i'm looking for your opinions on my art.
Constructive criticism is welcomed.
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http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff216/Kyuraku/BattleTorn.jpg-in this picture. i screwed up his arms as i was inking it. where his body and his arms meet, it looks bad. and i really don't like his color scheme. i was really goin' for a demented look in his eye, but i couldn't get it right, so i gave up on his eye, and just shaded in in. and no, hes not crouching, i just didn't draw the rest of his legs.
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http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff216/Kyuraku/Rabbit.jpg-this is just a remake of an evil rabbit thing that i made sometime in 2nd grade. i ******** up on his left foot.
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http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff216/Kyuraku/Piratething.jpg-i'm not entirely sure what this guy is. but i mainly just wanted to get the pose right, i didn't take to much time on the character design. and as a sidenote, i suck at drawing hands.
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http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff216/Kyuraku/Ninjas.jpg-in this picture i'm practicing drawing more then one person in a drawing. i didn't take to much time on the guy, obviously the girl is better drawn. i was originally going to draw him with two eyes. but i couldn't get the eyes to match, so i came up with that weird strand of hair covering his eyes. i messed up big time on his left hand. and i made the sword to long. and with the girl, if you'll notice, her bottom half isn't shaded, i didn't finish. and yes shes very thin, but thats how i draw girls.
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http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff216/Kyuraku/GreenHairGirl.jpg-nothin' to big in this pic. i'm just trying a back position. i've never done anything like it, and i started with the hair, so its probably disproportional. and when i was inking it, i screwed up her eye.
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http://i237.photobucket.com/albums/ff216/Kyuraku/GothGirl2.jpg-i love this character design, its one of the few that i've drawn more then once. but i was really disappointed with the color scheme...well not so much the color scheme, but when you color a picture mostly black. its hard to shade it and it smears so...yeah.
on another side note. you'll notice that none of them have their skin solored in, or shaded for that matter. i didn't shade or color their skin, mainly 'cause i don't have a skin color, and i onl;y shade after i color.
aaaaand. shoot.
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