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 Posted: Fri Sep 23, 2005 11:14 pm
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Posted: Sat Sep 24, 2005 12:43 pm
Please go back and read the rules!
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 12:34 pm
Not bad, but it needs edited a bit. There were some grammatical mistakes.
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Posted: Sun Oct 02, 2005 4:33 pm
I like it. it seems a little on the common side but all the same i liked it. I like most poems though.
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