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 Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 4:56 pm
 I can't seem to get his eyes right. If you could maybe do some redlines over something so I can feex eet, I would love you foreverrrrr. I'll probably colour this in marker. I used the CD booklets from Miyavi's This Iz The Japanese Kabuki Rock and Miyavizm CDs. You can see the covers, although I used the whole things, here and one that looks like the one I used (sorta) here. Couldn't find the right picture since the one I used was inside the booklet. D: GUYS LOOK I CHANGED SOME STUFF. Mainly: added detail the tha braidz, made him smile, fixed his eyes minutely, drew in the flowery stuff on his hat (kill me, that hat is DEATH) fixed his ears, elongated his chin and added the MYV in the corner and on his hat. : D  Yes it's cut off on the side, IT DOESN'T MATTER, CRITIQUE/COMMENTS/REDLINES IF ANY, wanted. : DD As soon as I finish deciding on the colours I'm using I'll scan it and show youuuu. <333  INKEDDDDDDDDDDD <3 Tried to add some shading to make it a little dynamic, what do you think?
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 5:48 pm
they dont look bad there a little dark thou but yea there good oh and 1 pupil is bigger than the other try using this trick my art teacher tought me get an eraser and color the rim of it and put it were u want circle and slightly twist
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:01 pm
Damon_The_Vampyre they dont look bad there a little dark thou but yea there good oh and 1 pupil is bigger than the other try using this trick my art teacher tought me get an eraser and color the rim of it and put it were u want circle and slightly twist Like I said, it's rough, the lines around the eyes will be thinner once I ink, I was looking for help with the shape specifically. The pupils are also rough, they'll be better once inked, they're just there to help me visualize.
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 6:40 pm
I dunno if this is just me.. but when i learned how to draw human faces, I learned that the top of the ear is at the same point at the eye/pupil/whatever about the eye lol.. so I think the ears might need to move down? Gosh I don't know lol... Has anyone else heard about this?
Honestly, I think they look amazing though.. I like it just the way it is lol
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 7:24 pm
Coolcat607 I dunno if this is just me.. but when i learned how to draw human faces, I learned that the top of the ear is at the same point at the eye/pupil/whatever about the eye lol.. so I think the ears might need to move down? Gosh I don't know lol... Has anyone else heard about this? Honestly, I think they look amazing though.. I like it just the way it is lol That's actually true, but this is an exception because it's a portrait. In my references, the top of his ears and his pupils aren't level. In all the pictures I've looked at, his ears go a little higher than his eyebrows. (WEIRDO! hahaa) Otherwise, I would've drawn it like that, because that's how I learned too. But some people aren't built like the average human being. smile
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 8:16 pm
lol yeah i thought that might be the case.. did you type that you had a reference and i just totally spaced out and missed it? O.o; *goes to check*... oh shoot you did.. lol sorry about that!
gosh i need sleep tonight xD maybe sleep will help me concentrate better... maybe more than three hours this time.. >.>;
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:08 pm
Coolcat607 lol yeah i thought that might be the case.. did you type that you had a reference and i just totally spaced out and missed it? O.o; *goes to check*... oh shoot you did.. lol sorry about that! gosh i need sleep tonight xD maybe sleep will help me concentrate better... maybe more than three hours this time.. >.>; Good luck with the whole sleep thing. That stuff has been escaping me too. D:
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Posted: Tue Aug 05, 2008 9:23 pm
ninnerSHARK Damon_The_Vampyre they dont look bad there a little dark thou but yea there good oh and 1 pupil is bigger than the other try using this trick my art teacher tought me get an eraser and color the rim of it and put it were u want circle and slightly twist Like I said, it's rough, the lines around the eyes will be thinner once I ink, I was looking for help with the shape specifically. The pupils are also rough, they'll be better once inked, they're just there to help me visualize. oh well srry hope my advice helps in the future -_-
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 12:44 am
ninnerSHARK Coolcat607 lol yeah i thought that might be the case.. did you type that you had a reference and i just totally spaced out and missed it? O.o; *goes to check*... oh shoot you did.. lol sorry about that! gosh i need sleep tonight xD maybe sleep will help me concentrate better... maybe more than three hours this time.. >.>; Good luck with the whole sleep thing. That stuff has been escaping me too. D: Oh noz D: not you too! I wish there was like.. a magical thing you could eat that gave you all the energy you'd need for the day and more.. =o .. not to get off topic... lol but so are you going to wait until somebody red lines it and then marker it and all that? lol i want to see what it looks like when you do so bad =P
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 9:17 am
Well I'm working on it a bit still, I gave him more of a smile and lengthened his chin, plus lightly decided where the highlights are (it makes his nose looks less retarded).
I have a dentist appointment tonight (AUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUGHHHHHH NOOOOOO DDDDDD wink so while I wait I can work on it. smile
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Posted: Wed Aug 06, 2008 8:31 pm
Damon_The_Vampyre ninnerSHARK Damon_The_Vampyre they dont look bad there a little dark thou but yea there good oh and 1 pupil is bigger than the other try using this trick my art teacher tought me get an eraser and color the rim of it and put it were u want circle and slightly twist Like I said, it's rough, the lines around the eyes will be thinner once I ink, I was looking for help with the shape specifically. The pupils are also rough, they'll be better once inked, they're just there to help me visualize. oh well srry hope my advice helps in the future -_- Woops, didn't notice your post. Stop blending in there. D: It's fine, I should've made it clearer what I wanted help with and that I don't center my pupils on rough sketches. xD
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 8:59 am
 its just not level is all i think, when you start adding shadows and highlights itll look awesome, just so you know, someone else redlined my art work, it made me cry, so if it made you sad im sorry heres teh redline that made me saded: REDLINE OF DEATH crying
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Posted: Fri Aug 08, 2008 9:41 am
Self Epidemic its just not level is all i think, when you start adding shadows and highlights itll look awesome, just so you know, someone else redlined my art work, it made me cry, so if it made you sad im sorry heres teh redline that made me saded: REDLINE OF DEATH crying Oooh thanks, naw you didn't make me cry, I'm gonna try to draw those lines onto the drawing in real life because I'm not sure if I just scanned it crooked.
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