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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 11:23 am


I've had this idea floating in my head for a while now, it's another one of those Edward doesn't come back after New Moon ones, I know, it's an overused base for a story, but I promise this will have twists and turns of its own! The title might change, but fear not--I know where I'm taking this story! YAY! Lol, okay, read on, and don't forget to REVIEW!

Dance With Me
Chapter One


"Mom, I'm home!" Shouted the young and beautiful Kaci Renee Swan. At the age of fourteen she had already broken several hearts of several guys--and her heart breaking still wasn't finished. Kaci was attractively slim but still had noticeable curves, her hair was a dyed jet black and it was cut short and styled in spikes--those were usually the first things noticed about Kaci.

The second thing usuah no! Haha, well, anyways, glad you read this far! Or you're just reading ahead because this is in bold... anyways, REVIEW! Let me know what ylly noticed was the color of her eyes, while her mother's eyes were brown and her father's were grey, Kaci's were hazel with a tint of yellow in them, most of the time Kaci could be found with her right eye closed in a wink--most girls her age labeled her as a flirt or slut, Kaci just found peoples reactions entertaining.

To make her presence even more noted, Kaci slammed the door behind her. "Oops!" She hid her giggles perfectly, unlike her mother who would have blushed several shades of red and start sputtering out apologies. "Didn't mean to do that." She slumped her messenger back off of her shoulder and rubbed the spot where the strap had been sitting. "I swear that bag weighs at least twenty pounds heavier than yesterday." She muttered to herself as she dragged it across the off-white tiled floor to her mother's study.

Letting the strap fall to the floor, Kaci entered the archway into the study. "Hey, mom, I have some questions about the homework assignment Mr. Grogan gave us today." Kaci said, placing her hand at the back of her head, smiling slightly. Kaci had failed Algebra completely in the eighth grade and both her parents had threatened to take away her dance classes if she didn't pass the first semester of Algebra as a Freshman.

"Uh-huh... yeah... really? Alright... okay, see you then, by mom." For the first time that day, Kaci's face flushed red. She hated walking in on other people's phone calls. Her mother turned around in the chair to face her.

"Okay, what's the problem, Kace?" Kaci shuffled back to grab her math book out of her bag and returned with it, only to drop it when her phone began to buzz in her pocket. She stared wide eyed straight ahead and put her hand to her chest and began laughing.

"Totally forgot I had that in my pocket." Her mother looked just as startled as she had when she pulled her small red cell out of the pocket of her white skinny jeans that contrasted her black sleeveless hoodie. "s**t," Kaci cursed, her mother rose from her chair.

"Excuse me young lady?" She said, placing her hands on her hips. Laughing in her head, Kaci looked up from her phone to her mother. Kaci always felt like nothing compared to her, even though she was almost forty, she still looked young and excited about life, as far as she knew, her mother hadn't even had her midlife crisis yet--while her father had had one almost a decade ago and decided he needed to buy the practically-a-mansion house they lived in to this day.

Her hair had never once been dyed to Kaci's knowledge, still the same chocolatey brown that matched her eyes. Her mother didn't have the look-at-me figure, she was slightly curvy and had a not-so-flat stomach, but Kaci often tired of the spotlight being on her. She also had the mind of a genius--by the time Kaci had turned ten, her mother had published several novels for teenagers under the pen name of Elizabeth Swan--a name Kaci was sure belonged to a character from a pirate movie back when her parents were in school.

"Sorry, it slipped out, won't happen again." She looked back down at her phone. "I'm running late, I should have left five minutes ago, sh--" Her mother gave her a stern look. "Shoot," Kaci improvised. "I'm going to be late for dance!" She raced out of the study and up the marble staircase to her room on the second floor. Quickly she stripped herself of her casual clothes and changed into her dance attire, not bothering to close the window and blinds to make sure no one was watching as she did so.

"Hon, I'm going to run to the grocery store in a minute, want me to give you a ride?" Kaci's mother called up the staircase. Kaci shook her head 'no' as she pulled on her yellow Northern California Dance Academy (NCDA) tanktop with her short black NCDA shorts.

"Nah, I'll run, coach will be easier on me if I do." Kaci called back.

"Okay, have fun." Her mother replied as Kaci was redoing her mascara that had toned down during the day. When she finished, Kaci jolted down the stairs, taking two to three at a time and flew herself out the door, not stopping until about half a mile away from the NCDA Studio.

She shivered as the black clouds blotted out the sun completely, making her pale skin look much paler. A bead of water landed on the center of her forehead as she looked up. "Damn it," She cursed as several followed the first rain drop's lead.

She pressed the bottom for the cross walk over and over again, assured that it had to be busted as the light ahead of her stayed red and cars continued racing by her.

"Alice?" A voice came from behind her while she was shifting on her feet for what seemed the billionth time. Kaci turned around, taking aback by the man who stood before her.

His hair was blonde and he was built like someone prized in the NFL. For a moment Kaci forgot he had spoken, she forgot completely where she was. She could feel her heart racing, but in seconds she felt calm.

"Uh, no, sorry." Kaci said in a rush. "The name's Kaci--Kaci Parker." She stuck her hand out for a shake, but the football player guy only stared deep into her eyes.

"You smell like Isabella." He accused. Kaci lifted an eyebrow at him.

"Well, I was just with my mom ten minutes ago." Kaci felt saliva rising in her mouth, she swallowed it back. The girls at the studio would never believe her about this! Never in a hundred years!

The man's face darkened. "Isabella Swan is your mother?" Kaci nodded eagerly.

"Yeah, why?" Kaci asked, only to suddenly have all her breath taken away as she was swung over the man's shoulder. If Kaci had thought she was cold before just standing in the rain in her short shorts and tanktop, she was beyond freezing when she touched the man's skin. It was colder than anything Kaci had ever touched before, hard as a rock even!

That's when the panic kicked in. She'd heard about girls being taken from street corners all the time--especially from her mother. Only in fiction, her mother had said, Are pretty girls such as yourself rescued from such an impending doom. Fiction and fantasies, Kaci, fiction and fantasies.

Tears rolled down Kaci's face as she realized she would probably be raped and murdered. She didn't want to die yet, she didn't want to have sex yet! I'm only fourteen, for crying out loud! Kaci shouted in her mind, again, all her uneasiness left her and she felt numb. When she looked up, she was sitting shotgun in a rather expensive-looking car--from the interior at least.

Remembering that the man had taken such interest in her mother, Kaci spoke up.

"How do you know my mother?" She asked in a monotone. The man looked at her coldly, and, surprisingly Kaci swore she noticed lust and longing in his eyes, too.

s**t! I'm too young, I'm too young, I'm too young, I'm too young! Kaci chanted silently, hoping someone could possibly save her--but this wasn't fiction or fantasy, this was reality.

"I knew her when she was in high school." Kaci laughed. Surly he was jesting! He didn't look any older than twenty, let alone nearly forty like her mother!

"I'm being Punk'd, aren't I?" She chuckled shaking her head. "Alright, where's the cameras? My mom set this up, didn't she? She wanted to test me, huh? I'm right aren't--" Kaci was cut off abruptly when he pushed his lips to hers. She closed her eyes and leaned her head back for a moment, everything about this guy was perfect, his hair, his body, his red eyes...

Kaci's eyes jolted open, meeting his. She screamed, pushing herself away from him. He chuckled.

"Nice to meet you, too. I'm Jasper, Jasper Whitlock." And just like that, her suspicions had been confirmed--Kaci was now in a world known only to her mother and the creatures Kaci had once believed make-believe. The man before her was a character from many of her mother's stories.

Kaci's eyelids began to feel like lead and her breathing became steady and even, soon she slipped into unconsciousness, his words echoing one last time in her mind.

"I'm Jasper, Jasper Whitlock."

Le gasp! What just happened? Has Jasper suddenly jumped back into Bella's life? Oou think!
(Also, for my Secret Plans readers, this is NOT Nate returning from the dead.)
PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:38 pm


Oooh...I like it. Your a very good writer!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:40 pm


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Oooh...I like it. Your a very good writer!

Thanks! So you think I should continue this?
PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 2:44 pm


Definately! I'm looking forward to the rest.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:56 pm


Alright then, I'll start on the second chapter now.
PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:04 am



Dance With Me
Chapter Two


Isabella got home from the store at about a quarter to six, she had been at the store for nearly an hour and a half. She went to her study as soon as all the groceries were put away in their rightful homes. She picked up the math book her daughter had so suddenly dropped, making Isabella feel like she'd almost had a heart attack.

And when Kaci swore! She shouldn't be swearing in front of her own mother, that's ridiculous! Isabella shouted in her mind. She spun in her chair to face her computer and turned on the screen. She had written a total of one hundred seventy-seven pages for her new novel so far. Being Elizabeth Swan, a novelist without an agent or certain publishing houses to send to, she had no deadlines to meet and could write whatever on her own schedule.

Her current novel focussed on a young teenage girl who's first love dumped her and left--not caring about the damage he'd left behind in his wake. In the end, though, the girl meets several someone elses, some are good, some are iffy, and some are just plain bad. But after another heart breaking break up, someone helps her through it and they end up dating.

Isabella typed in the last sentence of the story, feeling accomplished that her novel was finished. It was based off of her life, yes it was, but no one other than herself, her husband Aiden, and her parents would ever know that, not Kaci, not her son Charlie, and most definitely not her readers.

The house was completely silent, it almost always was. Isabella left her study, slipping her shoes off, and walked barefoot on the cold white tile. She walked to the back of the house and into the backyard, only to be attacked by a sopping wet golden retriever.

"Vanilla!" Isabella scolded as she pushed the old dog down. No one would ever have guessed the dog was well over five years old, not with her energy. The dog smiled loosely at her--a wolfy grin. Isabella felt a pain in her chest--in her heart. She loved Vanilla, she loved her dog terribly, but when she pulled that face, it broke Isabella's heart. She ran inside to grab a towel to dry of her old friend and returned with tears streaming down her face.

Get a hold of yourself, Isabella! She demanded of herself. But she couldn't. The dog reminded her all too much of the life that had been hers decades ago. It was hard to believe that Jacob had been dead for nearly two decades. The last thing he said to her never left her mind.

I never expected to live long, Bella, and I'm leaving knowing that I protected you. I love you, go live your life, don't let me hold you down. It was a famous quote now, though Isabella's name wasn't mentioned, the line just skipped over that part. Her readers knew Jacob as Casey, a rowdy young adult who tries his hardest to just the world--not a werewolf, but a normal human.

Isabella still felt responsible for Jacob's death, if she'd never been with Edward... The name made her cringe thinking it, even years later she still felt as if he took a part of her away, that he'd made her life shatter into thousands of little pieces,

Jacob had done a good job of putting them back together, and Aiden did a good job at keeping them together, but sometimes, when Isabella was alone, she lost it. She couldn't stand life the way it was, she loved her family, but she missed the part of her that once was--the part of her that was before she knew about vampires and crooked smiles.

"There you are--mom, are you crying?" Vanilla's ears perked up and Isabella sat up straight, wiping her face with a dry corner of the towel. She turned around to face her son, Charlie.

Charlie was named after Isabella's father, but that was all that even acknowledged Charlie was related to Charlie. He was tall, well over six feet tall, his hair was a light shade of brown, messily arrayed down to his ears. He played on several of his school's sports teams and now, as a senior in high school, scholarships were piling up for him.

Isabella always felt like she had the perfect children, the two everyone wished for, the protective football playing brother with a 3.8 GPA, and the small and beautiful dancing daughter who excels in everything--except for academics.

Even though looking at Kaci was sometimes hard for Isabella, she still loved her daughter, even if she felt like she was conversing with a friend from long ago. Kaci was just like her old friend, short and pixie like with a certain flow to her step that made everything she did look like dance, she was the perfect reminder for what she had lost twenty plus years ago, and for what she had gained.

"Not anymore." Isabella answered, laughing. She got up and hugged her giant of a son. He was a full foot taller than herself, Isabella standing at five foot two and Charlie at six foot three--if Kaci had taken after her father's height she would have looked like she came straight off of the runway.

Casey hugged his short mother back, rubbing circles in her back with his large hand. He pulled away.

"Where's Kaci?" He asked, pulling his phone out of his pocket with a worried look on his face.

"What time is it?" Isabella asked back, maybe Kaci needed a ride...

"It's almost eight, doesn't dance end at six for Kaci?" Isabella nodded numbly.

"Yeah, wait here, okay? Maybe she's still at the studio helping with the younger kids." Charlie nodded, that was just like something Kaci would do, she loved dance more than anything, she loved the studio, if she could, everyone in the family was sure she'd live there.

Isabella ran out to her car, worried. She grabbed her phone out of the glove compartment and called Kaci's phone. No answer. She tried again, and, again, there was no answer. She sped off towards the SCDA studio, not caring if speed limits existed, Isabella Parker's black mercedes was a blur on the road.

She left her car running in the deserted parking lot and spotted the owner of the studio locking up. In return, the owner noticed Isabella, they met half way in between.

"Hello Mrs. Parker." She smiled warmly.

"Are you the last to leave?" Isabella asked anxiously, the owner nodded.

"Uh, yeah. Where was Kaci today, we were going over the choreography for the district comp, she never showed up." Isabella gulped.

"She didn't show up?" Realizing where the conversation had to be heading the owner's eyes opened wide in fear.

"Is Kaci okay?" The words rushed out of her mouth so quickly they meshed together as one. Kaci had to be okay! She was the best dancer to ever step foot in the studio--she had extreme potential!

"I don't know." Isabella whispered. "She's not at home, she could be at a friend's... I gotta go." Isabella said through gasps of pain and fear. She could feel pieces of her heart being chiseled off.

Where could Kaci be?

Alright, what'd you all think of chapter two? If there's any confusions, please let me know!

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:13 pm


Very good. There are a few grammar mistakes, but I'm a grammar nut, don't mind me...XD

I like the idea of it. Part of me doubts that Bella'd ever get over Edward, though XD...

All in all, very good! =D

-waits for more- <3
PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:39 am


WOOHOO! It's excellent!

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 29, 2008 6:12 pm


Dance With Me

Glad you guys like it so far! I love it that you like it! YAY! Lol, well, here's the next chapter!

Chapter Three


Jasper gazed longingly at the girl beside him. She was small and pixie like, very attractive, upbeat, and spunky--if he didn't know any better, Jasper would have said he had been sent back in time and this was his precious Alice as a human.

He felt as if his dead heart was being ripped out of his chest and being stomped beneath a steel toed boot, for the girl beside him was not his Alice, she was the result of Bella meeting another man. Edward had been right when he said Bella would move on, even though Edward hadn't wanted to be, but that was how humans were, easily distracted by fame and fortune.

His run in with Kaci on the street corner had not been the first time Jasper had seen Kaci. No, it had been the first time she'd seen him, but Jasper had been stalking her for nearly a month now. With her short and spiky hair, her pale pale skin and oddly shaded hazel eyes, she looked much like Alice.

The thought of Alice still brought sobs to his throat, even though he could no longer cry. Jasper believed it to be partially his fault that his other half had perished, if he had only arrived moments earlier, he could have saved her life.

But if Bella had never moved to Forks, Victoria would have never wanted revenge on Alice's new human toy. So it was mostly Bella's and Edward's fault. He wanted to get back at them, he wanted them to feel his pain, and when he had finally found the Parker residence a few months back, Edward's scent was all around it.

Jasper would have no chance of getting to Bella so easily, no, not if Edward was around. He would have to lure Bella away from Edward. Learning Bella's history had not been hard for Jasper, all he had had to do was go to the local market and ask, the town was small enough, larger than Forks, but small enough that everyone still knew everyone.

Jasper had gone to the market on a cloudy day, but still he kept on the sunglasses, as to not arouse suspicion with his blood red eyes. "Excuse me, ma'am," Jasper had tapped an old woman's shoulder as she was reaching for something on a higher shelf. The woman turned around and Jasper estimated her to be at least seventy years old, well, young compared to himself.

"Yes?" She said as she placed a can of something in her cart. "Well I haven't seen you around, you here visiting family?" Jasper smiled, at this rate he wouldn't have to use his power until after he got the information out of the woman.

"Yes, well, no. Friends of my parents actually, Isabella Swan. But we lost her address, so I was wondering if you might possibly be able to tell me..." Jasper lead on, knowing the pathetic mortal would take the bait.

"Swan? You know, I don't know any Swans... Oh!" She exclaimed. "Isabella Parker I believe you mean. She used to go by Swan, but she changed her name after she married. She still uses the last name Swan for her books, but she's Elizabeth then, not Isabella." Unable to hide his curiosity, Jasper let the question fall from his venomous mouth.

"So Bella's married then?" The old woman stared at him wide eyed.

"Yes, but she doesn't let anyone call her Bella. She's been married nearly twenty years now, how did you say your parents know her?"

"Friends from High School," The lie came with ease for Jasper.

"Oh... well, she's got kids, you know, a boy, Charlie, about your age. He's sporty, that one! Guards his sister like she's the queen! Ugh... Kaci Parker," The woman spat the name as if it contained poison. "Her name alone carries such personality! She has no shame! None whatsoever! All she cares about is dance! Dance this, dance that! You better watch out for her on your visit, she breaks hearts like they're going out of style." Jasper chuckled at the warning.

"Yes, thank you for the warning, I'll be sure to keep my heart safe." What heart? Jasper asked himself. The only heart he knew of belong to Alice, and Alice was dead, along with his shattered heart. "Now, could you tell me the address?" The old woman did as she was asked and after Jasper made her very forgetful--so she wouldn't ever tell the Parker's of this little chat.

Kaci Parker. Jasper thought, bringing himself back to the present. The name did definitely have a certain personality to it, and Jasper found that if he rearranged the letters in her name it would become Alice, only missing the 'L'.

Jasper sped down the busy streets and on to the freeway, by the time Kaci woke up, she wouldn't be able to walk home in less than two days.

Jasper had just finished filling up his car--again when Kaci began to stir in her sleep. He quickly paid with the money he kept in the glove compartment a started the engine of his black Ferrari immediately. He couldn't risk Kaci being spotted. Amber Alerts had already been issued, and seeing as ten hours had already gone by and for all that Bella knew, Kaci could be as far as Hawaii or New York by now.

By the time they hit the freeway again, Kaci was wide awake. "Where the hell are you taking me?" Kaci demanded to know, trying her hardest to keep her voice calm, but, with his power, Jasper knew she was far from calm. In her own words, Kaci was scared shitless.

Feeling the need to install the superiority in the situation, Jasper opted not to answer.

"This is a felony, you know." Kaci muttered while glaring at Jasper. She reached to unbuckle herself and Jasper chuckled sadistically.

"I wouldn't do that if I were you." He stated simply, as he motioned to the speedometer. Kaci checked it herself then looked out her window, pushing herself against the back of her seat as far as possible.

"s**t!" Kaci cursed, a tear from fear rolling down her cheek. "s**t, s**t, s**t!" This time, it was Jasper's turn to glare.

"Must you use such language?" Immediately, he wished to take back his words. A smug smile spread across Kaci's face.

"Hell yeah! Damn well must." She snapped, in reply, Jasper picked up the speed to nearly one hundred-sixty miles per hour. Kaci pushed herself farther into her seat.

"Why are you kidnapping me," She paused as she remembered his name and reached out to touch his hand, to remember the feeling she had felt when he had slung her over his shoulder, and even though it had been covered by his thick designer jacket, Kaci had been able to feel his cold, stone like skin. "Oh my god..." She whispered. "Oh my god!" She was mortified.

Jasper gave her an odd look. "Why the sudden outburst?" He couldn't help but keep the sympathy from his voice. He couldn't help but keep thinking he was talking to Alice--minus the profanities.

"You're a vampire." Kaci accused. Surprised that she had figured it out so soon, Jasper drove in silence. "You are... aren't you?" Kaci spoke after a few moments of the awkward silence. Jasper nodded. "So where's Alex?" Alex? Jasper thought.

"Who's Alex?" Confusion filled Kaci once again.

"Well, mom got you right in her books..." Kaci surprised herself with the calmness in her current situation. But something about Jasper made it like that. That's when Kaci remembered that in her mother's stories, Jasper had had a special power. "And you can change emotions." Jasper nodded.

"Right, but who's Alex?" He repeated his question as he continued to drive well over the speed limit.

"In mom's books, Alex was your mate." Kaci paused for a moment and then continued, laughing nervously. "I always pictured myself being Alex..." She whispered. That's when Jasper realized what Bella had done.

Alex. Alice. The names were so close, and so similar, but it didn't give away who Alice was. A wave of depression washed over him, Kaci would always be Alex, not Alice. Only Alice could be Alice.

And Alice was dead.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 1:20 am


I....but....Alice....she.... crying You make Julie very sad! -clings to Alice-
It was well-written, as before! -wants to see more- I'm sure Bella's P.O'd as all crap XD

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PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 7:08 am


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I....but....Alice....she.... crying You make Julie very sad! -clings to Alice-
It was well-written, as before! -wants to see more- I'm sure Bella's P.O'd as all crap XD


My sister says I should bring her back, but that's not going to happen. Alice is dead for sure. Dead, dead, dead. Sorry. Kaci looks like Alice though! And she swears a lot! 3nodding Lol, not exactly sure if that's a plus, though...

Well... you'll see in the next chapter--I hope to have it up tonight or tomorrow morning.
PostPosted: Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:11 pm


Dance With Me
Chapter Four


Isabella sat in the chair she had sat next to the front door. It was well past eight in the morning, and she hadn't had a wink of sleep since before she had dropped Kaci off at school. The day before. Beneath her eyes were heavy bags and stains left behind from tears. Her stomach growled at her, and not for the first time that morning, but she ignored it. She couldn't risk leaving her spot and someone coming up to the door with news. Isabella would wait for everything and anything.

Charlie and Aiden had already left to join the search party, Isabella would have gone with them, but when the police officers in charge of the search saw her... they advised that she remain home in case Kaci returned.

I'd only be in the way...Isabella realized. I'd only be in the god damned way! She wanted to scream. Her youngest child and only daughter was nowhere to be found and Isabella was of no use to help find her--she was a failure of a mother.

A low growl came from Vanilla who lounged next to her. Isabella looked at her as the dog's ears perked up and Vanilla jumped up and ran from the room, her tail down between her legs. Odd, Isabella thought just before the door burst open. Like the Vanilla, Isabella jumped out of her seat, only to land her butt on the floor.

"Where's Kaci?" His velvety smooth voice growled at Isabella. Isabella could only stare.

The pain that had taken so long for her to defeat returned in seconds, everything that Aiden had helped with unraveled. The very heart Jacob had died for filled immediately with shattering pain. Her memory had not done Edward justice, he was more than a beautiful boy, he was a god.

Over twenty years... over twenty years and now you return! Isabella wanted to scream.

"Where's Kaci, Bella?" Edward demanded, slamming the door behind him. He crouched down, meeting Isabella's eye level. Isabella sat speechless for what seemed like hours.

"How dare you." She finally mustered up. "You left me over twenty years ago and now you're marching into Kaci's life?" Her hand darted out and whipped across Edward's cold granite skin. "Stay away from me and my family." She growled through barred teeth, it hurt her more than anything to say that. Because, as much as she had grown to hate him, she still loved him--more than Aiden or the memory of Jacob she feared. While Isabella glared at Edward, Edward glared right back.

"I left for your safety, Bella, I didn't ruin your life." Edward whispered, hurt clear in his voice.

"My safety?" She scoffed. "You left because you tired of me. You left because you didn't love me anymore. You said so yourself. Now leave." Edward reached for her hand and suddenly her heart began to beat erratically. Blood rushed to her face.

"I've missed that." He said, placing his icy hand on her fiery cheek. "You have no idea how many times I've pictured your blush over the years." Isabella glared and stood up, yanking her hand away from his. "You honestly believed me when I said I didn't love you anymore, didn't you?" Edward asked in a monotone. Isabella looked away.

"Why are you here?" She whispered, tears threatening to fall. "Why did you come back?" This time, Edward was silent.

"Well...?" She prodded. "I'm happy with my family, we're all happy."

"It's Jasper." Edward said abruptly, pulling Isabella into an embrace. "He... he wants revenge."

"Revenge on what?" Isabella spat, doubtingly. She'd never done anything to Jasper in her entire life--why would he want revenge. "I've never done anything to harm Jasper, so why should his revenge concern me in the least? If you've upset him that's your own damn fault, if you'll excuse me," She said, trying to pull away, but Edward held her fast at the waste, not loosening his grip.

"Alice is dead." He hissed, pushing away from Isabella. "And Jasper has taken Kaci because she looks like Alice and it's the best way to get to you--the best way to get to me." He spat, glaring at Isabella as if she were nothing. At this, Isabella fell to her knees, her face in her hands.

"Why?" She sobbed. Alice had been her friend before they had left, why had Alice died. "How?" She asked. How could Alice of died? Wouldn't she have seen it and prevented it. "When?" How long ago had Alice died?

"I'm sorry," Edward said softly, sinking to his knees and took Isabella in his arms. "It happened six years ago. Victoria--do you remember her? She was James's mate. Was hunting you and Alice saw it, she knew you were in trouble. Alice went off on her own, probably thinking she could take Victoria on her own, I don't know the details of her death... but... she's dead."

"Why didn't you stop it?" Isabella wanted to know, how come he hadn't stopped Alice?

"I... I wasn't around. I was traveling, I guess you could say. I learned from Carlisle when I visited him four years ago. Esme's been pretty upset, and I feel as if I've torn apart her family."

"You have." Isabella spat harshly.

"Yes... I have. And I hate myself for it, every blasted second since I left you I've hated myself for it. First you, then me, then Alice, then Jasper... Rosalie and Emmett are the only ones who still live with Esme and Carlisle." Isabella nodded, sobbing.

"You're positive that it was Jasper who took Kaci?" She asked through sobs. Edward nodded.

"I've smelled a vampire around for weeks," Isabella looked at him with wide eyes, confused. "I, uh, live just a few blocks from here. So I've smelled Jasper around for weeks, but I didn't know it was Jasper, I thought it was someone else because... his diet's changed." Edward rushed. Isabella stared at him in horror.

"He drinks from humans?" She asked fearfully. Edward nodded. "He'll kill Kaci!" She cried.

"No, no I won't let him." Edward said as Isabella pulled away from him. She looked with her brown eyes into his topaz ones.

"How? You're here--not wherever they are!" She accused as Vanilla ran in the room, growling at Edward. She barked and barred her teeth.

"I've got details on Jasper's appearance; you've already given Kaci's information to the police." It was a statement, not a question. "The moment the sketch artist has got Jasper's picture done, I'll take off in search for them. Knowing Jasper, he's probably in New Mexico or Nevada, seeing as it's only been about twelve hours, I'd say Nevada.

"I'll find them and I'll bring Kaci home, I won't let her get hurt. I promise you she'll be just fine." Edward said, and Isabella knew his promise was sincere.

"You really planned this out." Edward nodded. "Alright, let's get on with this." Isabella pulled out her cell phone and dialed 9-1-1.

Edward took in her features as she did so. She didn't look much different from when they had first met, her features were more defined, but she still looked young. She was skinnier now and her appearance just made her look smart. Despite the bags under her eyes, she was just as beautiful as Edward remembered--if not more so.

She wore jeans and a black tee shirt featuring the logo of some new band that Edward highly disliked--all their songs focused solely on what it would be like to be soulless.

"This is Isabella Parker." Isabella said to whomever it was that answered at the station, breaking Edward from his thoughts.

Edward frowned. He missed Bella Swan.

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PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:31 pm



This one seemed very jumpy-around...-y. XD I dunno how else to describe it, but it was all happened very quickly.

I liked it, but take it slower next time. Would Bella have really just been "Oh crap Alice is dead! -cry- 'Kay, I'm over it." ? That's one thing that struck me as odd, but that's just me...

Can't wait for moreee! =D
PostPosted: Fri Aug 01, 2008 3:19 pm


Juliette06

This one seemed very jumpy-around...-y. XD I dunno how else to describe it, but it was all happened very quickly.

I liked it, but take it slower next time. Would Bella have really just been "Oh crap Alice is dead! -cry- 'Kay, I'm over it." ? That's one thing that struck me as odd, but that's just me...

Can't wait for moreee! =D


Well, she's kinda gone into shock, you know? I've never exactly experienced it first hand, but it'll hit Bella hard later, this story is like emotion on steroids. Lol.

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PostPosted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 4:03 pm


I was more surprised that she got over Edward being there after all those years.
But anyways, I still am a fan!
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