses athrun on the lips,

Jyusan: now then, i'll put Hikaru to bed now she's eatten, i'll take the pletes with me, have a good nights sleep, athrun biggrin

Athrun blushs

Athrun: ok biggrin you get some good nights sleep too

Athrun and Jyusan go into a deep kiss

Hikaru just sits there watching

to be continued
PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 12:19 pm


chapter 6

3 months later well 3 years in the real world
hikaru and ryu are both now in bed, hikaru is 7 years old, ryu is 5 years old, Jyusan goes to athrun's room with tea and chocolate riceballs

jyusan: i brought us some tea and chocolate rice balls athrun

athrun: ah, thank you jyusan,

athrun gets off his bed and goes over to the small table in his room

jyusan: i made the tea and rice balls myself, Shuurei showed me how to make the rice balls earlier

athrun: well they look good jyusan,

athrun takes a rice ball, and takes a bit out of it

athrun: these are really nice, your a good cook jyusan biggrin

jyusan: thanks redface

jyusan pours some tea out for her and athrun

jyusan: well hikaru asked me again on wanting to study on becomeing a offical like shuurei,

athrun: aww, well i guess i could ask father to teach her sweatdrop but then again, he might refuse

jyusan: if he refuses we'll just have to find someone else right biggrin like shuurei, or my brother

athrun: yeah, your right

jyusan: um athrun, i'd like to ask you something redface

athrun: sure what is it

jyusan: um well redface it's really hard to say redface

athrun: i understand, theres something i've been wanting to ask you too which i'm finding hard redface

jyusan: redface aww it's werid that where both shy to say things redface

athrun: yeah xd throw i get my shy side from my mother, eek

jyusan: yeah you do biggrin

athrun: redface well ok let's see, um redface jyusan redface

jyusan: yes biggrin

athrun: you don't have to say if you don't want but i'm gonna force my self to say what i wanted redface jyusan will you marry me redface

jyusan: of course i will mrgreen how about we go to the hotsprings tomorrow and celebrate

athrun: sure 3nodding oh yeah

athrun puts a ring on jyusan

jyusan: it's beautiful athrun eek

athrun: really, mayu helped me pick it out 3nodding

jyusan: aww, oh do you know if snow is still annoyed at mayu, dating Ryuuren neutral

athrun: yeah she is, she got mayu this protection bracelate a few months ago, to stop ryuuren getting her pregnant and stuff

jyusan: aww 3nodding , yeah i have one of those to i got it around the same time your mother got hers, dr p said if we want kids we had to take the bracelet off maybe we should get one for hikaru when she turns into a teenager

athrun: good idea 3nodding well i'll go and get ready for bed then,

jyusan: ok redface i'll see if i can find the words to what i was gonna tell you redface

jyusan watches as athrun changes,

jyusan: redface

jyusan to her self

jyusan: why can't i say it sweatdrop i guess i'm sceared on what he'll say maybe sweatdrop maybe i should wait till he tells me, or i force my self to say it sweatdrop

back to story

athrun: are you ok Jyusan

jyusan: oh, heheh i was just thinking, your 21 now right?

athrun: yeah 3nodding you know theres something on your mind isn't their jyusan

jyusan: yeah sad it's the thing i'm wanting to tell you, i really want to but i'm sceared too on what you may think, you know sad

athrun brings Jyusan into a hug

athrun: i won't get mad at you,

jyusan: really

athrun: yeah, if its a yes or no question then i will answer and won't get mad, i only get angry at father any ways so your fine biggrin

jyusan: ok, well, it's something i wish for, or you could say it's more of a dream, how should i put this, athrun, i'm not sure if you'll be happy with this but, i'd love it if we could have a child together

athrun goes quite and thinks on what jyusan said

athrun: well i guess now that i'm more resposable now with the kids, and i'm pretty much a adult now, so sure thing Jyusan,

jyusan: really 3nodding

athrun: Sure biggrin

Jyusan: aww thank you athrun heart

jyusan hugs athrun

athrun: well you can stay here for the night if you want, and we can try for a child, throw now i'm feeling very nervus redface

jyusan: sure, what about rey san

athrun: mom won't mind,mom was angry at sarah only because i was only a kid still and that she forced her self on me sweatdrop so yeah mom won't mind 3nodding

rey: yeah if you really want to try for a child i don't mind, just remember what ever kid you or the others have, have to call me auntie biggrin

athrun: redface ahhh mom how long where you standing their redface

rey: hm from the begaining 3nodding so your getting married too, congrats athrun 3nodding i'll tell ryuuki sama and see if we can hold the wedding some where nice whee

athrun: redface your embrassing me mom redface

rey: heh sorry biggrin well i'll sort things out i'll leave you two alone, oh if you are gonna try for a baby, please, lock this door in case anyone tries to walk in like that little old man or tantan, you know what tantan is like, he'd even pay loads of money to see two people go at it sweatdrop

athrun; yeah you do have a point there mom sweatdrop

rey: well i'll leave you two alone then 3nodding

rey walks off, jyusan goes over the door locking it

to be continued

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PostPosted: Fri Jul 25, 2008 2:27 pm


Awwww this is a really sweet story! 3nodding I can't wait see what will happen next~desu!
PostPosted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 4:59 pm


chapter 7

after jyusan locked the door, she goes over to athrun and kisses him deeply, athrun raps his arms around Jyusan kissing back,

clotheing drops to the floor as they take each others clothers off

jyusan: aww i forgot that you still had that scar under your rips, is dr p, gonna fully heal that for you

athrun: yeah next week

jyusan: you where brave that day protecting ryuuki and your mom, your mom was by your bedside day and night, can't believe sarah tried to stab ryuuki then your mom jumps in front, then you push her one side takeing the hit, you where so brave, and we were all worried in case you didn't make it

athrun: yeah, i remember when i woke up, mom was crying with happyness and hugged me

jyusan; yeah, well you and your mom are defently very close to each other

jyusan kiss athrun's neck

(aww the whole you know what happens now, so i have to skip it, for the save side ^__^)

next morning athrun wakes up seeing jyusan cuddled up to him, athrun smilies and gets up putting his clothes on and keeping jyusan covered as they had tryed for a child that night

someone knocks on athrun's door

Hikaru: daddy are you awake yet, daddy

athrun finshes getting ready

Hikaru: daddy why is your door locked, daddy

athrun: i'm comeing hikaru

athrun goes over to the door and unlocks it opening the door hikaru jumps at athrun knocking him to the floor

hikaru: yay, so will you take me out later to have fun

athrun: i don't know, hikaru, i might have your auntie mayu take you, i have a few things to do later

hikaru: like what confused

athrun: i have some work to do in the libray after i've been to the hot springs, i'll take you and ryu out together tomorrow biggrin

hikaru: ok biggrin

hikaru gets up skipping away

athrun sits up

athrun: she's getting big, it seemed only yesterday when she thought my father had candy in him when he was a balling ball xd

jyusan wakes up and sits up rubbing her eyes

jyusan: morning athrun

athrun gets up and turns to jyusan

athrun: ah i see your a wake 3nodding

jyusan: i was thinking on the way to the hot springs maybe we should go and see dr p and see if we suceeded last night

athrun: not a bad idea

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 3:12 pm


chapter 8

at dr p's

Dr P: right, i've good news Jyusan, your boyfriend suceed on getting you pregnant, but, your having twins

Jyusan: wow, i'll have to tell athrun the news, thank you dr p

Dr P: i'll come and see you at the hot springs in 6 hours

Jyusan: ok biggrin thanks again

Jyusan goes out side meeting up with athrun

Athrun: what did he say

Athrun puts his arm around Jyusan as they walk

Jyusan: we suceed and where having twins

Athrun: thats wonderful news but, more work for us neutral

Jyusan: yeah, i didn't expect to have twins mrgreen oh well off to the hot spings 4laugh

to be continued

yeah in the doll area, i didn't creat the second twin cause i could find the right hairstyle for it -.- as it has athruns hair style and jyusans blue eyes,
PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 2:39 pm


Awwwwwww kawaii! 3nodding This is just adorable xd lol!

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:25 pm


chapter 9

jyusan and athrun go back to the palace instead of going to the hot springs to be on the save side with Jyusan

kouyuu spots athrun and jyusan walking along, kouyuu throws his book at athrun

athrun turns around grabbing it

athrun: what did i do now, rolleyes

kouyuu stomps up to athrun

kouyuu: cause i'm angry cause your dateing that stupid ran's younger sister scream

athrun: oh so it's taken you 3 months to get angry at me rolleyes come on, it has nothing to do with you on who i date sweatdrop what are you expectiong, are you wanting me to hate women like you scream

kouyuu: grrr, stressed i hate women and you should too, scream

athrun: look, i don't have time for this, i want to talk to mom about the good news stare and i'm not telling you either as you'll just throw things at me scream

athrun shoves the book back in kouyuu's hand walking away with jyusan

jyusan: werid, kouyuu is nice to other people but nasty to women and you sweatdrop no wonder hikaru and ryu are sceared of him, he better not yell at our twins, if he does, i'll sent him flying out the palace stare

athrun: i would too but he never learns i've hit and all kinds for yelling at the kids, but he continues sweatdrop

later in the libray

rey, jyusan and athrun sit and drink tea

rey: so whats the news athrun 3nodding

athrun: um jyusan you can tell her, i'm to shy to say it redface

jyusan: aww, ok 3nodding rey, me and athrun are having twins 3nodding

rey; that's wonderful news 4laugh i have some news too, i manged to get kouyuu to teach hikaru, so Marko will have his niece to study by him,

athrun: that's wonderful news 3nodding

to be contined
PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:28 pm


That's kinda sad that even Arthun's own father hates him sweatdrop then again it is Koyuu were talking about xd LOL! Can't wait to see the next chapter 3nodding Mabey Koyuu-chan is going to be a grandpa....again! rofl

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 6:31 pm


chapter 10

athrun waits out side standing in front of kouyuu, while jyusan changes into her wedding dress

kouyuu: grrr, why do i have to marry you both, why not someone else stressed

athrun: sweatdrop do you think i'm happy about this, cause i'm not, sweatdrop now let's just get it over and done with stare

rey: kouyuu: be nice for once i know deep down you love athrun and mayu, you even cried when athrun was injured badly remember

kouyuu: quit bring that up, i may not get along with them, but that time i didn't like seeing my own kids being badly hurt sweatdrop stressed

athrun: sweatdrop

dr p: you know jyusan is going to go threw labour soon right sweatdrop it might even be threw the wedding biggrin

athrun: hey where is jyusan shes been in her room room for too long

neji: i'll check on her biggrin , Kouyuu watch mimi mrgreen

neji goes to check on Jyusan

mimi: you look funny mrgreen

kouyuu: behave brat stressed you should of been a boy stressed

athrun: now how could you go and say that to your own 2 year old daughter eek just because you hate women part from neji and shuurei doesn't mean you can be mean to mimi stressed

Ryu: daddy looks angry

Hikaru: yeah eek he does

neji: dr p, Jyusan is in labour eek

athrun: does this mean i have to stand out here

neji: yes, you know you can't see the bride before the wedding,

athrun: yeah sad dr p take care of her for me

dr p: i will do, mrgreen it won't be long then you can continue the wedding biggrin

dr p goes off to help jyusan

snow: wow looks like the twins will be born on your wedding day

mayu: mommy look, look

snow: what is it mayu

mayu: ryuuren asked me to marry him mrgreen heart

snow: rolleyes grate does this mean ryuuren will be my son in law eek

kouyuu: damit, another ran even worse, grrr MAYU HOW COULD YOU ACCEPT HIM scream

Mayu: because i love him and he saved me back when i was kidnapped stressed

snow: really kouyuu: leave them be sweatdrop

athrun: sweatdrop well congrats Mayu biggrin

mayu: thank you brother 3nodding

minutes later dr p comes out

dr p: jyusan will be out in a minute she did well giving birth to the twins biggrin

athrun: that's wonderful news 3nodding

rey: aww what she have please tell 3nodding whee

dr p: she had a girl and boy actually the little boy looks alot like athrun but with blue eyes biggrin

rey: awwwwww sooooooo kewi, i have to see whee

snow: rey, you are one werid girl sweatdrop don't forget your parents are here too

rey: i know, mrgreen but i'm sooo exicited to see mini athrun mrgreen

Jyusan comes out walking down holding the twins, jyusan walks up to rey handing the twins to rey

jyusan: hold them till the wedding is over please biggrin

rey: ok mrgreen

rey cuddles the twins

jyusan walks up to athrun

jyusan: after this lets name the twins together biggrin

athrun: sure biggrin , jyusan you look so beautiful

jyusan blushes

jyusan: thanks biggrin

kouyuu: ok, ok, let's start all ready so i can go and get drunk

kouyuu: ok little (beep) Ouch

neji hits Kouyuu

neji: call him by his name stare he's not called little (beep)

kouyuu: grr fine, athrun, will you take jyusan as you wife sweatdrop

athrun: yes i do redface

kouyuu: jyusan, do you take athrun as your husband sweatdrop

jyusan: yes i do biggrin

kouyuu: ok um you can kiss then xp

athrun and jyusan kiss

rey: awww sooo kewi mrgreen

athrun and jyusan go over to rey, rey hands them the twins

rey: let me know what you name them ok biggrin

athrun: ok biggrin

later in athruns room

Jyusan: first what should we name the older twin which is the girl, i was thinking on the name Asuka

Athrun: sure sounds nice, asuka it shall be biggrin

Asuka has dark blue hair and grey eyes

Jyusan: i'll let you name the second twin which is a boy

Athrun: ok, lets see, i'm not very good at names,

Jyusan: you named ryu mrgreen i think you'll come up with a good name biggrin

Athrun: ok, um, lets see confused I know, what about Kazuki

Jyusan: sure, thats a really nice name athrun 3nodding

Kazuki has cream hair and blue eyes

to be continued
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:47 am


Awwwwwww heart kawaii!

Kazuki? rofl Omg that name makes me laugh so hard!! lmao! (inside joke)

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 5:19 pm


lol ^^ kazuki was the first name that came to my head 3nodding

chapter 11

kouyuu sits doing paper work

neji: kouyuu kins

kouyuu: what

neji: i've signed you up for a anger class, your moods are just getting out of hand sad

kouyuu: no there not

Hikaru walks in

hikaru: hey, gramps, are you ready to teach me again

kouyuu: stop calling me gramps and call me uncle kopuyuu scream

hikaru: but sad

kouyuu: no buts, now make me some tea

neji: sweatdrop she's not your maid, sweatdrop

kouyuu: i know, but she's annoying me stressed

neji: well if you like it or not your taking those anger classes stare

hikaru: anger classes confused

hikaru takes no notice while pouring water into a cup and all the watter ends up pouring on the floor

kouyuu: grrrr, watch what your doing brat, you getting the floor wet

hikaru: ah i'm sorry sweatdrop

hikaru finishes making tea

hikaru hands a cup to neji

neji: aww thank you hikaru, you didn't have to make tea for me

hikaru: i wanted to 3nodding gramps here

hikaru puts the cup down

kouyuu: rolleyes thanks i guess rolleyes

Marko walks in

Marko: i'm here to study again sweatdrop waaaaa

Marko slips on the floor falling on his back

kouyuu: watch where your walking, hikaru spiled water on the floor sweatdrop

hikaru runs over helping marko up

hikaru: i'm sorry uncle marko

marko: it's ok, i should of watched where i was walking biggrin

to be continued
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