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Nightmare_Tylur Vice Captain
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 Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 3:52 am
I have no idea what im going to write about but Sonja told me to write, SOOOO heres my best.
Nick, a young boy from Drayton, was a Pure genius, he invented so many things, but never seemed to get any profit off of. One of his Most famous inventions is a little robot names TDM-301, TDM is short for Thermal Destruction Machine.
The world had never gave him any respect, NONE at all. he decided to unleash TDM-301 upon the world and soon the universe.
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:13 am
TDM-301, has started its destruction, starting in South America.
everyone starts to freak out, except one little girl names Sya.
Sya, is about 18 years.
her mother hid he in the basement, But TDM-301 found her, Sya wasn't scared of it. she attacked it with all of her might, TDM-301 Backed off, and went away.
Nick, was watching the destruction of the world through TDM-301's Camers, but Nick noticed that TDM-301's Camera was cracked, and he got TDM-301 back to fix it. He then found out that TDM-301 hasn't killed everyone on south America, only one was left, Sya. Nick is 21 years old.
You might think why the police hasn't arrested Nick yet, is because, no one knows that nick was the one who released TDM-301.
The next reply will be the cast list with characters you don't know about yet.
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Nightmare_Tylur Vice Captain
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:18 am
Nick- Nightmare_Tylur
TDM-301- Nightmare_Tylur
Sya- Sonja
TDMD-001-
Nicks Mother, Dorris- Saint_Oriel
The Devil- Saint_Oriel
God- Saint_Oriel
Probably more to come.
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:17 pm
[I have a cool idea for Satan and God (by the way, if I can play them, i'm chaning their name's. 3nodding ) And I play a pretty good little girl, but I think Sonja would prefer that.
Say, can I be Nick's mother? xd "NICK! COME EAT YOUR DINNER!" "MOOOOM! I'M TRYING TO TAKE OVER THE WORLD!" "NICK! NOW!" "Fine . . ." Lmao. Whaddya say?]
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Nightmare_Tylur Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:55 am
sure, im just wondering , How many people are in this guild?
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:49 am
Active or people total? sweatdrop I have to say that of the active people it'd be:
Sonja
Kara (The Red Coyote)
Me
You
And (maybe) Sarah (Yuki's Song)
Yeah . . . Not many people. But don't worry - I make good bad guys and NPC's. 3nodding
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Nightmare_Tylur Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:50 am
this post is probably going to be the worst one yet, but sonja was bugging me to make an RP so im going to try my best.
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:52 am
It sounds amazing.
Wanna start?
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:57 am
yeah, i guess, but iv never RP'd before, im probably not that good.
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:06 am
i want to be a NPC, i dont want to RP, i just made it cause sonja wantd me to, but, ill let you guys RP, cause i dont want to.....( sonja's probably going to hit me...)
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Nightmare_Tylur Vice Captain
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:07 am
First of all, fix your grammar up a bit. Roleplaying hardly ever goes well if a person can't tell everyone else what they mean.
Second, go take a look at some other roleplays in this guild. Particularly the ones with me and Sonja in them. (No offense to anyone else, but Sonja and are the most active, and I just type way too much.)
Third, go join some other RPs. Particularly in the Medieval forum. It'd be easier for you to jump in there, in the Journey to Atlantis mainly.
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 10:23 am
[Okay, I'm going to start.]
Nick thought to himself, "What could have done this?"
He then thought to check the tape, which TDM-301 was recording all while it was destroying South America. Nick groans while he gets the tapes out of TDM-301.
"There must be over thirty hours on these tapes." He groans. "But I must check every last second! Even if it kills me!"
As nick was watching the videos, he saw something move on the tape, when TDM-301 was about to start heading back north.
"That girl, she must have done this to TDM. i must go to Brazil to capture her myself. i should bring TDM with me, just in case.
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 11:19 am
Nightmare_Tylur [Okay, I'm going to start.] Nick thought to himself, "What could have done this?" He then thought to check the tape, which TDM-301 was recording all while it was destroying South America. Nick groans while he gets the tapes out of TDM-301. "There must be over thirty hours on these tapes." He groans. "But I must check every last second! Even if it kills me!" As nick was watching the videos, he saw something move on the tape, when TDM-301 was about to start heading back north. "That girl, she must have done this to TDM. i must go to Brazil to capture her myself. i should bring TDM with me, just in case. [Very well done, Tylur. It also helps to be more detailed. I'll keep coaching you to help you out. Also, in roleplaying like this, it's easier to use past tense rather than present. At least, to me it is.] "NICK GRAYSON! GET DOWN HERE AND TAKE OUT THE TRASH!" Dorris yelled up the stairs, washing the dishes by hand. Nick had taken some spare parts from the dish washer over a month ago to make his latest invention. So, since he took the parts, she was having to wash the dishes by hand. It was very hard being a single mother of a genius.
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Posted: Thu Aug 07, 2008 11:58 pm
Sya walked around the bloody area, no one was alive anymore, she just looked at the dead bodies none of it was cluing into her mind and at that moment it never mattered that everyone in South Africa was now destroyed by one of the tiniest robots every. The eight year old girl walked down the African river, her feet touching the water ever so often and her image appearing on the water's surface. She thought she heard a noise and looked up her senses were soaring after fighting the robot, she never understood her weirdness that she could see and smell different things that no one ever could. She stood there still, hearing the sounds as though she could hear a million miles away. But nothing came out of the brush and she sat down by the waters edge hoping for something interesting to happen, she didn't want to be by herself for along, she hated the feeling of being alone, but at the same time loved it; for no one could tell her what to do or where to go, she was her own person now.
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Nightmare_Tylur Vice Captain
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:29 am
[ummm, its actually in South America.]
Nick finally made it to the little town where Sya was, but he could not find her.
he searched and searched, but could not find her. After a few hours, he heard something playing in the river, he only thought it was a stray dog or something, but nothing more, until he heard it talking. He went over to find a young girl, washing her bloody cuts. every time she touched them she would whimper a bit. Nick went to go kill her while she was bathing, but then had a sudden change of heart, "I can't kill you." He said right to Sya.
"What?! You were going to kill me?!"
"I was but there's something about you that makes me just feel..."
"Makes you feel what?!"
"Loved."
Nick fled from the destroyed, the hollow, the empty world of which Sya's Home.
[ emo ]
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